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Ariya FF:"Deception,Intrigue..."#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 (Page 28)

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saritak IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 7:54am | IP Logged
awesome part
love itThumbs Up

Edited by khemanisarita - 25 August 2013 at 9:12am

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ll_megha_ll IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 8:04am | IP Logged
again you rocked dear.
i have no words to describe.
sacchi mai agar koi apna hum jispe vishvas karte hai uski care karte hai usse pyaar karte hai agar vo hame dhoka deta hai to seedha dil pe chot lagte hai or jeena mushkil ho jata hai or kisi pe vishvas karne ka man nahi kata.
or aisa hi kuch ETF boys ke saath hua hai.
i am really crying when shree says riya is alive and she bertrayed us our friendship our trustCry Cry Cry Cry Cry  CryCry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry  Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry
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Choree and rathore feels bertrayed.
i am scared what about arjun when he knows the truthwhat was his reaction.
ek taraf riya ka pov sahi hai usne jo kuch kiya apne desh ke liye kiya or doosri taraf etf boys they feel bertrayed.
i am speechless.
continue soon.
and thax for pm.

Edited by ll_megha_ll - 27 August 2013 at 1:49am

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sharmaayushi Senior Member

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 8:17am | IP Logged
hey dear
thnx 4 updating today and the pm
it was really a sad and full of emotional part
shree has really broken out to tha deepest core of his heart
they way shree collepsed really was hard to imagine
its hard to see calm and a brilliant officer in this stage
the shock has deeply hurted him
the feelings of bretraying a friend by beautifully shown
cant see this situatuion of our gadget freak
loved the line"But overriding his happiness was the sense of betrayal that was stinging every part of his body."
both rathore and chotu r equally shocked as shree is
the lines shree spoke rooted yhem to their places
loved and heartouching lines"
Ri...Riya...You know, Rath...Rathore Sir, Ch...Chottu...She is She is...ali..NOT DEAD!!! SHE IS ALIVE!!! She...she...pla...played us. SHE TRICKED US!!!"
the way he said this line made my heart ache
the way u showed rathore expression and mind feeling by making him turn with a pale face
omg rathore crying ...cant handel this dear
chotu is reallty rooted to the ground
this lines chotu said" could she do this to us?" clearly shows how much betrayed he felt
three of them were bound with a tread called riya
now three of him r suffering from emotional ill health
thnx 4 such an emtional part
hatsoff dear
salute 2 u 4 this great part
hey plz dear dont discontinue plzzz
i love ur work plz dont to that
continue soon
thnx once again
will be waiting eagerly 4 nextg update
plz post it soon

Edited by sharmaayushi - 25 August 2013 at 10:32am

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satanslove IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 8:32am | IP Logged
res...need to catch up on  chapters...will unres in a while

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DivineDarkness IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 9:02am | IP Logged
Looks like Dhamki Queen is back in action!!!!

Awesome update... Emotional One...
What has Riya's lie done to them... if this is Shree's reaction then Arjun's well that will destroy everything...
Shree's feelings are beautifully potrayed...
He will never forgive her!!! Cant blame him also she was his bff *sigh*
Rathore's reaction on hearing  Riya alive!!! That shows how much they cared for her what she was for them... but all they got was cheating and betrayal... How xan she eo this??? 
Chotu he too is shattered... well trio was partners in crime nah... 
I feel really angry at Riya for doing this to the guys and breaking their heart their trust like this...
Well its time to see Arjun's reaction now after the realisation sinks in... Riya will have to answer lot of questions... 
Continue soon me waiting...

Edited by Leki - 26 August 2013 at 3:55am

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shah10 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 9:13am | IP Logged
Wow.. Awesome

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jia03 Goldie

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 9:38am | IP Logged
Awesome chapter...Clap
you have beautifully portrayed their emotions...
shree outburst... everything was perfect...

please dont think of discontinuing...
its an awesome FFStar... and i always look forward for its update...Smile
will be waiting for the next chapterSmile

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