hey dear
thnx 4 the pm and such a long and minddrifting update
waiting so eagerly 4 this update
thnx once again
coming to the story
the way u started the update took my mind to a next level
the way u portraited arjun's emotion and inner feeling on seeing his love in front of his eyes...great
the way u depicted riya's face 4 arjun was amazing
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A face that he had often imagined in front of him since the time she'd been snatched away from him."
"A face that he was afraid of forgetting since her death, in spite of recounting it a countless number of times a day."
"A face that he had often tried to conjure up from the innermost recesses of his mind."
" A face whose features were imprinted forever in his mind's eye, branding his very soul."
"A face which had the power to make him feel."
"A face which had the power to strip him of his sanity and drive him stark raving mad."
the lines were very beautiful and heartouching...thnx
arjun's inner feeling about dead people was awesome
the fight between the heart and brain was truely written
the heart line"The heart wants what the heart wants."
was amazing
the emotions like anger,fear,happiness was beautifully expressed
riya's feeling were written mindblowing way
the way u showed arjun's pain when riya was leaving him made my heart cry
riya loves arjun very deeply
i know riya itni jaldi arjun ke hath nai aane wali
thnx once again dear
continue soon
will be waiting 4 next update
thnx 4 updating a long part too
hugs to u dear🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
Edited by sharmaayushi - 10 years ago
