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Ariya FF:"Deception,Intrigue..."#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 (Page 28)

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 9:57am | IP Logged
For the late dr n will surely unres both my comments tomorrow or day after that.

Aaarrggghhh that stupid net of mine is creating lot of troubleAngry Angry Angry Angry Angry.

Hey don't u think about discontuning it. It's going great.

Again sorry for the delay swthrt.


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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 10:03am | IP Logged
It was awesome mindblowing Thumbs Up

Loved the quotation

the way you described shree feelings after knowing the truth
was awesome

omg rathore cried Cry

and chottu was also shocked

is chap ko prhny k baad aisa lgta hy k bechari riya ko in sub ko mananay k liye boht mehnat krni pary ge Wink

update next part soon
thanks for pm

Edited by Aabish_02 - 25 August 2013 at 10:04am

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 10:34am | IP Logged
unres my comment on page 28
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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 10:36am | IP Logged
Awwssmmm part
supperbly written
loved it
cont sooon
thnx 4 pm

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 12:57pm | IP Logged
emotional update...

shree totally broken and he was not able to control himself...

rathore and chottu too...

sense of betrayal by a loved one and that too from riya ...

update soon

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 6:14pm | IP Logged
Fantastic update                                                          Shree's condition after knowing the truth that Riya is not dead is written beautifully. Rathore and chotu's condition after knowing the truth is also wonderfully described. OMG after knowing the truth rathore has tears in this eye. Shree and chotu is feeling betrated.                                                          If this the condition after knowing the truth that Riya is alive then what will be the condition when Riya will come face to face with etf?                                                          Wonderfully written chapter. Their emotinal condition is very carefully and perfectly written .                                                          Thanks for the pm                                                          Pls continue soon

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 6:28pm | IP Logged
Omg...!!!
Again a brilliant update...
And ofcourse awexomen mindblowing...
The way Shree reacted ti it...it was so heartbreaking...he was sooo hurt...
N rathore...omg..he was also crying...
Their feelings were soo beautifully portrayed n written..
Anger,shock,surprise,happiness but the most prominent..A feeling if betrayal by their beloved one..who meant sooo much to them...
Thats sumthing really hurting.
Love it to de fullest...
Update soon..
N plzz dnt u dare end the story like ths..
Samjhy ya Samjhaoun...
Lolz..

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 8:16pm | IP Logged
I just read your ff. It is so interesting with all the twist and turns. so many mysteries. I really love how you depict every emotion of every character perfectly. Update soon. love your ff

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