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Ariya FF:"Deception,Intrigue..."#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 (Page 43)

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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 10:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Christeee

omg arjun's emotion was well potrayed
so finally riya is out 
update soon

Thanks, Christeee!!!


Yes, the secret is finally out.


It's going to be a fun ride from now on:)

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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 10:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by riyasarkar007

Originally posted by -Amri-

Originally posted by riyasarkar007

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Hi Ri!!!Smile heyya miss writerEmbarrassed


LOL at your version of the warning. So sweet of youBig smile

trust me i am so embarrassed right now...i was on high last night i guess, such a dramatic replyROFLAngry
Awww...iss umar mein BP aur heart attack? LOL
sb apki kripa hain madam jee...i am booking a ICU room now ...koi bharosa nahi agle update mein zaroorat par jayeLOL

Your comment shows how carefully you read the entire chapter. You got all the nuances and details right. You are surely one of my best readers, ever.

till now i used to get compliment that i give long replies and comment on all part of a update...best reader? aww thank uBlushing

Abb Arjun kya karega- yeh jaanne ke liye aapko ek hafte tak intezaar karna padega. But one thing is certain- he is certainly angryOuch But he is also trying hard to conceal it. What he will do with Riya is a story for another dayWink

7 days? nahiii (hema malini style) ROFL yeah he is...omg i am now scared for riya...will he kill her?Ouch what if whole ETF strangle her? omgROFL what he will do? errrOuchOuch

And I am really glad that you liked the ending. Hope the suspense and the build up was good enough.

it was freaking awesome!!! told u na i just survived near heart attackLOL i am not so faint hearted u know...it was fabulous!!!
And I will obey your request for a full-on confrontation between Ariya in the next chapter. I can't believe i am saying this- NO CLIFFHANGER.

full confrontation??? gosh pls let me survive that updateLOL no cliffhanger? yayyyROFL
Teen parts honge agle chapter ke. Aur usme woh sabb hoga jo aap chahti hein. Till then, take care:)
yes...buhahahhahahhhahahahhaa LOLLOLLOL
sayonara...hasta la vistaEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
my replies @red


Arrey, meri pyaari Ri. Kitna accha comment diya tumne. Your title is well-deserved.Big smile


So you aren't so faint-hearted, huh? We will see. Prove it if you can survive the masaledaar updates coming up nextWink


Update on 17th Sep, 10 P.M. IST:)
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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 10:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ll_megha_ll

first of all congrates to become dazzler.
we want party.
now come to update.
as usual it was awesome, blossom, rocking and shocking update dear.
mera to dil hi bahar aa gaya yaar.
kya update tha.
all are shattered because of riya lie.
love the pov of dustin cheallo about ariya.
omg riya also have a past
he knew about the building attraction between ariya.
glad to know he had decided to tell the truth to etf and specially arjun.
loved arjun pov. He was so much shocked.
his comparrison of between roshni and riya was mindblowing and heart touching.
now he back etf.
omg riya is in etf.
and you stopped.
precap looks scary.
continue soon.
and thanx for pm.
P.S.- you rockClap




Aww, meri Megha jii..kaisi hain aap? Awesome comment as usual.


Party? Hum to dhoodh peete bacche heinWinkLOL


Yes, Riya has a past. Painful one at that. More on that later.


The next chapter will be...painful. For all the obvious reasonsOuch


Hope you like itSmile
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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 10:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Live-life

AWWW!!!!!! We are sisters now!!!!!!! 
That is amazing!!!!!!!!!!! Dancing I am honored to be your sister! 
Thank you so much!!!! 

I am glad to be an Arian and an Ariyan!!! get it, get it?!!!! hahaha ROFL
And yes we do get the most attributes!! Even though i am not a big bielever of zodiac signs but 
it's good to stay connected!!!!!! LOL

"Diva of perfection?  *Goes into a dead faint*"

Oh puh-leaseee!!! was it that dramatic? Tongue I only told what the truth is for me and a fact!!! Aur han mein tumhe makhan nahi laga rahi behena!!! Wink NO, Seriously you are an amazing writer!!!!!! 

Update soon!!! 
UNTIL LATER SIS...

PEACE OUT!! Ying Yang


Hello Sis!!!


First of all, it is I who is honoured to be your pyaari behna. Smile It feels great. I have no siblings, so I can't tell you how much it means to me.


Second, thanks for making me feel so damn good by leaving me PM's and replies asking me to update.


Third, clever pun. Big smile Arians and Ariyans, LOL. We are one of a kind.


And yes, that was very dramaticWinkLOL


Update 17 Sep, 10 PM. Stay tunedSmile

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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 10:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mishti_k5

I'm speechless
Yr sakshat pernam aapko 

Omg Hatts off to u

Thanx 4 pm me

It is wonderful,amazing ,awesome and outstanding 

Update soon


Thanks a lot, sweet Mishti...


Pranam aapko bhiSmile


Glad that you liked the update...the next one is coming soonSmile
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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 10:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by srividhya68

i'm new to this story
i dont know how i missed such a wonderful story
read all the 6 parts in a go...but have to wait for 8-9 days to read what is going to happen next
eagerly waiting for next part


p.s: u r a awesome writer


Hello, Srividhya. It feels great to see a new reader commenting and liking this story. Thanks so, so much.


If I am not wrong, you used to be quite active in the earlier days of the show, right? I was more of a silent visitor those daysBig smile


Aww, thanks for the encouragement. I really hope that I will be able to live up to your expectations in future as well.


Take care. Next update in a couple of days.

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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 10:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 1993.ssg

Extremly sorry from the late comment.                                                          Another fantastic update. Very well written.                                                          Commisioner Coelho's POV is beautifully describe. The change of Arjun from a weak and vulnerable person to supercop ACP   Arjun is wonderfully describe. Love the part where Arjun remember Riya and Roshni togather. Beautiful update Waiting to know Riya's past. Thanks for the pm continue soon


Aww, it's really okay! As long as you continue to read and comment, it's fine. You are such a loyal reader, and I really look forward to know how you feelSmile


Thanks a lot for analyzing all the details of the chapter. As always, you read the updates so carefully!


More on Riya's past in the upcoming chaptersSmile


And welcome for the PM:)



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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 10:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Amri-

Originally posted by riyasarkar007

Originally posted by -Amri-

Originally posted by riyasarkar007

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Hi Ri!!!Smile heyya miss writerEmbarrassed


LOL at your version of the warning. So sweet of youBig smile

trust me i am so embarrassed right now...i was on high last night i guess, such a dramatic replyROFLAngry
Awww...iss umar mein BP aur heart attack? LOL
sb apki kripa hain madam jee...i am booking a ICU room now ...koi bharosa nahi agle update mein zaroorat par jayeLOL

Your comment shows how carefully you read the entire chapter. You got all the nuances and details right. You are surely one of my best readers, ever.

till now i used to get compliment that i give long replies and comment on all part of a update...best reader? aww thank uBlushing

Abb Arjun kya karega- yeh jaanne ke liye aapko ek hafte tak intezaar karna padega. But one thing is certain- he is certainly angryOuch But he is also trying hard to conceal it. What he will do with Riya is a story for another dayWink

7 days? nahiii (hema malini style) ROFL yeah he is...omg i am now scared for riya...will he kill her?Ouch what if whole ETF strangle her? omgROFL what he will do? errrOuchOuch

And I am really glad that you liked the ending. Hope the suspense and the build up was good enough.

it was freaking awesome!!! told u na i just survived near heart attackLOL i am not so faint hearted u know...it was fabulous!!!
And I will obey your request for a full-on confrontation between Ariya in the next chapter. I can't believe i am saying this- NO CLIFFHANGER.

full confrontation??? gosh pls let me survive that updateLOL no cliffhanger? yayyyROFL
Teen parts honge agle chapter ke. Aur usme woh sabb hoga jo aap chahti hein. Till then, take care:)
yes...buhahahhahahhhahahahhaa LOLLOLLOL
sayonara...hasta la vistaEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
my replies @red


Arrey, meri pyaari Ri. Kitna accha comment diya tumne. Your title is well-deserved.Big smile
sukriya sukriya...apne reply diya ROFL

So you aren't so faint-hearted, huh? We will see. Prove it if you can survive the masaledaar updates coming up nextWink
pakka na? pls do soon...not only me smone else also eagerly waiting for ur updateEmbarrassed and jab last update bear kr liya next wala bhi kr loongi dnt worry



Update on 17th Sep, 10 P.M. IST:)
yesss...excited...pls do soon

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