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Ariya FF:"Deception,Intrigue..."#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 (Page 36)

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 6:50am | IP Logged
ps megh should be thankful to meLOL 


OH MY GODShocked

u should add this line before ur update

caution- this update can cause heart attack. author is not responsible for any kind of thing like that.Dead

i am seriously in plain shock and disbelieve at this update...where i was so excited and now i am...i am on my way to hospital to check up my BP. gosh girl, another update like this and then RIP Riya SarkarDead now i know why my heart was beating like i am on gun pointLOL i was literally scared at this update...especially the last partStar

ok, enough of my shits, now back to update

update starting from commissioner's pov, nice...from his pov arjun riya's journey, arjun's individual journey from a  cop who had dreams to a cold ruthless man waiting for revenge was touching. and also his helpless feeling that he cant provide any gd to arjun was also touching...and then, riya entered. 

youth...really, being reckless, to live each moment. to live for the one u love...

then cut to arjun ...omg. he was so shocked and he was in dazed state when driving. then the transformation...maybe i was expecting disbelieve, or devastating, but rage and anger was so unexpected. like he got another reason to live now...and what does those lines mean? finding riya mukherjee and ...??? he will rip her in half kya?LOL pls no...already choree is ready to do that thingLOL and also rathore too...Riya need some support and this time her madam wont also support her.LOL

then...arjun entered, went to rathore's cabin...and i was dead.Dead i had left my heart in that cabin, if u dont update what happened next then u will be responsible for my death. maybe i am becoming drama queen, hormonal teenagerLOL but really i am literally begging u to update this ASAP. pls. pls pls. update this thing. i dont know how i survive till u update...what will happen to riya arjun when they meet? ETF reaction? oh noooCryCryCry

pls update...pls pls plsGeek

ps, did i tell u this? u are fabulous writer? no? 

ClapClapClap no other writer, except someone else and u, can make me feel like this. u are just rocking.Star i was serious when i said why something like this cant happen in show and gorky should read deserves a big round of applauseClapClap keep it upStar

pls, one small request, update soon, and pls no cliff hanger in next part. i know i myself want to wait for ariya reunite, but trust me i just cant handle this anymore. so pls, if u are going to show their meeting in next update, pls show it fully in next update pls pls pls i beg u.Big smile

Edited by riyasarkar007 - 04 September 2013 at 12:45pm

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@ Megha
Toh tum first aa hi gayi! Approve


You are a good gal, dearSmile
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u are the 3rd person to tell me this since last night LOL call me Ri.. my frnds doesEmbarrassed

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 7:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Amri174

Originally posted by Live-life

I have no words to describe this one!!
And I really do mean it!! It was just too perfect for words!
From the first word to the last I couldn't stop the tears!! Cry
And shree is one of those people who can stay clam in the most dire situations!
But seeing him like this... Cry It's really surprising how we can feel sooo much that we feel like 
Destroying everything around us!! He may seem like he is fine from the outside, but from his outburst 
He is broken inside! 
Rathore and chottu were no better!! And rathore was crying!! Cry
You just described each one of their emotions very well!! It was just awesome awesome and awesome!!! 
This was another emotion packed chapter that was just perfect!!! Embarrassed
Thank you 
Update soon!!! 

Originally posted by Live-life

Ohhh!! So your birthday is on the 17th of April!!
That is awesome!!Big smile
Well, happy late birthday!! Bahooot late hai but, mujhe to abhi pata Chala na!! LOL

And yes I shall comment on each chapter!! And your welcome!! Mein Bhale hi comment kar na bhul jaon but like Karna kabhi bhi nahi Bhulti! Same he ya ... Samjhaun? Tongue

I really cannot express how grateful I am for these lovely responses. THANKS A TON.

Yes, I had a hard time writing this chapter, it was emotionally heart-wrenching to think of Shree, Rathore and Chottu. Anyways, I am more scared of what'll happen to Riya when she meets them face to faceDead

And belated happy birthday to you:) Both of us are the children of April, the children of springEmbarrassed 

Aur mein aapki kahii baat ko samajh gayi:)

wow you are back!!!!!!
I really missed you and you updates!!!!!
but now that you are back you shall rock the floor again!!!! heheheLOL

Yes you are right youngling!! we are the children of april and aries!!!! 
hail the children of aries!!!!! mu ahahah Sleepy
and thank you for the birthday wish!!!! 

And update soon!!!! 
missed you!!!! Big smile

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 8:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by riyasarkar007

ps megh should be thankful to meLOL

riyu Hug
vaise mai tujhe thanx nahi bolne wali kyunki kbb mai no thanx and no sorry abh samjhe ya samjhun

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 8:44am | IP Logged
Super duper update... 
Im not going to give my super boring comments... but have to say this

Edited by Leki - 08 September 2013 at 6:36am

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 9:05am | IP Logged

Hmmm... I m so confused... that how am I going to describe this masterpiece...

First of all I never thought that somebody give that much importance to Dustin Coelho as it's the side character n rarely visible in the show but u did n for that I gv u a big salute.

His POV was mind blowing. He witnessed it all but couldn't to anything. Couldn't help his one of the best officers.

OMG he even knw that they both have have some sparks btwn them. Loved his observation skills or may I say experience.

What happened with Riya in the past???????

Finally he decided to spill the beans in front of Rathod n his team. It will be quite interesting to see that how they all take it.

Now what can I say about him as he is already a broken soul n whatever that is happening around him didn't help him either.

The segment where he reminded Riya n her dialogue iskay baad kudna bhi ha sar was a wow moment for me as I loved the way she that.

Hmm... interesting ...  Now his mind flooded with the memories of both Riya n Rosh.

 He is so determined to find the secret about Riya.

Atlast they cme face-to-face.

Eagerly waiting for the fire works!!!!!!

Thanks for pm dr.

Continue soon.

Edited by Aks13 - 10 September 2013 at 11:11am

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 9:12am | IP Logged
I am short of words,there is no word to describe what I feel right now after reading this chapter
I just want to say that you are a perfect, mindblowing ,amazing writer api
the update was as usual fantastic
dustin pov and his thoughts about arjun and also about ariya relation was amazing
loved it
arjun emotions were beautifully portrayed
loved the memories of riya and roshini and the transformation of arjun was awesome
the last part was scary
riya in etf
precap is interesting
I am eager to know the reaction of arjun after seeing riya in etf
riya past will be revealed
and finally ariya meeting
ohh next update after 8 or 9 days
waiting for the next part
update soon
thanks for the pm

Edited by Aabish_02 - 04 September 2013 at 7:54pm

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