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Ariya FF:"Deception,Intrigue..."#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 (Page 10)

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 2:38am | IP Logged
i am glad you are feeling better.
and i am also glad you liked my comment.
jab acchi tarah se theek ho jao tabhi update dena samjhe ya samjhun

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 2:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Amri174

Originally posted by Leki

I will unres my comment today :-)

I'll be waiting, Leki! And I will immediately post a precap, especially for you, if you do;)
Aww i vl do it before 6 or after 9 sure...

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 2:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Leki

Originally posted by Amri174

Originally posted by Leki

I will unres my comment today :-)

I'll be waiting, Leki! And I will immediately post a precap, especially for you, if you do;)
Aww i vl do it before 6 or after 9 sure...

hie leki
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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 2:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mastmegha22

i am glad you are feeling better.
and i am also glad you liked my comment.
jab acchi tarah se theek ho jao tabhi update dena samjhe ya samjhun

Samajh gayiLOL

Originally posted by Leki

Aww i vl do it before 6 or after 9 sure...


Will be waitingEmbarrassed
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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 3:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Amri174

Originally posted by mastmegha22

i am glad you are feeling better.
and i am also glad you liked my comment.
jab acchi tarah se theek ho jao tabhi update dena samjhe ya samjhun

Samajh gayiLOL

Originally posted by Leki

Aww i vl do it before 6 or after 9 sure...


Will be waitingEmbarrassed

good filal ke liye byee mai trust ka update dene jaa rahi hoon

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 3:51am | IP Logged
hey just read part 5 A B C D
and they were once again super duper top  update...!!!
poor shree thinking about riya and her memories...!!! and kitan tired tha but couldn't say it to  arjunLOL and his analysis on arjun was bang on...Clap
and arjun hmm he inally realized ki he deep down somewhere he loved riya... and her betrayal about her identity is making him restless...!!!
okay so riya found that siddharth guy wants to kill arjun... her reactions were awesomely written...could actually visualize it infront of meWinkEmbarrassed just perfect her fear her anxiety everything...!!!
hmm so finally sameer  and chottu also got  a lead on that sidharth guy... gosh is such aCensored threatening sam... iske consequences usko pta nai hai abhi.. jab pta lagega to maza aayega...!!!
aur sameer ka gussa omg .. koi na koi to zarur pitegaWink
aisha liza convo and their thoughts  about men  were very heart touching.. both understands what other is going through afterall they both are suffering from the same thing... no notice from their lovers..!! aur ye aisha kiske baare mai baat kar rhi thi? undercover agent? was it riya????
aisha shree scene was an another treat... loved it...!!!
omg arjun is now having nightmares about riya mixed with roshni...!!!Shocked and wants a  proper closure for her...!!! 
hmm so ariya meeting dustin cohelo almost at the same time??? any reason behind it?Shocked
well riya sure can do anything for arjun... she risked her identity and came to tell commissioner  about her findings..!! inspite of her boss's refusal...!!!
so shree knows riya is alive after seeing her footage in that club's video...!!!
and now arjun also knows that he has actually seen her protecting him almost lying on himWink
guess soon everyone will found out  about her...!!
waise love the way she saved him...!!!Wink and arjun was comforted by her presence...!! awww
hope she doesn't run away...D'oh
can't wait to see everyone's reaction on seeing her aliveWink
what no precap?Shocked that's not fairTongue hum bechare bachon ka kuch to khyal karoLOL
update soon...!!! eagerly waiting for the next chapterWinkEmbarrassedDay Dreaming
P.S. congo shongo  for the 2nd threadPartyDancing loved this mega update on occasion of the 2nd threadWink


Edited by devildiva21 - 16 August 2013 at 3:55am

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 3:52am | IP Logged

Splendid work swthrt. Hats off to u!!!!!!

Loved Sam in his rowdy rathore mood.

OMG thy both were in killer mood n that manager was provoking thm. Oppsss wrong move.

You provide a great scope to Rathod's character to demonstrate his capabilities as a ETF chief, which he never get in the serial. Not only Rathod but u gv equal space to each n every character.

Loved the way Rathod shut the mouth of that manager through his straight frwrd talks.              

Yeyyy thy got the lead coz of Rathod n that Sid malhotra is a piece of crap.

Wow Arjun's sleep was again disturbed by a nightmare but this time its about Riya's death in place of Rosh. May be coz his mind was clouded by her thoughts but where is the gunshot n that too in musty godown was cme frm????? Is this some kind of indication???????

Finally he decided to clear all the mess by talking to commissioner. That's nice thought.

The interrogation of Sid malhtr was damn exciting. He looked like a hard nut to crack but our very own rowdy Rathore showed him his true place. I wish I can saw his expression at that time.

Waaooo Riya can go to any extent to save him. That's amazing n this is wht called true love!!!!

OMG hw cleverly she assigned the task to safeguard Arjun frm any kind of threat to M.K. n Tim.

Wow Shree was shocked beyond limits whn he saw Riya in the footage. I m glad that he didn't get fainted. Wht happened whn he see her face-to-face??????

Oh gosh!!!!!!! Somebody aimed at Arjun but Riya saved him in the nick of time.

Awww he felt that he was familiar with the touch.

Finally thy cme face-to-face.

Cliffhanger!!!!!!!!

Waiting for the fire works.

Continue as soon as possible.



Edited by Aks13 - 16 August 2013 at 3:52am

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 4:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Leki

Once in a while you can come first no problem

Angry mujhe khus hona chahiye! Hamesa tum ya divi le jate ho first comment
Ouch ROFL

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