Originally posted by: rocking_gal
ohk..now u have to give me time to edit it back again heheh...this one is from cell so short one just a gist of my main comment k...
i have read A nd B yesterday nd sry to tell u i have poor memory so how much i remb will comment on it now...It's okay, dear.
so all of them hurt Haan...well do they have right to dnt they...
the 4 guys bcoz of such a shattering truth..
aisha hmm b bcoz of Sameer...
Arjun nd shree feelings bang on...Thanks, I am glad that you liked these parts;)
so liza is observant one...hmmm
she caught on every detail very well let it be guys ya aisha turmoil...
hehehhe her heart did skip a beat when she saw shree approaching her..
chweet...
loved aisha and shree convo...how apologies are done in frndship...lovelyI am glad that you liked the bonding between ayesha and lisa and the shreeza scenes;)
now coming to c nd d part
ok now this was fab one gal sply the the d part ahem ahem u guessed it right it was bcoz of know what...Yes, I can guess why😉
wow riya literally fought and stood on her on ground...loved it...
she went against all the protocols to keep him safe...
nd even though she couldn't be the one shadowing him she kept in her best supports...Riya is madly in love with him and that's why she is prepared to go to any extent to save him😊
so shree did discover the truth lastly...lastly He knows riya is alive...Yes, technically Shree found it put first but it was Arjun who'll meet her first😉
yes she is alive nd they know...dancing...heheh
wow the first person shree thinks to call is Arjun...luv u shree babu..,but u were little late...
god played a different game to bring out the truth nd had diff plan for their again first meeting...
so Arjun did feel comfort nd what now in a stranger embrace...oopps not stranger...riya...his riya...
very well described...Thanks😃
who was this hitman now...
but should seriously thank dis Gupta nd hitman...in way dey did help a lot in bringing riya back to etf guys...
more will be edited from my lappy heheh...It's okay jii, your comment is already perfect.😊
well gal have to tell u u do deserve a hatsoff nd three cheers...
great style of writing nd can keep people hooked to your stry...
u are damn amazing writer...
so remb my request if anytime u write anything do remb us n keep us updated with ur work...will love to read them...
a good freshening thing to read after tiring day...bravo...!👏Aww, I really appreciate that😊 I am really glad that my story is able to bring a smile on your face. And how can I not remember you guys?
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