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Ariya FF:"Deception,Intrigue..."#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 (Page 41)

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Posted: 08 September 2013 at 6:28am | IP Logged
hey girl !! Before I say anything about this brilliant FF, I want to give you a salute for being such an amazing and gifted writer !!! Writing mystery is a difficult task in itself and to write a mystery so flawlessly is simply astounding !! Pat your back girl, you are doing an amazing job !!!!

Now about your FF, after Riya died in the show, I desperately wanted someone to write an FF about how she doesn't die and the ETF members would find out after a while, but no one to my knowledge wrote such an FF, and I was seriously thinking to write one on my own, but thankfully I did not and I was recommended your FF by Riyrasarkar, for which I would always be thankful, because no one could have done a job better then you !! How I wish this FF could have been adapted by the creators of Arjun and we got to see this in the show !!! *sgh* Seriously girl, hats off to you !!! I have read all the chapters in one go today and although I loved every single chapter, the chapter where Ariya come face to face and then later the anguish showed by Shree and the rest of the members of ETF, made my eyes tear up, because I could feel all of their emotions and feel their betrayal !!! Kudos to you !! Please update soon and include me in your PM's.

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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 12:13am | IP Logged
hey firstly so sorry for the late comment..!! was away for vacations...!!!
just read last three parts together.. and am so glad i could read them back to back.. warna mera kya hota.. anxiety se mar jaati but last update mai bhi itni anxiety de di..!! aise cliffy pe chod diyaShocked
ab kya hoga mera?Cry din raat bas yai sochti rahungi mai...!!! hell i have even started thinking ki arjun ke reactions kya honge??Shocked
the chapters were so beautifully written...!!!ClapStar i have no words to describe them...!!
just love your way of writing...
i could totally visualize it happening in front of my eyes..a s if i was watching the real show..!!!
the way you wrote chapters from arjun riya shree and dustin cohelo's pov.. mindblowing..!!!
take a bow..!!!so beautiful description of emotions ... can understand what each person is going through...!!!
arjun was so shocked seeing riya alive...!!! his heart knew even before seeing her face that the girl is his riya...!!!!
and riya.. she didn't care for her life.. her identity her job nothing... her sole mission at that time ro protect arjun raute...!!!!
both are so much in love with each other..!!
and then shree's emotional burst..!!! 
the guy was so shattered...!!1 never expected this reaction from him.. but when you know that your best friend betrayed you... this reaction was naturally expected..!!!
and sameer and chottu what should i say.. all are equally affected.. by her betrayal..!! Cry
poor guys are having such  a tough time to catch on all this..!!! Cry
and then pov from dustin  cohelo..!!! thinking about arjun and riya... and their pasts..!!
so riya also has some bad past...!!
he knew about  the budding attraction between both..!! glad he has decided to tell the truth to etf and most importantly arjun...!!!!
arjun's pov.. gosh..!!! he was in such a daze... no idea of whats happening.. just moving in all mechanical way..!!!!
his comparison.. of roshni and riya... very heart touching...!!!
and his fb of that koodna bhi hai part..!! awesome...!!!
finally he is back to etf.. i was literally biting off my nails... as he was nearing rathore's cabin..!!!
and there is  riya...!!! everyone has already met... and now its arjun's  turn..!!! but aise cliffy point pe stop..!!! Cry not fair..!!!
can't wait to see everyone's initial reaction on seeing her alive...!!!
precap is interesting...!!
continue soon..!!
eagerly waiting for the next part..!!!
P.S. you rocked...!! keep it up girl...

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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 12:25am | IP Logged
unres my comment pg-40

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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 9:23am | IP Logged
Wow its getting more intresting
wot a precap awsome
looking forward to know the reason behind riya pretending to be dead
lovely update

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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 11:13am | IP Logged
Unres my comment on pg-37.

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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
me re-reading the story for the 3rd time since t update
very anxious to know the reactions dear
how many more days fr the update??

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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 1:30pm | IP Logged
please behna jaldi update karo na!!!! 
please Big smile
i really am very curious to know what happens next!!! 
please please!!!! 
Apni sis ki bhi baat nehi manugi? *puppy face*

update soon!!!!!!Smile

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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 10:25pm | IP Logged
Api plz update soon
i m waiting for ur pm

Edited by Aabish_02 - 10 September 2013 at 10:29pm

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