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Ariya FF:"Deception,Intrigue..."#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 (Page 35)

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 8:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by riyasarkar007

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ps megh should be thankful to meLOL


riyu Hug
vaise mai tujhe thanx nahi bolne wali kyunki kbb mai no thanx and no sorry abh samjhe ya samjhun

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 8:44am | IP Logged
Super duper update... 
Im not going to give my super boring comments... but have to say this
 YOU ARE THE BEST!!!Clap



Edited by Leki - 08 September 2013 at 6:36am

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Hmmm... I m so confused... that how am I going to describe this masterpiece...

First of all I never thought that somebody give that much importance to Dustin Coelho as it's the side character n rarely visible in the show but u did n for that I gv u a big salute.

His POV was mind blowing. He witnessed it all but couldn't to anything. Couldn't help his one of the best officers.

OMG he even knw that they both have have some sparks btwn them. Loved his observation skills or may I say experience.

What happened with Riya in the past???????

Finally he decided to spill the beans in front of Rathod n his team. It will be quite interesting to see that how they all take it.

Now what can I say about him as he is already a broken soul n whatever that is happening around him didn't help him either.

The segment where he reminded Riya n her dialogue iskay baad kudna bhi ha sar was a wow moment for me as I loved the way she that.

Hmm... interesting ...  Now his mind flooded with the memories of both Riya n Rosh.

 He is so determined to find the secret about Riya.

Atlast they cme face-to-face.

Eagerly waiting for the fire works!!!!!!

Thanks for pm dr.

Continue soon.



Edited by Aks13 - 10 September 2013 at 11:11am

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 9:12am | IP Logged
I am short of words,there is no word to describe what I feel right now after reading this chapter
I just want to say that you are a perfect, mindblowing ,amazing writer api
the update was as usual fantastic
dustin pov and his thoughts about arjun and also about ariya relation was amazing
loved it
arjun emotions were beautifully portrayed
loved the memories of riya and roshini and the transformation of arjun was awesome
the last part was scary
riya in etf
precap is interesting
I am eager to know the reaction of arjun after seeing riya in etf
riya past will be revealed
and finally ariya meeting
ohh next update after 8 or 9 days
waiting for the next part
update soon
thanks for the pm


Edited by Aabish_02 - 04 September 2013 at 7:54pm

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 11:35am | IP Logged
Beautiful chapter...Clap... 
and a very interesting precapSmile... now the actual story begins,,, difficult to wait for the next part... update soonSmile

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 11:38am | IP Logged
beautiful
awesome part
love itClapClap


Edited by khemanisarita - 04 September 2013 at 9:40pm

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 11:43am | IP Logged
Awesome Update...
Can't Wait 4 d Next Part...
Plzzz Update Soon...

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 11:52am | IP Logged
I vl comment once i come out of the shock i got after reading this update... 

Edited by Leki - 04 September 2013 at 12:17pm

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