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Ariya FF:"Deception,Intrigue..."#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 (Page 24)

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 10:43am | IP Logged
Thnx 4 adding me
i will surely comment on every chapter

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 10:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sharmaayushi

hey dear
thnx 4 the pm and such a long and minddrifting update
waiting so eagerly 4 this update
thnx once again
coming to the story
the way u started the update took my mind to a next level
the way u portraited arjun's emotion and inner feeling on seeing his love in front of his eyes...great
the way u depicted riya's face 4 arjun was amazing
"A face that he had often imagined in front of him since the time she'd been snatched away from him."
"A face that he was afraid of forgetting since her death, in spite of recounting it a countless number of times a day."
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A face that he had often tried to conjure up from the innermost recesses of his mind."
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A face whose features were imprinted forever in his mind's eye, branding his very soul."
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A face which had the power to make him feel."
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A face which had the power to strip him of his sanity and drive him stark raving mad."
the lines were very beautiful and heartouching...thnx
arjun's inner feeling about dead people was awesome
the fight between the heart and brain was truely written
the heart line"
The heart wants what the heart wants."
was amazing
the emotions like anger,fear,happiness was beautifully expressed
riya's feeling were written mindblowing way
the way u showed arjun's pain when riya was leaving him made my heart cry
riya loves arjun very deeply
i know riya itni jaldi arjun ke hath nai aane wali
thnx once again dear
continue soon
will be waiting 4 next update
thnx 4 updating a long part too
hugs to u dearHug
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Aww...you're making me blush like crazy, Ayushi. Big hug for such a lovely comment, my dear.


I am so, so glad that you liked the parts you highlighted. Believe it or not, it took three days to scratch my brains and come up with thatLOL So yeah, really delighted with your response.


My salute to you for your loyalty to my little story, my dear. You've been following and commenting right from the beginning, and I can't thank you enough for that.


Meet you tomorrow!!!Smile
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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 10:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aabish_02

It was awesome
loved it
you described arjun and riya pov very beautifully
arjun finally met his lady love
he s madly in love with riya
riya saved arjun
but she ran away from him
but no worries our hero will find her soon Wink
waiting for ur next update eagerly
thanks for the pm

Thanks a lot, Aabish ji. And my apologies again for delaying the update.


Yes, now that Arjun and Riya have met, the story has finally begun. But bad idea, Riya, for running away from your man. Unka gussa nahin pata tumhe?Wink


And yes, as you rightly said, he will find her soon.EmbarrassedBig smile



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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 10:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by _Nikita_

Thnx 4 adding me
i will surely comment on every chapter


Aww, thanks so much! I hope to live up to your expectationsSmile
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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 11:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Amri174

Originally posted by Aabish_02

It was awesome
loved it
you described arjun and riya pov very beautifully
arjun finally met his lady love
he s madly in love with riya
riya saved arjun
but she ran away from him
but no worries our hero will find her soon Wink
waiting for ur next update eagerly
thanks for the pm


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Thanks a lot, Aabish ji. And my apologies again for delaying the update.</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Yes, now that Arjun and Riya have met, the story has finally begun. But bad idea, Riya, for running away from your man. Unka gussa nahin pata tumhe?Wink</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">And yes, as you rightly said, he will find her soon.EmbarrassedBig smile</font>




Its ok u dont apologise itna zabardast update diya.
oh yes arjun ka famous ghussa... bechari riya pata nhi kya hoga
bt our acp loves her akhir kb tk ghussa kry ga maan he jaye ga Wink

Edited by Aabish_02 - 24 August 2013 at 11:40am

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 11:56am | IP Logged
i loved so i commented dear
and i i can guess and see ur hardwork to just give us the readers an update
my salute to u
hatsoff dear
fantastic job
continue it plz

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
fantastic update... it was fab... loved it...

arjun and riya's POV's were beautifully portrayed...

riya ran away again, as a trained spy she'll be used to it... LOL

now arjun will not sit quietly, he 'll be there behind her, she should be careful next time... and ETF will be also there...

want to know shree, chottu and rathore's reaction when they get to know their miss statistics is very much alive and she saved arjun...
update soon 

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 2:20pm | IP Logged
Well nice update
looking forward for next update

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