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Ariya FF:"Deception,Intrigue..."#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 (Page 32)

AnjuRish IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 August 2013 at 5:57am | IP Logged
new reader dear
i have left the forum for sometime due to shortage of ariya stories
wow dhamaka writer u are
pls pls add me in the list

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ArShiDelena IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 29 August 2013 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
Awesome...Update Soon & Plzzz PM Me Smile

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.Avengers. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 30 August 2013 at 5:42am | IP Logged
everyone is being dhamki queen now a days...first it was muskan only now there is VQ and now u too...but cant blame as as writer we want to see more likes and comments...
so, coming back to ur update...hayy u made me sad. shree's break down, it was harsh. i dont know how i expected him to behave, but when he did, i want to ran away from his pain. poor ETFians to witness this state. and also, not to forget rathore and chotu was also there...thank god u didnt show them crying or i would have bring tsunami with me...lolz.

then my supercop miss mukherjee. i am happy that u didnt show the confrontation yet. thoda aur tarapne do mr rawte ko...i want their separation to be dragged more lol. evil me...but how she escaped and arjun was broken, ahaan, me liked it. such a sadist i am . 

the way u described shree and arjun's emotion, i dont have the heart to go through that was awesome and intense, total opposite of me. so sorry and excuse me for that. but again loved it like ever...but hey no precap? not fair...and next time long update plsss

hello hi bye bye

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ninii Senior Member

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Posted: 31 August 2013 at 3:37am | IP Logged
Wow what a update just loved it
aysha and liza dnt even have any idea abt whats going on
the update was very emotional just felt so sad i was crying while reading
it just touched my heart and rathod had tears n shree aur chotu Cry
ur every update is so gud tht have no words to explain
i loved loved loved loved loved it
thnks for such a touching beautiful update

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sony1990 Groupbie

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Posted: 31 August 2013 at 5:18am | IP Logged
hi dear i am sorry for the late reply was really busy i read the chapter but could not comment and then as soon as i got time i re read both the chapters thrice it is superb wonderful job i liked the way you are protraying the inner thoughts of characters with their emotions and facial expression seriously yar take a bow!!!! i am eagerly waiting for next update 

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Aabish_02 Goldie

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Posted: 31 August 2013 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
plz update soon

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Aks13 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 03 September 2013 at 10:34am | IP Logged
Unres my comments on pg-29.
DivineDarkness IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 03 September 2013 at 2:50pm | IP Logged
Amri my dhamki queen update plzEmbarrassed

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