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Ariya FF:"Deception,Intrigue..."#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 (Page 34)

..Amri.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 5:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aks13

Comment on part-6A

Fascinating update dr.

Arjun n Riya's POVs were amazingly written.

Yayyy comletely dedicated to Ariya.

You very well described each n every emotion n thought which were going through their heart n mind when they saw eachother.

World seemed to be stopped for both of them at that very moment when they were in eachother arms.

His heart always knw that he loved her so much but his mind denied this fact everytime but at that time his heart overpower his mind.

Wow the way Arjun described her inner turmoil was too adorable.

OMG Till Arjun got the meaning of her last gestur, she ran away from their.

How much hard they both tried to control their heart but couldn't do it coz thy belonged to eachother.

Awww Riya was drooling over him!!!!!

Wow She forgot everything n its quite obvious ashe's world for her.

I hope after this encounter he accepted his feelings for her.

Loved it to the core.

Thanks for such a wonderful piece of work.


For vry vry vryyy... late comments.

Originally posted by Aks13

Mind blowing n a heart touching update dr.

Wow Riya's one lie turned their world upside down.

I never expected that Shree ever behave like that as he is a easy going person but If he was so much shattered by knowing this fact then we can only imagine the extent of pain n agony that other three r going through.

Its justified to some extent as if someone so close to your heart broke your trust thn you will feel an unimaginable pain that will break u compltly.

All this showed that the depth of relation they shared with her is way much stronger thn anyone can think.

Loved all their POVs dr, especially of Shree.

Hats off to u!!!!!!!

Thanks for pm dr.

Continue as soon as possible.

So so Sorry again for vry vry late comments.

Originally posted by Aks13

For the late dr n will surely unres both my comments tomorrow or day after that.

Aaarrggghhh that stupid net of mine is creating lot of troubleAngry Angry Angry Angry Angry.

Hey don't u think about discontuning it. It's going great.

Again sorry for the delay swthrt.


Aks dear, what can I tell you????

Such beautiful comments, that too for each chapter...I am speechless.

Aur kitna cute teddy bear...thanks a lot.

Aur aapko sorry bolne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai, you are one of my most loyal readers.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading all your comments. Update today at 10. Watch out!!!Tongue

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 5:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aabish_02

It was awesome mindblowing Thumbs Up 

Loved the quotation

the way you described shree feelings after knowing the truth 
was awesome 

omg rathore cried Cry 

and chottu was also shocked

is chap ko prhny k baad aisa lgta hy k bechari riya ko in sub ko mananay k liye boht mehnat krni pary ge Wink 

update next part soon
thanks for pm

Originally posted by Aabish_02

api ab toh update de do na plzzz

Thanks a lot for commenting as usual, my dear sis. I am really glad that you liked the quotation. I thought that it was appropriate.

Update aaj, dus baje. Aur mein tumhe dedicate karne waali hoon, along with a couple of others. You are a star! Watch out for the update today!!!Wink

Originally posted by Mishti_k5

Shreee Cry

Blv totta hai insan bikher jata hai 

Porrr shree ,chotu and Sam bhaesa me cry it is hrt touchy update

U make me spechless I have no words 

Claps 4 u

Thanx 4 Pm me 

Update soon

Aww, my sweet Mishti. Thanks a lot for the wonderful comment.

Haan, bahut sahi kaha tumne, vishwas  toota to mano sab toota. Update todaySmile

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..Amri.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 5:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ll_megha_ll

Originally posted by Amri174

Originally posted by ll_megha_ll

res mar i come to first
or tabayat kaise hai

Megha, Update only at 10 PM mein update karne se pehle tumhe PM karrongi...res kar lena tabSmile

mai tab online nahi aati

Oh, dont worry...I am replying to all the comments. After its done, I will PM you and you can Res:)
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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 5:46am | IP Logged
not fair!!! i also want to res!!!! pm me tooo

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 5:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by _Nikita_

Awwssmmm part
supperbly written
loved it
cont sooon
thnx 4 pm

Aww, thanks a lot, Nikita! Hope to see you after today's update, 10.00 P.M. sharpWink

Originally posted by nakshatra92

emotional update...
shree totally broken and he was not able to control himself...

rathore and chottu too...

sense of betrayal by a loved one and that too from riya ...

update soon

Nakshatra jii!!! 

Aayiye, aayiye...lovely comment as usual. Glad that you liked the special Choree-Rathore chapter.

Update today, stay tuned.Big smile

Originally posted by 1993.ssg

Fantastic update                                                          Shree's condition after knowing the truth that Riya is not dead is written beautifully. Rathore and chotu's condition after knowing the truth is also wonderfully described. OMG after knowing the truth rathore has tears in this eye. Shree and chotu is feeling betrated.                                                          If this the condition after knowing the truth that Riya is alive then what will be the condition when Riya will come face to face with etf?                                                          Wonderfully written chapter. Their emotinal condition is very carefully and perfectly written .                                                          Thanks for the pm                                                          Pls continue soon

Thanks a lot, sweetheart, your comments always make my day.

Yes, I thought that Shree and Chottu should get their due, because they are also special for Riya. Glad that you liked it.

Update todaySmile
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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 5:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by riyasarkar007

not fair!!! i also want to res!!!! pm me tooo

OkaySmile Promise. Lekin agar Megha first aayi toh mein zimmedar nahin hoon:)
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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 5:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pisces_Gurl

Again a brilliant update...
And ofcourse awexomen mindblowing...
The way Shree reacted ti was so heartbreaking...he was sooo hurt...
N rathore...omg..he was also crying...
Their feelings were soo beautifully portrayed n written..
Anger,shock,surprise,happiness but the most prominent..A feeling if betrayal by their beloved one..who meant sooo much to them...
Thats sumthing really hurting.
Love it to de fullest...
Update soon..
N plzz dnt u dare end the story like ths..
Samjhy ya Samjhaoun...

Aww...thanks for the superb comment as always!!!

I thought that other than Arjun, the others also deserved a chapter to themselves. So...Smile

Their anger is...well, red hotOuch Poor Riya. She is gonna have a hard time, I am telling you.

Thanks again, and updatewa todayWink

Originally posted by abjeya

loved it. you really expressed the emotions really good. but I hope they understand the reason why riya had to do this and forget their anger. please don't quit the story and update soon.

Update today, my dear...stay tuned.  And thanks a lot for commentingEmbarrassed
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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 5:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kaval05

I just read your ff. It is so interesting with all the twist and turns. so many mysteries. I really love how you depict every emotion of every character perfectly. Update soon. love your ff

Aww, a new reader!!! I am so happyParty

Thanks for the compliment. Seriously, it means a lot to me. The update is today, so all I can say outTongue

Originally posted by Christeee

rathore too crying
poor shree and chotu

Thanks a lot, Christeee!!!!Embarrassed

Originally posted by playagame

hey dear beautiful story..
just read all the parts..
loved it..
riya is alive..hurray..
shree,chotu,rathore n arjun feeling betrayed..
ariya meet is superb..
plz contunue soon..

Another new reader? *Does a dance around the room*

Thanks a lot for commenting, I am really glad that you liked it. Update todaySmile

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