Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

Blossoming Relation#2 (19 part ss) completed** :) (Page 99)

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 1:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by BULBUL.A

Originally posted by tiakashyap

Originally posted by BULBUL.A

Originally posted by tiakashyap

Originally posted by BULBUL.A

Originally posted by tiakashyap

Mohinder pov


He could hear geet and help her but he didnt and their are many reason and far thinking behind this.

 1.      His believe in Randeep and Maan, he knew that they can scold geet but can't send her to handa mansion.

 2.      He didn't want because of his interfere, handa and khurana friendship break, if he go to km and ask questions that means he is somewhere not believe them and after this there will be thin line between them, even geet is also not able to mingle with them and vice versa, right now all khurana family never differentiate geet from them but after his interfere she turned a daughter in law for them from daughter.

 3.      In future geet had 3 brother also who love her blindly, in future whenever geet come to their house like that . They will fight for her blindly without thinking and geet also find her solace in them only, she never able to trust in her now own real family.

 4.      As parents their duty is to make us stand on our feet, no matter if they have to be rude with us. Parents love is not only pampering but scolding too. Geet ko realization karana tha ki vo abb apna solace khurana mai doonde hand's mai nahi. What if tomorrow her bro didn't pay her attention, tab tu vo ghar ki rahi naa ghat ki, usse realize karana tha now her family is khurana and their all matter ghar mai rahe tu accha hai.





Randeep pov


1. He is never angry on maan for the main reason because when he listen what happened he felt proud that for their son his family come first from his own happiness. He knew geet is his happiness, he will not able to happy again in his after losing geet.

2 . He is little bit angry on geet when she left house like that but he understand her point also so dismissed this matter here, he understand she is feeling lonely if he also said negative than she will not going to open up to him so he decided to make her go through with reality with love, he pampered her broken heart then show her maan is wrong and he is with her but when she listen his pov for maan, she went in deep thinking as now she is little bit calm to find Randeep her side.

 3.      He can send maan to manaofy geet but he didn't want his son bend when he is not wrong, he wants geet feel proud on her husband because of his gold heart and for this she has to understand maan pov also.




Maan pov


 1.      First when he saw her mom in geet legs he lost his ability of thinking. Of course he will and after words how can he wait for a conformation. Many asked me why he didn't listen his family. Because he knew his family nature they will never want his marriage break because of them and that time he hit by 2 blow. First as a culprit son whose wife torturing his mom second is a betrayed husband whose little dream world just broke, he also human we can't expect him every time so mature specially in such a vulnerable status.

 2.      Many asked he should control his anger.. I will give u a situation (if maan saw his bro is mishandling his wife that time he go and asked him why he is doing this or directly punched him) off course everyone answer is punched him, for a husband this emotion is allowed than why not for a son. How can he question that time ... how can he question 25 yr selfless love of his mother in front of his 6 month marriage, didn't her mother soul felt a pain a very deep pain in corner of her heart.



Geet pov


 1.      She is a pampered child 3 bro and father than Randeep maan and other. Then suddenly maan behaved with her like that which make her lost her sense and she took a haste step to leave her house.

 2.      If she want to leave she can but at least after clearing everything with maan, but no she didn't listen to her Nisha and dadi also.

 3.      A relation want effort from both side, why always maan show maturity, this was geet time and she failed in that so she suffered but she is not bad her heart is innocent that's why Randeep little help made her realize what wrong she did.

me lv the way u showed accoring to their pov

bt here me lv mohinder most

i think every parent should b like him

not like those who just blindly give support to their daughter

it only gave a feel to a girl that only her parents will only understand n stand for her n she will always think he in laws as her i laws only

im not saying parents should not help their daughter

i just mean that they should not let her feel that they will support her wtever she do it only create prob

n im saying all that coz i have seen that very closely

n me proud of u to show this so beautifully

abt maanu he did r8 ya when he saw all that how can u expect him to think calmly

khud ko uski jgah rakh ke dekho jawaab mil jayega

randeep khurana he was best me lv his present of mind

he is so wise n so amazingly he handled the matter

i hope every girl got a father in alw like him onlyLOLLOL

now geet ya she was pampered child

n never experienced this before butu i will say she failed 

she should really talked with her sasu mom daddi bt na

she left the home

she is innocent bt akal bhi hoti

in reality only girls r blamed when a relation broke no offense bt its reality bt her in laws were kind enough not to blame her

bt it will taught them a lesson that try to solve every prob wisely

i lv u for such a fab storyLOL


yea i also want to show only this if her own parents come everytime in their matter then she will never try to accept her in laws they will be always her in laws only, they never will her father mother but Fil Mil only. here yaa if geet showed little bit maturity than no one suffered and all prised her in the end as for her understanding. she had all right to be angey with maan but after telling him truth. then also maan pamper her but her understanding for this marriage will be required.

ur absolutely r8
a little bit maturity, understanding n trust can make ur relation work best
lv u yaar u r an awesome writer i know bt with this piece of work u really won m y heart
it just touched my heartClap

now jaida tarif mat kar me blushing Embarrassed

arey u deserve that appreciation naLOLLOLLOL
n me eagerly waiting 4 ur new ones
isme mere dil ki chu aage
aur works me kya hoga me really wanna read n u know wt after readin this i really wish

 every girl get in laws n hubby like maanuLOL

only a man who lv his family more can lv a girl selflesslyApprove

a girl should never feel bad if her hubby lv his family more, n should b proud of it

just think abt ur parents n ur bro dont every girl want their bro lv their parents moreLOL

yup but unfortunately many teen ager girls want their hubby for exclusively for them, and i am not in the favor of this. Family is your strenght not weakness ye sab ko samjhna chahiye.. you are right ager her girl apne bro ko or hubby ko compare kare tu vo khud clear hu jaya gii 

agree not only teen bt mature also want the same
bt at some point they will realize the importance of family
n a girl who truly lv her family only can understand this
this ff contain a beautiful message

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 2:02pm | IP Logged
omg bulbul
in wait of ur ff time ka pta nhi chala tbi mai sochu y mom is standing on my head  n giving me glares like maanuROFL
chal now me off
nhi toh mom's glares will turn me into ashesROFLROFLROFL
good night sweets
lv ya muaahhh

Edited by tiakashyap - 18 August 2013 at 2:03pm

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 2:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by tiakashyap

<font color="#3300FF" size="3">omg <font color="#CC0000">bulbul</font>
<font color="#6600FF">in wait of ur ff time ka pta nhi chala tbi mai sochu y mom is standing on my head n giving me glares like maanuROFL
chal now me off
nhi toh mom's glares will turn me into ashesROFLROFLROFL</font></font><font color="#6600FF" size="3">ROFL
good night sweets
lv ya muaahhh</font>

HEHEHEHHE bhaag jaa tia before tujhse maanu ke darshan mom mai hu jaye

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 2:11pm | IP Logged
Awesome thanksBig smile

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SnehaMaaneet Goldie

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 2:34pm | IP Logged
wow wat a brilliant story
hats off 2 u
brought out all d emotions in me
loved everyone s pov
d character I loved d most is maans dad
hope every girl gets such an adorable understanding fil
den half d problems ofa newly married girl will b solved.
loved it

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 3:17pm | IP Logged
perb dear
a different take on arranged marriage
loved the epilogue
u hv added everyone's pov at the end,superb

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shivi.g Senior Member

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 3:29pm | IP Logged
Hey nice story dear just read the story in one go
amaazing story
just loved how you showed their realtion .
Arrange marriage starts with thephysical realtion and then they slowly heads towards the love this is the reality the character of the geet was so cute and her doing things differently was amazing from being not able to cook to the words she said to the maan on the their sughraat was very funny love the way you potrayed the maan character not    as the angry guy who loves his family and they way he supports geet on the family dinner was amazing
the character of geet not being shy and hesitant but alsofun loving
i loved the most was the geet were wakes up maan at 3clock to update her facebook status and to search his name in mehndi totly unexpected

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thanks for the pm

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