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Ariya FF:"Deception,Intrigue..."#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 (Page 42)

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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 10:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by srividhya68

i'm new to this story
i dont know how i missed such a wonderful story
read all the 6 parts in a go...but have to wait for 8-9 days to read what is going to happen next
eagerly waiting for next part


p.s: u r a awesome writer


Hello, Srividhya. It feels great to see a new reader commenting and liking this story. Thanks so, so much.


If I am not wrong, you used to be quite active in the earlier days of the show, right? I was more of a silent visitor those daysBig smile


Aww, thanks for the encouragement. I really hope that I will be able to live up to your expectations in future as well.


Take care. Next update in a couple of days.

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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 10:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 1993.ssg

Extremly sorry from the late comment.                                                          Another fantastic update. Very well written.                                                          Commisioner Coelho's POV is beautifully describe. The change of Arjun from a weak and vulnerable person to supercop ACP   Arjun is wonderfully describe. Love the part where Arjun remember Riya and Roshni togather. Beautiful update Waiting to know Riya's past. Thanks for the pm continue soon


Aww, it's really okay! As long as you continue to read and comment, it's fine. You are such a loyal reader, and I really look forward to know how you feelSmile


Thanks a lot for analyzing all the details of the chapter. As always, you read the updates so carefully!


More on Riya's past in the upcoming chaptersSmile


And welcome for the PM:)



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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 10:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Amri-

Originally posted by riyasarkar007

Originally posted by -Amri-

Originally posted by riyasarkar007

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Hi Ri!!!Smile heyya miss writerEmbarrassed


LOL at your version of the warning. So sweet of youBig smile

trust me i am so embarrassed right now...i was on high last night i guess, such a dramatic replyROFLAngry
Awww...iss umar mein BP aur heart attack? LOL
sb apki kripa hain madam jee...i am booking a ICU room now ...koi bharosa nahi agle update mein zaroorat par jayeLOL

Your comment shows how carefully you read the entire chapter. You got all the nuances and details right. You are surely one of my best readers, ever.

till now i used to get compliment that i give long replies and comment on all part of a update...best reader? aww thank uBlushing

Abb Arjun kya karega- yeh jaanne ke liye aapko ek hafte tak intezaar karna padega. But one thing is certain- he is certainly angryOuch But he is also trying hard to conceal it. What he will do with Riya is a story for another dayWink

7 days? nahiii (hema malini style) ROFL yeah he is...omg i am now scared for riya...will he kill her?Ouch what if whole ETF strangle her? omgROFL what he will do? errrOuchOuch

And I am really glad that you liked the ending. Hope the suspense and the build up was good enough.

it was freaking awesome!!! told u na i just survived near heart attackLOL i am not so faint hearted u know...it was fabulous!!!
And I will obey your request for a full-on confrontation between Ariya in the next chapter. I can't believe i am saying this- NO CLIFFHANGER.

full confrontation??? gosh pls let me survive that updateLOL no cliffhanger? yayyyROFL
Teen parts honge agle chapter ke. Aur usme woh sabb hoga jo aap chahti hein. Till then, take care:)
yes...buhahahhahahhhahahahhaa LOLLOLLOL
sayonara...hasta la vistaEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
my replies @red


Arrey, meri pyaari Ri. Kitna accha comment diya tumne. Your title is well-deserved.Big smile
sukriya sukriya...apne reply diya ROFL

So you aren't so faint-hearted, huh? We will see. Prove it if you can survive the masaledaar updates coming up nextWink
pakka na? pls do soon...not only me smone else also eagerly waiting for ur updateEmbarrassed and jab last update bear kr liya next wala bhi kr loongi dnt worry



Update on 17th Sep, 10 P.M. IST:)
yesss...excited...pls do soon

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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 10:40am | IP Logged
17th sept two more days??? How can u be so cruel????

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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 10:43am | IP Logged
Welcom back Sis!!!!!!! 
I missed you sooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOL
Hey and do check your pm!!!! 
Sent you a little welcome speech!!!!! WinkLOL

Welcome back!!!!!
and update soon!!!!!

P.S- 17th sept...seems sooo faaarrr away!!!! but itni intezaar kiya hai to thoda aur hi sahi!!!! Big smile

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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 10:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by xaviara

hey girl !! Before I say anything about this brilliant FF, I want to give you a salute for being such an amazing and gifted writer !!! Writing mystery is a difficult task in itself and to write a mystery so flawlessly is simply astounding !! Pat your back girl, you are doing an amazing job !!!!

Now about your FF, after Riya died in the show, I desperately wanted someone to write an FF about how she doesn't die and the ETF members would find out after a while, but no one to my knowledge wrote such an FF, and I was seriously thinking to write one on my own, but thankfully I did not and I was recommended your FF by Riyrasarkar, for which I would always be thankful, because no one could have done a job better then you !! How I wish this FF could have been adapted by the creators of Arjun and we got to see this in the show !!! *sgh* Seriously girl, hats off to you !!! I have read all the chapters in one go today and although I loved every single chapter, the chapter where Ariya come face to face and then later the anguish showed by Shree and the rest of the members of ETF, made my eyes tear up, because I could feel all of their emotions and feel their betrayal !!! Kudos to you !! Please update soon and include me in your PM's.


Oh. My. God.


Thank you so, so much for making my day. No scratch that. My yearBig smile


I read your comment a week ago when I was aboard the train, and I had to literally restrain myself from jumping with joyLOL


I am blushing all the shades of red reading your complimentsEmbarrassed Let's just say that I hope to continue to live up to the standard set for meTongue


Writing a mystery takes a lot indeed. I am a big fan of Agatha Christie, and I have always admired the pace, the twists, the psychological insights that she provides. So I am drawing the teeny-tiny bit I know from herSmile She is a maestro.


And what you mentioned about your need to read an Ariya story after she died... very true. I felt that there was a huge gap in the show since the character died. And while I continue to watch the show, it can never be whole for me. So this was my attempt to see if there is a possibility for her to come back. Smile


And seriously, I'd love to read your piece as well. Please do go ahead and pen it down, I am sure I and many others will adore itSmile


Thanks once again, and hope to see you after the next update.


Of course, I will surely send you PM'sTongue





Edited by -Amri- - 15 September 2013 at 10:46am

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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 10:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by devildiva21

hey firstly so sorry for the late comment..!! was away for vacations...!!!
just read last three parts together.. and am so glad i could read them back to back.. warna mera kya hota.. anxiety se mar jaati but last update mai bhi itni anxiety de di..!! aise cliffy pe chod diyaShocked
ab kya hoga mera?Cry din raat bas yai sochti rahungi mai...!!! hell i have even started thinking ki arjun ke reactions kya honge??Shocked
the chapters were so beautifully written...!!!ClapStar i have no words to describe them...!!
just love your way of writing...
i could totally visualize it happening in front of my eyes..a s if i was watching the real show..!!!
the way you wrote chapters from arjun riya shree and dustin cohelo's pov.. mindblowing..!!!
take a bow..!!!so beautiful description of emotions ... can understand what each person is going through...!!!
arjun was so shocked seeing riya alive...!!! his heart knew even before seeing her face that the girl is his riya...!!!!
and riya.. she didn't care for her life.. her identity her job nothing... her sole mission at that time ro protect arjun raute...!!!!
both are so much in love with each other..!!
and then shree's emotional burst..!!! 
the guy was so shattered...!!1 never expected this reaction from him.. but when you know that your best friend betrayed you... this reaction was naturally expected..!!!
and sameer and chottu what should i say.. all are equally affected.. by her betrayal..!! Cry
poor guys are having such  a tough time to catch on all this..!!! Cry
and then pov from dustin  cohelo..!!! thinking about arjun and riya... and their pasts..!!
so riya also has some bad past...!!
he knew about  the budding attraction between both..!! glad he has decided to tell the truth to etf and most importantly arjun...!!!!
arjun's pov.. gosh..!!! he was in such a daze... no idea of whats happening.. just moving in all mechanical way..!!!!
his comparison.. of roshni and riya... very heart touching...!!!
and his fb of that koodna bhi hai part..!! awesome...!!!
finally he is back to etf.. i was literally biting off my nails... as he was nearing rathore's cabin..!!!
and there is  riya...!!! everyone has already met... and now its arjun's  turn..!!! but aise cliffy point pe stop..!!! Cry not fair..!!!
can't wait to see everyone's initial reaction on seeing her alive...!!!
precap is interesting...!!
continue soon..!!
eagerly waiting for the next part..!!!
P.S. you rocked...!! keep it up girl...


Hello, Devildiva jii! Nice to see you here again!!!


So aap vacation per thi? Hope accha gayaSmile


OMG...how dare I disturb your raaton ki neend? LOL 



But seriously, thanks a lot for saying that. Best compliment EVER.


And what you said-


 "the chapters were so beautifully written...!!!ClapStar i have no words to describe them...!!just love your way of writing..."


Aww, thanks SO MUCH, dear.Smile Esp for the compliment about the emotions. That is my biggest worry as a writer- getting the characters and their emotions right, so it feels great to know I am doing well on that front.



And your detailed note on all the aspects of the chapter- mast tha!!


So the real journey starts from here. Wink Hope you like the upcoming updates!


Till then, TC!!!


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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 10:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ninii

Wow its getting more intresting
wot a precap awsome
looking forward to know the reason behind riya pretending to be dead
lovely update

Aww, thanks so much for commenting, Ninii!!!


Yes, the precap is interesting. But I promise you, the chapter will be more interestingWinkBig smile


Keep stalking this thread for moreSmile



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