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Ariya FF:"Deception,Intrigue..."#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 (Page 26)

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
fantastic update... it was fab... loved it...

arjun and riya's POV's were beautifully portrayed...

riya ran away again, as a trained spy she'll be used to it... LOL

now arjun will not sit quietly, he 'll be there behind her, she should be careful next time... and ETF will be also there...

want to know shree, chottu and rathore's reaction when they get to know their miss statistics is very much alive and she saved arjun...
update soon 

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 2:20pm | IP Logged
Well nice update
looking forward for next update

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 2:38pm | IP Logged
nice update dear... feelings of arjun and riya are written so very well... its an another awesome update as usual... SmileSmileSmile
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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 4:42pm | IP Logged
Omg..!!!
They met in such a way...and then...
She ran...!!!!!...
Whoa..Poor Arjun... Cry
What a brilliant update...
All their feelings and emotions writtne soo beautifully..
Love with this story...
U are an addition to my fav writers in this forum...
Update soon th next part...
N plzz ant a thorough convo of Roya with Etf also..
Waiting...!!!
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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 10:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aabish_02

Its ok u dont apologise itna zabardast update diya.
oh yes arjun ka famous ghussa... bechari riya pata nhi kya hoga 
bt our acp loves her akhir kb tk ghussa kry ga maan he jaye ga Wink


Haha...very true. His famous ghussa, but how longer will he be angry with her?

Maan to jayega hiiEmbarrassed


Originally posted by sharmaayushi

i loved so i commented dear
and i i can guess and see ur hardwork to just give us the readers an update
my salute to u
hatsoff dear
fantastic job
continue it plz


Aww, thanks Ayushi!!! But really, take the credit due to youSmile

Originally posted by Anushass

nice update dear... feelings of arjun and riya are written so very well... its an another awesome update as usual... SmileSmileSmile 


Aww, thanks for commenting so diligently, yaar. I hope you enjoy the upcoming updates as well;)


Originally posted by ninii

Well nice update
looking forward for next update


Arrey, ninii jii...aayiye, aayiye. Aap hii ke comment ka intezaar tha.

Yes, the next update will be today. So stay tuned:)
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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 10:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by nakshatra92

fantastic update... it was fab... loved it...

arjun and riya's POV's were beautifully portrayed...

riya ran away again, as a trained spy she'll be used to it... LOL

now arjun will not sit quietly, he 'll be there behind her, she should be careful next time... and ETF will be also there...

want to know shree, chottu and rathore's reaction when they get to know their miss statistics is very much alive and she saved arjun...
update soon 

Arrey...Nakshatra jii...your comment shines as a star true to your nameTongue

Yes, Arjun musn't underestimate Riya. She has more skills than he ever thought she had. So he must quickly catch her the next timeWink


And yes, the ETF's reactions will be awesome...so stay tunedSmile
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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 10:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pisces_Gurl

Omg..!!!
They met in such a way...and then...
She ran...!!!!!...
Whoa..Poor Arjun... Cry
What a brilliant update...
All their feelings and emotions writtne soo beautifully..
Love with this story...
U are an addition to my fav writers in this forum...
Update soon th next part...
N plzz ant a thorough convo of Roya with Etf also..
Waiting...!!!


Hii! And thanks for the lovely comment as usual, Pisces_Gurl!!!Embarrassed

Yes, Riya ran aur humare ACP saab dekhte hi reh gaye. But koi nahin, he will samjhaufy her very very soon!!!Big smile


Aww, thanks for saying that you are in love with my story. That's the best compliment I can get!!!

Yes, the convo of Riya with the ETF will  surely happen. So don't worry!!!Smile

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 12:04am | IP Logged
Hi!!!
Me back!! I am really sorry I couldn't comment on the few previous updates! I was busy! Actually 23rd co meri flight thi! Isliye I was busy in preps!! 
But now I am back! 
And coming to the update!! 
It was fantabulous as usual!! And I am glad that you dedicated this chapter to Ariya!! Smile
Finally they met!! I just couldn't stop myself from drifting into the past and reviewing their first meeting!! Embarrassed
It was just as if time had frozen then and today reading this the same thing happened for me again!! Embarrassed
Vo kehthe hai na ki history repeats itself! 
This chapter was full of emotions! Well...mixed emotions!! LOL
And the date that is mentioned in this chapter, on which all this is happening! 
It's my birthday date!!!! And that was the biggest surprise to me!!! Big smile Although my birthday is long gone but it's never too late for gifts right!!? WinkLOL
And this chapter was the most awesomeset, the worlds most coolest and the most emotion packed gift I have ever received!!! Big smile
And I wanna thank you for that!!!! Thank you thank you thank you!!!! ClapClap
You are really awesome!! 
Love u!!!! Big smile

And sorry again!!! 
Update soon!!! Please please!

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