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Ariya FF:"Deception,Intrigue..."#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 (Page 29)

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 9:43am | IP Logged

Comment on part-6A

Fascinating update dr.

Arjun n Riya's POVs were amazingly written.

Yayyy comletely dedicated to Ariya.

You very well described each n every emotion n thought which were going through their heart n mind when they saw eachother.

World seemed to be stopped for both of them at that very moment when they were in eachother arms.

His heart always knw that he loved her so much but his mind denied this fact everytime but at that time his heart overpower his mind.

Wow the way Arjun described her inner turmoil was too adorable.

OMG Till Arjun got the meaning of her last gestur, she ran away from their.

How much hard they both tried to control their heart but couldn't do it coz thy belonged to eachother.

Awww Riya was drooling over him!!!!!

Wow She forgot everything n its quite obvious ashe's world for her.

I hope after this encounter he accepted his feelings for her.

Loved it to the core.

Thanks for such a wonderful piece of work.

 

For vry vry vryyy... late comments.



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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 9:45am | IP Logged

Mind blowing n a heart touching update dr.

Wow Riya's one lie turned their world upside down.

I never expected that Shree ever behave like that as he is a easy going person but If he was so much shattered by knowing this fact then we can only imagine the extent of pain n agony that other three r going through.

Its justified to some extent as if someone so close to your heart broke your trust thn you will feel an unimaginable pain that will break u compltly.

All this showed that the depth of relation they shared with her is way much stronger thn anyone can think.

Loved all their POVs dr, especially of Shree.

Hats off to u!!!!!!!

Thanks for pm dr.

Continue as soon as possible.

So so Sorry again for vry vry late comments.




Edited by Aks13 - 03 September 2013 at 10:33am

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 9:53am | IP Logged
Omg 
Shreee Cry

Blv totta hai insan bikher jata hai 

Porrr shree ,chotu and Sam bhaesa me cry it is hrt touchy update

U make me spechless I have no words 

Claps 4 u

Thanx 4 Pm me 

Update soon

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 9:57am | IP Logged
For the late dr n will surely unres both my comments tomorrow or day after that.

Aaarrggghhh that stupid net of mine is creating lot of troubleAngry Angry Angry Angry Angry.

Hey don't u think about discontuning it. It's going great.

Again sorry for the delay swthrt.


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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 10:03am | IP Logged
It was awesome mindblowing Thumbs Up

Loved the quotation

the way you described shree feelings after knowing the truth
was awesome

omg rathore cried Cry

and chottu was also shocked

is chap ko prhny k baad aisa lgta hy k bechari riya ko in sub ko mananay k liye boht mehnat krni pary ge Wink

update next part soon
thanks for pm

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 10:34am | IP Logged
unres my comment on page 28
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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 10:36am | IP Logged
Awwssmmm part
supperbly written
loved it
cont sooon
thnx 4 pm

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 12:57pm | IP Logged
emotional update...

shree totally broken and he was not able to control himself...

rathore and chottu too...

sense of betrayal by a loved one and that too from riya ...

update soon

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