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Ariya FF:"Deception,Intrigue..."#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 (Page 29)

Christeee IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 26 August 2013 at 12:32am | IP Logged
rathore too crying
poor shree and chotu

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playagame Senior Member

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Posts: 220

Posted: 26 August 2013 at 2:55am | IP Logged
hey dear beautiful story..
just read all the parts..
loved it..
riya is alive..hurray..
shree,chotu,rathore n arjun feeling betrayed..
ariya meet is superb..
plz contunue soon..

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abjeya Senior Member

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Posts: 554

Posted: 26 August 2013 at 3:24am | IP Logged
loved it. you really expressed the emotions really good. but I hope they understand the reason why riya had to do this and forget their anger. please don't quit the story and update soon.

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DivineDarkness IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 26 August 2013 at 3:56am | IP Logged
Unres my comment on pg28

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Live-life IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 11501

Posted: 26 August 2013 at 7:57am | IP Logged
I have no words to describe this one!!
And I really do mean it!! It was just too perfect for words!
From the first word to the last I couldn't stop the tears!! Cry
And shree is one of those people who can stay clam in the most dire situations!
But seeing him like this... Cry It's really surprising how we can feel sooo much that we feel like 
Destroying everything around us!! He may seem like he is fine from the outside, but from his outburst 
He is broken inside! 
Rathore and chottu were no better!! And rathore was crying!! Cry
You just described each one of their emotions very well!! It was just awesome awesome and awesome!!! 
This was another emotion packed chapter that was just perfect!!! Embarrassed
Thank you 
Update soon!!! 

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Live-life IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 August 2013 at 8:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Amri174

Originally posted by Live-life

Me back!! I am really sorry I couldn't comment on the few previous updates! I was busy! Actually 23rd co meri flight thi! Isliye I was busy in preps!! 
But now I am back! 
And coming to the update!! 
It was fantabulous as usual!! And I am glad that you dedicated this chapter to Ariya!! Smile
Finally they met!! I just couldn't stop myself from drifting into the past and reviewing their first meeting!! Embarrassed
It was just as if time had frozen then and today reading this the same thing happened for me again!! Embarrassed
Vo kehthe hai na ki history repeats itself! 
This chapter was full of emotions! Well...mixed emotions!! LOL
And the date that is mentioned in this chapter, on which all this is happening! 
It's my birthday date!!!! And that was the biggest surprise to me!!! Big smile Although my birthday is long gone but it's never too late for gifts right!!? WinkLOL
And this chapter was the most awesomeset, the worlds most coolest and the most emotion packed gift I have ever received!!! Big smile
And I wanna thank you for that!!!! Thank you thank you thank you!!!! ClapClap
You are really awesome!! 
Love u!!!! Big smile

And sorry again!!! 
Update soon!!! Please please!

Hi! Nice to see you after a long time!!! Hope your preps went wellSmile

And yes, a purely AriYa chapter for all of you. Hope you liked it.Big smile

So you were born on 19th April? Aww...My birthday falls 2 days earlier on the 17thSmile

Their first meeting...what can I say? I just keep watching that video again and again. What a bindass moment, nah

Thanks for liking this chapter, I was glad that you liked it. Aur abb se, comment on each update...samjhi ya samjhaun???LOL

Ohhh!! So your birthday is on the 17th of April!!
That is awesome!!Big smile
Well, happy late birthday!! Bahooot late hai but, mujhe to abhi pata Chala na!! LOL

And yes I shall comment on each chapter!! And your welcome!! Mein Bhale hi comment kar na bhul jaon but like Karna kabhi bhi nahi Bhulti! Same he ya ... Samjhaun? Tongue

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IshqDewaani Goldie

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Posted: 26 August 2013 at 12:09pm | IP Logged

i  really love this ff...
plzz dont even think about stopping it...plzzz

this part was emotional...i could feel shree's pain.. the way you described his pain was just super solid...

keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Anushass Senior Member

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Posted: 26 August 2013 at 1:24pm | IP Logged
nice update dear... emotions are catched up very well... waiting for the next update...

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