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Ariya FF:"Deception,Intrigue..."#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 (Page 37)

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 11:35am | IP Logged
Beautiful chapter...Clap... 
and a very interesting precapSmile... now the actual story begins,,, difficult to wait for the next part... update soonSmile

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 11:38am | IP Logged
beautiful
awesome part
love itClapClap


Edited by khemanisarita - 04 September 2013 at 9:40pm

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 11:43am | IP Logged
Awesome Update...
Can't Wait 4 d Next Part...
Plzzz Update Soon...

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 11:52am | IP Logged
I vl comment once i come out of the shock i got after reading this update... 

Edited by Leki - 04 September 2013 at 12:17pm

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 11:56am | IP Logged
nice one..

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
Thnx god
at last they met
ariya met
i loved it
eagerly waiting 4 nxt update

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 12:35pm | IP Logged

loved the way u have portrayed arjuns POV
dustin seems to be a nice fellow
finally we will see the relevation of truth
would love to c a triangle btw arjun riya and a third person 
might be fun ...

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
Finally after ages!!!!!!!! An update!!! LOL
And this one is just one of the most awesomest and the most fantabulous chapter you have ever written!!!!!!! It's like with every single update you tell us that you are the diva of perfection, chahe wo writing, ho ya emotions!!! Big smile

It started out great!!! And i loved the fact that you also showed what Dustin cohelo thinks and feels. Cause usually no one really payd heed to him. So i am really happy that you did!! He is a verrryyy important character!! Embarrassed and he is right...

yehi to din ho te hain, jawaani ke, 
to feel, to love, to live life to it's fullest. Cause when you look back these are the memories that will stand out and bring a smile on your face!! Big smile this reminds me of the song The Climb by Miley Cyrus

And he was right about another thing...
That Arjun and Riya both deserve a second chance! Embarrassed Everybody does! 

And the way you described Arjun was just...OUT OF THE WORLD!!!!!!!!!! 
I mean this one of those times when you actually see that emptiness in him. And it kills every time!! 
You decribed his emotions so well!!!!!!! 
It's just amazing how he can be this emotional man one moment and the other he is back to his no-nonsense attitude of ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte! 
I mean he doesn't fail to amaze me every single time i see him or read about him!! 
And I loved those little flashbacks of Roshni and Riya! It just made me feel sooo...
I don't even know the word, as I said previously "too perfect for words"
I just hope he realizes why he sees them together.Smile

And the last bit was just a really big twist!!! I mean the Commissioner, Anita and...RIYA! 
at the ETF office!!! I am really eager to know what happens next, to read the reactions of each memeber of ETF! Cause this a VERY BIG TURNING POINT!! 

And what happened in Riya's past? I am dieing from curiosity!!! 

Please please please please update soon!!!! 

please please please!!!

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