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Posted: 14 August 2013 at 6:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 1993.ssg

Congraculation for 2nd thread.                                                          Fantastic update Love it Shree wants forgot Riya by immersing himself in his work but it won't work . Love shree's concer for Arjun. M.K. Collect information about mr.gupta. M.K. Engaged the watchman of gupt's building and Riya and Tim went inside the apparmen . Tim find a secret drawer. And riya find a file and from the drawer and comes to know that Arjun's life is in danger. Riya's fellings were beautifully written after she comes to know that Arjun is in danger . Arjun was unable to belive that Riya hide something from them. Arjun's thought was beautifully described. Liza is in love with Shree they knows each other from kindergarden. Ayesha is upset because rathore shouted on her. Shree is so sweet he said sorry to ayesha. Is that undercover woman is Riya whom Ayesha meet? Overall beautiful update thanks for the pm    Waiting for next parts.


Thanks for the lovely comment, honey. I'm really glad to see how closely you read the two partsTongue

As always, I am really thankful for your continued encouragement of this story. Hope you like the next two parts as well.

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Posted: 14 August 2013 at 7:10am | IP Logged
thanks for dedication dear
the update as usual was awesome
very well written

shree is concerned for arjun
arjun is really hurt becoz of riya
arjun life is in danger
waiting for next parts
update soon

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Posted: 14 August 2013 at 7:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aabish_02

thanks for dedication dear
the update as usual was awesome
very well written

shree is concerned for arjun
arjun is really hurt becoz of riya
arjun life is in danger
waiting for next parts
update soon

You're welcome! It was really sweet of you for having reminded me about the next chapter. It's awesome to know that readers care.


Thanks for commenting! The next chapter will be dynamic and have a stunning ending. Stay tuned;)

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Posted: 14 August 2013 at 7:40am | IP Logged

Commendable work dr.

The portrayal of their deep felt  emotions was remarkably done.!!!!!!!

They all tried their best to divert their mind by keeping themselves busy but they failed miserably coz right now random thoughts about Riya ruled their minds which shows that how devasted they are from sudden relevation about her n also shows the depth of their relationship.

The way you anatomized the contrast in Arjun's behaviour through Shree's POV was fabulous.!!!!!!

In this part I saw a glimpse of  silent but close bond that Choree share with their seniors.

OMG She opened the lock through her hairpin. She is way beyond my imagination.!!!!!!

 Wht the!!!!!! Arjun's life is in danger. Wow Riya was almost broken after knowing the fact.

Loved the way Tim tried to pacified her n it shows that he knw about her equation with all of thm.

Now I m 100% sure that this Siddharth Gupta is handyman of none other then Sik. I mean who else it can be that wanted to kill Arjun.

 Arjun couldn't concentrate on his work coz these sudden turn of events shaken him to the core.

OMG how much he had suffered since chilhood n still suffering. No wonder he's like this!!!!!

Why is love so complicated??????? Poor Arjun he is still in denial mode.

I hope that he realize his feelings soon n his anger doesn't overpower his love when thy meet.

He himself  is confused. I mean he can't love her coz she lied to him or coz of the feeling of betrayal towards his wife or he simply want to run away this feeling of  love.

Wow he also knw that Choree mimicked him n made fun of him behind his back.

Awww his heart calmed just by the memories of her smile.

Loved Liza's POV.

What is the scene between Shriza?????? Why they both are like this if thy knw echothr frm a longer time????? What happened btwn thm in college?????

I think Liza loved him but he never understood her. Is that the case or I m thinking way too much???????

Loved the way Shree apologized to Aisha. Wow Liza was pissed with Shree coz he ignored her. Loved both the girls POV in the end.

Loved it so so much!!!!!!!

Thanks for pm dr.



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Edited on pg 1!

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Posted: 14 August 2013 at 8:35am | IP Logged
FIRST OF ALL CONGRATES FOR NEW THREAD


 i have never thought this single lie will affect them this much.
It completely shows that how much they are attached and loved eachother as family.
She always fun loving girl. help other, never bear pain for her closed ones and makes all of them happy. her bond with her friend. i love that.
i am scared when the see her what will be there reaction.
And this update also expressing the feeling, the way the each memberes of the team felt for eachother.
Loved the way arjun understood shree, that he too was going through the same turmoil as his.
But the difference was he felt this pain is much more
For shree she was his best friend his best buddy but here arjun she is more special for him. she was the one who cares for him, who trust him and now her own identity was fake.
Now just waiting, when he will realize this little damn thing that he loves her.
and i know tum itni jaldi nahi dikhane wali.
love the way riya concerning about arjun.
continue soon.
and thanx for pm.
and get well soon.



Edited by mastmegha22 - 16 August 2013 at 1:47am

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Posted: 14 August 2013 at 9:24am | IP Logged
Congrats Smiley eCard


For the new thread dr


For this wonderful piece of work.

I hope u r fine now. Take care of urself dr.

Sorry dr but unres my comment later coz right now I m in the market n using mobile but can't resist myself to read it.
Plzzz dr write some more Ariya stuff.


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@ aks, @mastmegha and @vampirequeen


Thanks for the lovely responses and RES-es, guys. Update in 15 mins, just some last min editing.

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