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Ariya FF:"Deception,Intrigue..."#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 (Page 34)

..Amri.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 6:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by riyasarkar007

everyone is being dhamki queen now a days...first it was muskan only now there is VQ and now u too...but cant blame as as writer we want to see more likes and comments...
so, coming back to ur update...hayy u made me sad. shree's break down, it was harsh. i dont know how i expected him to behave, but when he did, i want to ran away from his pain. poor ETFians to witness this state. and also, not to forget rathore and chotu was also there...thank god u didnt show them crying or i would have bring tsunami with me...lolz.

then my supercop miss mukherjee. i am happy that u didnt show the confrontation yet. thoda aur tarapne do mr rawte ko...i want their separation to be dragged more lol. evil me...but how she escaped and arjun was broken, ahaan, me liked it. such a sadist i am . 

the way u described shree and arjun's emotion, i dont have the heart to go through that was awesome and intense, total opposite of me. so sorry and excuse me for that. but again loved it like ever...but hey no precap? not fair...and next time long update plsss

hello hi bye bye

Hello, Riya!

I am really sorry for the dhamki, par kya karen? Comments/Likes milta hi nahin hai. Toh doubt aa jata hai ki logon ko humari stories achchi lag rahi hai ki nahin? But thanks a lot for understandingSmile

Yes, the bad I feel for them. Their breakdown was almost expected.Ouch

Their separation was planned... so thanks for liking. I am also a sadist like you, so maine Mr Rawte ko thoda aur tadpayaLOL

Aaj lamba update hai, promise. Hope you like it:)

..Amri.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 6:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ninii

Wow what a update just loved it
aysha and liza dnt even have any idea abt whats going on
the update was very emotional just felt so sad i was crying while reading
it just touched my heart and rathod had tears n shree aur chotu Cry 
ur every update is so gud tht have no words to explain
i loved loved loved loved loved it
thnks for such a touching beautiful update

Aww, Ninii ji. Beautiful comment, as always.

Yes, Choree and Rathore ka emotional breakdown, very sad, nah? Thanks for liking. And I made you cry? YikesDead

Thanks a lot for the sincere comment my dear, hope to live up to your expectations in future updates as wellSmile

Originally posted by sony1990

hi dear i am sorry for the late reply was really busy i read the chapter but could not comment and then as soon as i got time i re read both the chapters thrice it is superb wonderful job i liked the way you are protraying the inner thoughts of characters with their emotions and facial expression seriously yar take a bow!!!! i am eagerly waiting for next update 

Yayy, you re-read the chapters? Nice.

Thanks for your comment, esp the comment about the portrayal. It seriously touched my heart.

Next update- TODAYSmile
..Amri.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 6:34am | IP Logged

Aap sabko mera sadar pranam.


Because I finally admit my defeat.

You guys ROCK!!!

Itne comments mujhe kabhi nahin aaye. Thank you so much for the responses. It was just amazing to read of all your insights and feelings.Embarrassed

THANK YOU SO, SO MUCH. I can't really express how much I appreciate it.

Abb se agar mein dhamki doon, then please feel free to hit me on the head.LOL

I have nothing to is Chapter 6C. I present it humbly at your feet, and leave it to you capable readers to enjoy.

And this chapter is amazing, if I say so myself. Because the next phase of the story begins at the end of it. Hope you like it.Smile


Edited by Amri174 - 04 September 2013 at 11:44am

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Haal-e-Dil IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 6:50am | IP Logged
ps megh should be thankful to meLOL 


OH MY GODShocked

u should add this line before ur update

caution- this update can cause heart attack. author is not responsible for any kind of thing like that.Dead

i am seriously in plain shock and disbelieve at this update...where i was so excited and now i am...i am on my way to hospital to check up my BP. gosh girl, another update like this and then RIP Riya SarkarDead now i know why my heart was beating like i am on gun pointLOL i was literally scared at this update...especially the last partStar

ok, enough of my shits, now back to update

update starting from commissioner's pov, nice...from his pov arjun riya's journey, arjun's individual journey from a  cop who had dreams to a cold ruthless man waiting for revenge was touching. and also his helpless feeling that he cant provide any gd to arjun was also touching...and then, riya entered. 

youth...really, being reckless, to live each moment. to live for the one u love...

then cut to arjun ...omg. he was so shocked and he was in dazed state when driving. then the transformation...maybe i was expecting disbelieve, or devastating, but rage and anger was so unexpected. like he got another reason to live now...and what does those lines mean? finding riya mukherjee and ...??? he will rip her in half kya?LOL pls no...already choree is ready to do that thingLOL and also rathore too...Riya need some support and this time her madam wont also support her.LOL

then...arjun entered, went to rathore's cabin...and i was dead.Dead i had left my heart in that cabin, if u dont update what happened next then u will be responsible for my death. maybe i am becoming drama queen, hormonal teenagerLOL but really i am literally begging u to update this ASAP. pls. pls pls. update this thing. i dont know how i survive till u update...what will happen to riya arjun when they meet? ETF reaction? oh noooCryCryCry

pls update...pls pls plsGeek

ps, did i tell u this? u are fabulous writer? no? 

ClapClapClap no other writer, except someone else and u, can make me feel like this. u are just rocking.Star i was serious when i said why something like this cant happen in show and gorky should read deserves a big round of applauseClapClap keep it upStar

pls, one small request, update soon, and pls no cliff hanger in next part. i know i myself want to wait for ariya reunite, but trust me i just cant handle this anymore. so pls, if u are going to show their meeting in next update, pls show it fully in next update pls pls pls i beg u.Big smile

Edited by riyasarkar007 - 04 September 2013 at 12:45pm

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..Amri.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 7:00am | IP Logged
@ Megha
Toh tum first aa hi gayi! Approve


You are a good gal, dearSmile
Haal-e-Dil IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 7:04am | IP Logged
u are the 3rd person to tell me this since last night LOL call me Ri.. my frnds doesEmbarrassed

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Live-life IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 7:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Amri174

Originally posted by Live-life

I have no words to describe this one!!
And I really do mean it!! It was just too perfect for words!
From the first word to the last I couldn't stop the tears!! Cry
And shree is one of those people who can stay clam in the most dire situations!
But seeing him like this... Cry It's really surprising how we can feel sooo much that we feel like 
Destroying everything around us!! He may seem like he is fine from the outside, but from his outburst 
He is broken inside! 
Rathore and chottu were no better!! And rathore was crying!! Cry
You just described each one of their emotions very well!! It was just awesome awesome and awesome!!! 
This was another emotion packed chapter that was just perfect!!! Embarrassed
Thank you 
Update soon!!! 

Originally posted by Live-life

Ohhh!! So your birthday is on the 17th of April!!
That is awesome!!Big smile
Well, happy late birthday!! Bahooot late hai but, mujhe to abhi pata Chala na!! LOL

And yes I shall comment on each chapter!! And your welcome!! Mein Bhale hi comment kar na bhul jaon but like Karna kabhi bhi nahi Bhulti! Same he ya ... Samjhaun? Tongue

I really cannot express how grateful I am for these lovely responses. THANKS A TON.

Yes, I had a hard time writing this chapter, it was emotionally heart-wrenching to think of Shree, Rathore and Chottu. Anyways, I am more scared of what'll happen to Riya when she meets them face to faceDead

And belated happy birthday to you:) Both of us are the children of April, the children of springEmbarrassed 

Aur mein aapki kahii baat ko samajh gayi:)

wow you are back!!!!!!
I really missed you and you updates!!!!!
but now that you are back you shall rock the floor again!!!! heheheLOL

Yes you are right youngling!! we are the children of april and aries!!!! 
hail the children of aries!!!!! mu ahahah Sleepy
and thank you for the birthday wish!!!! 

And update soon!!!! 
missed you!!!! Big smile

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