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Ariya FF:"Deception,Intrigue..."#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 (Page 32)

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 5:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Leki

Looks like Dhamki Queen is back in action!!!!
Awesome update... Emotional One...
What has Riya's lie done to them... if this is Shree's reaction then Arjun's well that will destroy everything...
Shree's feelings are beautifully potrayed...
He will never forgive her!!! Cant blame him also she was his bff *sigh*
Rathore's reaction on hearing  Riya alive!!! That shows how much they cared for her what she was for them... but all they got was cheating and betrayal... How xan she eo this??? 
Chotu he too is shattered... well trio was partners in crime nah... 
I feel really angry at Riya for doing this to the guys and breaking their heart their trust like this...
Well its time to see Arjun's reaction now after the realisation sinks in... Riya will have to answer lot of questions... 
Continue soon me waiting...


Hi Leki! Nice to see you here as always.

Thanks for liking the part, however short it was. I am happy that you liked my portrayal of Choree's reaction.

And yes, Arjun's reaction- watch out today, 10.00 P.M. IST.WinkBig smile

Originally posted by jia03

Awesome chapter...Clap
you have beautifully portrayed their emotions...
shree outburst... everything was perfect...

please dont think of discontinuing...
its an awesome FFStar... and i always look forward for its update...Smile
will be waiting for the next chapterSmile

Thanks a lot for commenting, honey. Love reading your responses. Update today, 10 P.M. sharp. 

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 5:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ll_megha_ll

res mar i come to first
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Megha, Update only at 10 PM sweety...so mein update karne se pehle tumhe PM karrongi...res kar lena tabSmile
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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 5:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Amri174

Originally posted by ll_megha_ll

res mar i come to first
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Megha, Update only at 10 PM sweety...so mein update karne se pehle tumhe PM karrongi...res kar lena tabSmile

mai tab online nahi aati

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 5:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aks13

Comment on part-6A

Fascinating update dr.

Arjun n Riya's POVs were amazingly written.

Yayyy comletely dedicated to Ariya.

You very well described each n every emotion n thought which were going through their heart n mind when they saw eachother.

World seemed to be stopped for both of them at that very moment when they were in eachother arms.

His heart always knw that he loved her so much but his mind denied this fact everytime but at that time his heart overpower his mind.

Wow the way Arjun described her inner turmoil was too adorable.

OMG Till Arjun got the meaning of her last gestur, she ran away from their.

How much hard they both tried to control their heart but couldn't do it coz thy belonged to eachother.

Awww Riya was drooling over him!!!!!

Wow She forgot everything n its quite obvious ashe's world for her.

I hope after this encounter he accepted his feelings for her.

Loved it to the core.

Thanks for such a wonderful piece of work.

 

For vry vry vryyy... late comments.



Originally posted by Aks13

Mind blowing n a heart touching update dr.

Wow Riya's one lie turned their world upside down.

I never expected that Shree ever behave like that as he is a easy going person but If he was so much shattered by knowing this fact then we can only imagine the extent of pain n agony that other three r going through.

Its justified to some extent as if someone so close to your heart broke your trust thn you will feel an unimaginable pain that will break u compltly.

All this showed that the depth of relation they shared with her is way much stronger thn anyone can think.

Loved all their POVs dr, especially of Shree.

Hats off to u!!!!!!!

Thanks for pm dr.

Continue as soon as possible.

So so Sorry again for vry vry late comments.




Originally posted by Aks13

For the late dr n will surely unres both my comments tomorrow or day after that.

Aaarrggghhh that stupid net of mine is creating lot of troubleAngry Angry Angry Angry Angry.

Hey don't u think about discontuning it. It's going great.

Again sorry for the delay swthrt.


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Aks dear, what can I tell you????


Such beautiful comments, that too for each chapter...I am speechless.


Aur kitna cute teddy bear...thanks a lot.


Aur aapko sorry bolne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai, you are one of my most loyal readers.


I thoroughly enjoyed reading all your comments. Update today at 10. Watch out!!!Tongue
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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 5:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aabish_02

It was awesome mindblowing Thumbs Up 

Loved the quotation

the way you described shree feelings after knowing the truth 
was awesome 

omg rathore cried Cry 

and chottu was also shocked

is chap ko prhny k baad aisa lgta hy k bechari riya ko in sub ko mananay k liye boht mehnat krni pary ge Wink 

update next part soon
thanks for pm


Originally posted by Aabish_02

api ab toh update de do na plzzz

Thanks a lot for commenting as usual, my dear sis. I am really glad that you liked the quotation. I thought that it was appropriate.


Update aaj, dus baje. Aur mein tumhe dedicate karne waali hoon, along with a couple of others. You are a star! Watch out for the update today!!!Wink


Originally posted by Mishti_k5

Omg 
Shreee Cry

Blv totta hai insan bikher jata hai 

Porrr shree ,chotu and Sam bhaesa me cry it is hrt touchy update

U make me spechless I have no words 

Claps 4 u

Thanx 4 Pm me 

Update soon


Aww, my sweet Mishti. Thanks a lot for the wonderful comment.


Haan, bahut sahi kaha tumne, vishwas  toota to mano sab toota. Update todaySmile

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 5:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ll_megha_ll

Originally posted by Amri174

Originally posted by ll_megha_ll

res mar i come to first
or tabayat kaise hai


Megha, Update only at 10 PM sweety...so mein update karne se pehle tumhe PM karrongi...res kar lena tabSmile

mai tab online nahi aati


Oh, dont worry...I am replying to all the comments. After its done, I will PM you and you can Res:)
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not fair!!! i also want to res!!!! pm me tooo

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