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Ariya FF:"Deception,Intrigue..."#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 (Page 38)

..Amri.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 1:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kaval05

i was eagerly waiting for your update. When i read it i was looking for more. I just cant wait to read more. So Riya is finally meeting everyone. It will be very interesting. Update soon

Thanks a lot, Kaval. So sweet of you to say this.

I am happy that I could sustain your interestSmile

Yes, Riya is FINALLY meeting everyone. Things will take a turn from now on. But for the better or for the worse?Wink

Update next week, but a long oneBig smile

..Amri.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 1:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Jorja

Super awesome update
Cont soon

Aww, thanks a lot, Jorja!!!Smile Happy to see you here again.

Originally posted by shah10

Wow.. Superb update
Love Arjun's pov

Thanks a lot, dear.

At this point, I'd like to express my appreciation for commenting so diligently. It really means a lot to meSmile
_Tabassum_ IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 4:59am | IP Logged
Awwsssmmmly awwsssmmm part
brillently written
can't wait to read more
plzz come back sooon
cont sooon
thnx 4 pm

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Haal-e-Dil IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 5:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Amri-

Originally posted by riyasarkar007


Hi Ri!!!Smile heyya miss writerEmbarrassed

LOL at your version of the warning. So sweet of youBig smile

trust me i am so embarrassed right now...i was on high last night i guess, such a dramatic replyROFLAngry
Awww...iss umar mein BP aur heart attack? LOL
sb apki kripa hain madam jee...i am booking a ICU room now ...koi bharosa nahi agle update mein zaroorat par jayeLOL

Your comment shows how carefully you read the entire chapter. You got all the nuances and details right. You are surely one of my best readers, ever.

till now i used to get compliment that i give long replies and comment on all part of a reader? aww thank uBlushing

Abb Arjun kya karega- yeh jaanne ke liye aapko ek hafte tak intezaar karna padega. But one thing is certain- he is certainly angryOuch But he is also trying hard to conceal it. What he will do with Riya is a story for another dayWink

7 days? nahiii (hema malini style) ROFL yeah he is...omg i am now scared for riya...will he kill her?Ouch what if whole ETF strangle her? omgROFL what he will do? errrOuchOuch

And I am really glad that you liked the ending. Hope the suspense and the build up was good enough.

it was freaking awesome!!! told u na i just survived near heart attackLOL i am not so faint hearted u was fabulous!!!
And I will obey your request for a full-on confrontation between Ariya in the next chapter. I can't believe i am saying this- NO CLIFFHANGER.

full confrontation??? gosh pls let me survive that updateLOL no cliffhanger? yayyyROFL
Teen parts honge agle chapter ke. Aur usme woh sabb hoga jo aap chahti hein. Till then, take care:)
yes...buhahahhahahhhahahahhaa LOLLOLLOL
sayonara...hasta la vistaEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
my replies @red

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abjeya Senior Member

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 5:52am | IP Logged
omg. the end I did not expect. I thought that you would make riya and arjun meet after a few chapter but your surprise was really good. liked the way you portrayed arjun's emotions and defiance and riya's fear. please update soon and let the etf team know about riya's past.

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ll_megha_ll IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 5:55am | IP Logged
first of all congrates to become dazzler.
we want party.
now come to update.
as usual it was awesome, blossom, rocking and shocking update dear.
mera to dil hi bahar aa gaya yaar.
kya update tha.
all are shattered because of riya lie.
love the pov of dustin cheallo about ariya.
omg riya also have a past
he knew about the building attraction between ariya.
glad to know he had decided to tell the truth to etf and specially arjun.
loved arjun pov. He was so much shocked.
his comparrison of between roshni and riya was mindblowing and heart touching.
now he back etf.
omg riya is in etf.
and you stopped.
precap looks scary.
continue soon.
and thanx for pm.
P.S.- you rockClap

Edited by ll_megha_ll - 10 September 2013 at 12:24am

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Live-life IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 7:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Amri-

Originally posted by Live-life

wow you are back!!!!!!
I really missed you and you updates!!!!!
but now that you are back you shall rock the floor again!!!! heheheLOL

Yes you are right youngling!! we are the children of april and aries!!!! 
hail the children of aries!!!!! mu ahahah Sleepy
and thank you for the birthday wish!!!! 

And update soon!!!! 
missed you!!!! Big smile

Hail the children of Aries!Big smile Very well put.

I am so glad to be an Arian. Maybe I am silly to believe in this zodiac sign business, but I always find that I have most of the attributes associated with it.Wink And I think you do too.

Now we are sistersTongue

Originally posted by Live-life

Finally after ages!!!!!!!! An update!!! LOL
And this one is just one of the most awesomest and the most fantabulous chapter you have ever written!!!!!!! It's like with every single update you tell us that you are the diva of perfection, chahe wo writing, ho ya emotions!!! Big smile

It started out great!!! And i loved the fact that you also showed what Dustin cohelo thinks and feels. Cause usually no one really payd heed to him. So i am really happy that you did!! He is a verrryyy important character!! Embarrassed and he is right...

yehi to din ho te hain, jawaani ke, 
to feel, to love, to live life to it's fullest. Cause when you look back these are the memories that will stand out and bring a smile on your face!! Big smile this reminds me of the song The Climb by Miley Cyrus

And he was right about another thing...
That Arjun and Riya both deserve a second chance! Embarrassed Everybody does! 

And the way you described Arjun was just...OUT OF THE WORLD!!!!!!!!!! 
I mean this one of those times when you actually see that emptiness in him. And it kills every time!! 
You decribed his emotions so well!!!!!!! 
It's just amazing how he can be this emotional man one moment and the other he is back to his no-nonsense attitude of ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte! 
I mean he doesn't fail to amaze me every single time i see him or read about him!! 
And I loved those little flashbacks of Roshni and Riya! It just made me feel sooo...
I don't even know the word, as I said previously "too perfect for words"
I just hope he realizes why he sees them together.Smile

And the last bit was just a really big twist!!! I mean the Commissioner, Anita and...RIYA! 
at the ETF office!!! I am really eager to know what happens next, to read the reactions of each memeber of ETF! Cause this a VERY BIG TURNING POINT!! 

And what happened in Riya's past? I am dieing from curiosity!!! 

Please please please please update soon!!!! 

please please please!!!

Diva of perfection?  *Goes into a dead faint*

But thanks for such a lovely compliment.Tongue

Dustin, I think, is one of the underutilized characters on the show. They can really show him more. But I introduced his Po V for the pure purpose of justifying the cliffhangerWink

And what an appropriate song. Well-chosen. And I think the way Miley is now, the song is very much applicable to herLOL

And yes, second chances are very important in life. It's too much to expect that all of us go unscathed without making mistakes. I hope that all of us are granted this elusive second chance:)

So glad that you liked the portrayal of Arjun's emotions in this chapter. The way I see it, Arjun constantly swings between these two personas- the cop and the man. Often, they also mix together, and sometimes, they come to conflict with one another. More of that in the future chapters. I hope to explore more of this conflict with respect to RiyaBig smile

Thanks for the lovely comment, sis. And take care.

AWWW!!!!!! We are sisters now!!!!!!! 
That is amazing!!!!!!!!!!! Dancing I am honored to be your sister! 
Thank you so much!!!! 

I am glad to be an Arian and an Ariyan!!! get it, get it?!!!! hahaha ROFL
And yes we do get the most attributes!! Even though i am not a big bielever of zodiac signs but 
it's good to stay connected!!!!!! LOL

"Diva of perfection?  *Goes into a dead faint*"

Oh puh-leaseee!!! was it that dramatic? Tongue I only told what the truth is for me and a fact!!! Aur han mein tumhe makhan nahi laga rahi behena!!! Wink NO, Seriously you are an amazing writer!!!!!! 

Update soon!!! 

PEACE OUT!! Ying Yang

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Christeee IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 9:07am | IP Logged
omg arjun's emotion was well potrayed
so finally riya is out 
update soon

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