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Ariya FF:"Deception,Intrigue..."#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 (Page 47)

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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 1:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Amri-

Originally posted by Shivi1997

Plz dnt torture us more
plz update soon
yaar we are waiting


Originally posted by Aabish_02

Api plz update kry na


Originally posted by Leki

Amri where are you??????


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Dear Shivi, Leki and Warda,</font>
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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">My deepest apologies for making you wait for so long. Update in a couple of days!!!</font>
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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Thanks for commenting, though. Feels good to know you guys missed meSmile</font>

yaar we missed u a lot
ur story is awsm
hats off to the creative mind behind this story

i so loved ur story (as well as u) that each day i jst checked out whether u hv updated the story or u hv posted any note 4 us.
Thnx god u r back
eagerly waiting 4 ur nxt update

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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 2:40pm | IP Logged
i think new thread is better

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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 2:43pm | IP Logged
me too ..new thread dear...:-)

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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 2:45pm | IP Logged
new thread will b awesome .. Eagerly waiting for update

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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 2:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Amri-

Originally posted by beenish248

BRAVO !!!
Speechless .. Clap
i am hooked to thiss ff man ..
can u belive if i say the way u write no one cane write this kind of story accept madhu di though she hav left IF long ago i am her big fan , and offcourse now urs too ..Big smile
i have read many ff on ariya but ur story is uniqe dear , can't wait to read more plzzz update soon... Eagerly Waiting ..
and do pm me plzzz ... I am sending u buddy req ..,


Yayy! A new reader! I can't tell you how happy that makes me.


And thanks so much for all your compliments, seriously, it's going to make my head HUGE with prideLOL


I am honoured to know that I am one of your favorite writers!!!



I really hope to be deserving of your encouragement in the future updates as well, so please do keep reading and commenting!


Accepted your bud request- will PM you for the next chapter!


Take care, and thanks again!!!


 
 
Its my pleasure to have a writer like u ..
thank u for accepting buddy req ..
seriously i was missing madhu di very much though now she iz back on fb i am really happy ..
Will b commenting on ur story dont worry Smile
waiting for 17 sep till then bye ...
 

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Posted: 16 September 2013 at 12:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Amri-

Originally posted by devildiva21

hey firstly so sorry for the late comment..!! was away for vacations...!!!
just read last three parts together.. and am so glad i could read them back to back.. warna mera kya hota.. anxiety se mar jaati but last update mai bhi itni anxiety de di..!! aise cliffy pe chod diyaShocked
ab kya hoga mera?Cry din raat bas yai sochti rahungi mai...!!! hell i have even started thinking ki arjun ke reactions kya honge??Shocked
the chapters were so beautifully written...!!!ClapStar i have no words to describe them...!!
just love your way of writing...
i could totally visualize it happening in front of my eyes..a s if i was watching the real show..!!!
the way you wrote chapters from arjun riya shree and dustin cohelo's pov.. mindblowing..!!!
take a bow..!!!so beautiful description of emotions ... can understand what each person is going through...!!!
arjun was so shocked seeing riya alive...!!! his heart knew even before seeing her face that the girl is his riya...!!!!
and riya.. she didn't care for her life.. her identity her job nothing... her sole mission at that time ro protect arjun raute...!!!!
both are so much in love with each other..!!
and then shree's emotional burst..!!! 
the guy was so shattered...!!1 never expected this reaction from him.. but when you know that your best friend betrayed you... this reaction was naturally expected..!!!
and sameer and chottu what should i say.. all are equally affected.. by her betrayal..!! Cry
poor guys are having such  a tough time to catch on all this..!!! Cry
and then pov from dustin  cohelo..!!! thinking about arjun and riya... and their pasts..!!
so riya also has some bad past...!!
he knew about  the budding attraction between both..!! glad he has decided to tell the truth to etf and most importantly arjun...!!!!
arjun's pov.. gosh..!!! he was in such a daze... no idea of whats happening.. just moving in all mechanical way..!!!!
his comparison.. of roshni and riya... very heart touching...!!!
and his fb of that koodna bhi hai part..!! awesome...!!!
finally he is back to etf.. i was literally biting off my nails... as he was nearing rathore's cabin..!!!
and there is  riya...!!! everyone has already met... and now its arjun's  turn..!!! but aise cliffy point pe stop..!!! Cry not fair..!!!
can't wait to see everyone's initial reaction on seeing her alive...!!!
precap is interesting...!!
continue soon..!!
eagerly waiting for the next part..!!!
P.S. you rocked...!! keep it up girl...


Hello, Devildiva jii! Nice to see you here again!!! lol glad to be back hereCool


So aap vacation per thi? Hope accha gayaSmile  hmm mast gyeLOL


OMG...how dare I disturb your raaton ki neend? LOL  ab to kar di disturb...LOL ba to update hi neend wapis laa skti haiWink



But seriously, thanks a lot for saying that. Best compliment EVER.  awww my pleasure yar.. seriously your writing skills rock yar...


And what you said-


 "the chapters were so beautifully written...!!!ClapStar i have no words to describe them...!!just love your way of writing..."


Aww, thanks SO MUCH, dear.Smile Esp for the compliment about the emotions. That is my biggest worry as a writer- getting the characters and their emotions right, so it feels great to know I am doing well on that front.
doing well?? you are doing awesome yar



And your detailed note on all the aspects of the chapter- mast tha!!


So the real journey starts from here. Wink Hope you like the upcoming updates!
ohh no worries.. am sure i will love themWinkLOL


Till then, TC!!! u too Wink

update soon...



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Posted: 16 September 2013 at 12:28am | IP Logged
kal tak ka wait aur?Shocked
kaise katnge ye palCry
waiting waiting waiting..!!
P.S. new update in new threadWink

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Posted: 16 September 2013 at 1:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Amri-

AUTHOR'S NOTE


So finally, I am back. And it feels GREAT!!!Tongue


I just returned yesterday night after a very tiring journey. But all this while, I have been checking your responses and PM's on my phone.


I cannot find words to express my gratitude for all the love you've been showering on me. It touches my heart so deeply!!! YOU ROCK, GUYS!!!


My deepest apologies for not replying earlier! My mobile internet was patchy, and I quickly ran out of balance:( But now I have now replied to each one of you individually, please do check them!!!


The next chapter, as I told some of you, will be posted on the 17th of September, 10:00 PM Indian Standard Time. And I promise that it'll be a long and fulfilling one. Hope to see you guys after the update!!!


And quick question: should the update be on this thread or a new one? We are soon going to complete 50 pages, and i am dreading that the MODS will shift it to the Fanfictions forum. So please do reply.



Take care and God bless all of you.Smile


Regards
Amrutha.


cool something to look forward for ...my fav couple one fab story

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