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ARIYA FF-


Deception, Intrigue...and Passion?


By Amri174


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Rating: T (Suitable for AGES 13 and older)


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THREAD TWO


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       Link to Thread  # 1:  THREAD ONE


     Thread  # 2

     Chapter 5A & B- Page 1

     Chapter 5C & DPage 4

     Chapter 6A         -Page 22

      Chapter 6B             -Page 28

      Chapter 6C          -Page 36   



    Link to Thread  # 3: THREAD THREE (Chapter 7 and onward)




   

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AUTHOR'S NOTE:


First of all, thanks a lot for supporting me and constantly commenting on the first thread to enable me to make a second thread. For the first time, a thread of mine has crossed fifty pages and I'm deliriously happyBig smile. I really am very grateful for all the encouragement you've thrown my way.





Secondly, I sincerely apologize for the unexpected delay of 5 days in updating Chapter 5. *ducks to avoid chappals*. I had a messy week- fell sick, recovered, went out of town...all in all, lots of turmoil.




I hope that this chapter will appease some of your anger towards me, and pacify you somewhat.Tongue It's a MEGA update- divided into  4 parts- A, B, C and D





5A & B will be posted now, and C & D AT 9:00 P.M. I.S.T today, which means five hours later. So don't forget to read the later parts;) And yeah, my update will also depend on the comments you leave for the first two parts, so don't forget to make me happy, LOL! I need the encouragement.





Chapter 5 is dedicated to riyasarkar, mastmegha and Aabish_02 for cutely reminding me about the update. Here you go, guys.   






Finally, thanks to all the faithful readers who liked and commented on Chapter 4. I really appreciate it. Without you, this tale wouldn't be here. 




SCROLL DOWN TO CHAPTER 5A.



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amazing updateClapClapClap
the undercover agent that aisha met is it ria???
will b eagerly waiting for part C & DSmile

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Originally posted by jia03

amazing updateClapClapClap
the undercover agent that aisha met is it ria???
will b eagerly waiting for part C & DSmile


Thanks for replying, jiSmile


As to the answer to this question- wait and watchWinkBig smile

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Heya congratulation for the second thread Party
u made us wait very loonnggg Ouch . As u said two more parts are coming! So i wll wait for that also! Koi ni!LOL
its like i am addicted to ths piece Star

fist tell me how are you? Embarrassed and i am nt angry at all! Health comes fisrt Tongue . So you take careHug

as always again a fantastic writing and lovely portraytionHeart

i have never thought this single lie will affect them this much!
Ouch.
It completely indicates that they how personally they were attached with her and now this feeling of being bitrayed by her is hurting them immenselyUnhappy.

She the always cool funloving specky will behave like this! The only thing i am feard of is their confrontation!
And this update also expressing the feeling, the way the each memberes of the team felt for eachother! Loved the way arjun understood shree, that he too was going through the same turmoil as his ! But the difference was he felt this pain is much more!
For shree she was his best friends and for him she was.. Yet he is confused . He couldn't name their relation!
Now just waiting, when he will realize this little damn thing that he loves her!Stern Smile
i don't think it will happen very soon! First he was thinking of the bitraying his dead wife and now he is thinking of her bitrayal! This love is never so easy ! Eh!
It could even divert his mind from the case !
And with riya! Yeah , their connection is very strong! And the difference is , she herself have accepted that she loves him! And when she found that clue! ( i don't knw what was that, you reveal tht soon! ) and her shocked expression truely showing that! Her teammates too assuered her! So they did know her feeling for shree, rathod, chotu and arjun???

Loved the working style of NIB. And would love to read more about the force ! And also the progress in the case!
I knew that it was just not a serial killing case!
But this case is just the key for the whole grund of such illegal activity! And siddharth gupta is just a puppet! But the murder of his fiance might have some realtion with his peronal or this illegal work! Eh?

Loved the way you described the whole life of arjun and how he have gone through so much! And also his realtion with his dad!

Now comes to shree and liza and ayesha! It was awesome reading liza's pov! In other stories she is being ignored but i wanted to knw more of her!
He equation with shree , what is the thing that is keeping him away from her or bot them wanted to keep themselves apart from eachother! May be any past pages of their life! And even if in the short time she understands well her colleagues and she did know abot ayesha's crush on rathod!
And both of them shared a very good relationship!
Then sheree comes ti ayesha and the friendly relief he got was portrayed nicely! *claps*
ha ha, liza was annoyed when shree ignored him!
These two na!

Also the ladies of the team do understand that sth is terribly wrong in the life of their male members! And they are curious to!
Is that girl riya, whom ayesha met four months ago?? I guess!

Loved this chapter and also the point of view of both the ladies about the men of their life!


And abot the challenge!
Congratulation priHug
sorry , i couldn't guess! I knw nth abt hamlet! And just when priya explained abt them, i started googling ROFL.

Thanks for the PM!
Keep writing! And update the next part soonish!
Nai toh vampire bite
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