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Ariya FF:"Deception,Intrigue..."#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 (Page 30)

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 6:14pm | IP Logged
Fantastic update                                                          Shree's condition after knowing the truth that Riya is not dead is written beautifully. Rathore and chotu's condition after knowing the truth is also wonderfully described. OMG after knowing the truth rathore has tears in this eye. Shree and chotu is feeling betrated.                                                          If this the condition after knowing the truth that Riya is alive then what will be the condition when Riya will come face to face with etf?                                                          Wonderfully written chapter. Their emotinal condition is very carefully and perfectly written .                                                          Thanks for the pm                                                          Pls continue soon

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 6:28pm | IP Logged
Omg...!!!
Again a brilliant update...
And ofcourse awexomen mindblowing...
The way Shree reacted ti it...it was so heartbreaking...he was sooo hurt...
N rathore...omg..he was also crying...
Their feelings were soo beautifully portrayed n written..
Anger,shock,surprise,happiness but the most prominent..A feeling if betrayal by their beloved one..who meant sooo much to them...
Thats sumthing really hurting.
Love it to de fullest...
Update soon..
N plzz dnt u dare end the story like ths..
Samjhy ya Samjhaoun...
Lolz..

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 8:16pm | IP Logged
I just read your ff. It is so interesting with all the twist and turns. so many mysteries. I really love how you depict every emotion of every character perfectly. Update soon. love your ff

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Posted: 26 August 2013 at 12:32am | IP Logged
omg 
rathore too crying
poor shree and chotu

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Posted: 26 August 2013 at 2:55am | IP Logged
hey dear beautiful story..
just read all the parts..
loved it..
riya is alive..hurray..
shree,chotu,rathore n arjun feeling betrayed..
wel,justified..
ariya meet is superb..
plz contunue soon..

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Posted: 26 August 2013 at 3:24am | IP Logged
loved it. you really expressed the emotions really good. but I hope they understand the reason why riya had to do this and forget their anger. please don't quit the story and update soon.

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Posted: 26 August 2013 at 3:56am | IP Logged
Unres my comment on pg28

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Posted: 26 August 2013 at 7:57am | IP Logged
I have no words to describe this one!!
And I really do mean it!! It was just too perfect for words!
From the first word to the last I couldn't stop the tears!! Cry
And shree is one of those people who can stay clam in the most dire situations!
But seeing him like this... Cry It's really surprising how we can feel sooo much that we feel like 
Destroying everything around us!! He may seem like he is fine from the outside, but from his outburst 
He is broken inside! 
Rathore and chottu were no better!! And rathore was crying!! Cry
You just described each one of their emotions very well!! It was just awesome awesome and awesome!!! 
This was another emotion packed chapter that was just perfect!!! Embarrassed
Thank you 
And 
Update soon!!! 

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