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Blossoming Relation#2 (19 part ss) completed** :) (Page 108)

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 1:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by tiakashyap

Mohinder pov

 

He could hear geet and help her but he didnt and their are many reason and far thinking behind this.

 1.      His believe in Randeep and Maan, he knew that they can scold geet but can't send her to handa mansion.

 2.      He didn't want because of his interfere, handa and khurana friendship break, if he go to km and ask questions that means he is somewhere not believe them and after this there will be thin line between them, even geet is also not able to mingle with them and vice versa, right now all khurana family never differentiate geet from them but after his interfere she turned a daughter in law for them from daughter.

 3.      In future geet had 3 brother also who love her blindly, in future whenever geet come to their house like that . They will fight for her blindly without thinking and geet also find her solace in them only, she never able to trust in her now own real family.

 4.      As parents their duty is to make us stand on our feet, no matter if they have to be rude with us. Parents love is not only pampering but scolding too. Geet ko realization karana tha ki vo abb apna solace khurana mai doonde hand's mai nahi. What if tomorrow her bro didn't pay her attention, tab tu vo ghar ki rahi naa ghat ki, usse realize karana tha now her family is khurana and their all matter ghar mai rahe tu accha hai.

 

 

 

 

Randeep pov

 

1. He is never angry on maan for the main reason because when he listen what happened he felt proud that for their son his family come first from his own happiness. He knew geet is his happiness, he will not able to happy again in his after losing geet.

2 . He is little bit angry on geet when she left house like that but he understand her point also so dismissed this matter here, he understand she is feeling lonely if he also said negative than she will not going to open up to him so he decided to make her go through with reality with love, he pampered her broken heart then show her maan is wrong and he is with her but when she listen his pov for maan, she went in deep thinking as now she is little bit calm to find Randeep her side.

 3.      He can send maan to manaofy geet but he didn't want his son bend when he is not wrong, he wants geet feel proud on her husband because of his gold heart and for this she has to understand maan pov also.

 

 

 

Maan pov

 

 1.      First when he saw her mom in geet legs he lost his ability of thinking. Of course he will and after words how can he wait for a conformation. Many asked me why he didn't listen his family. Because he knew his family nature they will never want his marriage break because of them and that time he hit by 2 blow. First as a culprit son whose wife torturing his mom second is a betrayed husband whose little dream world just broke, he also human we can't expect him every time so mature specially in such a vulnerable status.

 2.      Many asked he should control his anger.. I will give u a situation (if maan saw his bro is mishandling his wife that time he go and asked him why he is doing this or directly punched him) off course everyone answer is punched him, for a husband this emotion is allowed than why not for a son. How can he question that time ... how can he question 25 yr selfless love of his mother in front of his 6 month marriage, didn't her mother soul felt a pain a very deep pain in corner of her heart.

 

 

Geet pov

 

 1.      She is a pampered child 3 bro and father than Randeep maan and other. Then suddenly maan behaved with her like that which make her lost her sense and she took a haste step to leave her house.

 2.      If she want to leave she can but at least after clearing everything with maan, but no she didn't listen to her Nisha and dadi also.

 3.      A relation want effort from both side, why always maan show maturity, this was geet time and she failed in that so she suffered but she is not bad her heart is innocent that's why Randeep little help made her realize what wrong she did.


me lv the way u showed accoring to their pov

bt here me lv mohinder most

i think every parent should b like him

not like those who just blindly give support to their daughter

it only gave a feel to a girl that only her parents will only understand n stand for her n she will always think he in laws as her i laws only

im not saying parents should not help their daughter

i just mean that they should not let her feel that they will support her wtever she do it only create prob

n im saying all that coz i have seen that very closely

n me proud of u to show this so beautifully


abt maanu he did r8 ya when he saw all that how can u expect him to think calmly

khud ko uski jgah rakh ke dekho jawaab mil jayega


randeep khurana he was best me lv his present of mind

he is so wise n so amazingly he handled the matter

i hope every girl got a father in alw like him onlyLOLLOL


now geet ya she was pampered child

n never experienced this before butu i will say she failed 

she should really talked with her sasu mom daddi bt na

she left the home

she is innocent bt akal bhi hoti

in reality only girls r blamed when a relation broke no offense bt its reality bt her in laws were kind enough not to blame her

bt it will taught them a lesson that try to solve every prob wisely

i lv u for such a fab storyLOL





THANK YOU FOR SUCH A LOVELY COMMENT TIA


yea i also want to show only this if her own parents come everytime in their matter then she will never try to accept her in laws they will be always her in laws only, they never will her father mother but Fil Mil only. here yaa if geet showed little bit maturity than no one suffered and all prised her in the end as for her understanding. she had all right to be angey with maan but after telling him truth. then also maan pamper her but her understanding for this marriage will be required.

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 1:38pm | IP Logged
Beautiful epilogue! you once more watered my eyes. Very nicely written.
described all emotions very well. Yes, geet maan ki tadap, randeep being the responsible dad and dadi nisha supportive of geet, handa family strict but wid rigid values and love, definitely now geet's time was to be mature and hv patience, but maan's outrage stopped her brain and she took dat step.
Blaming either maan or geet wud be wrong, as both shud've been calm, but anger stops our rational thinking, and haste makes waste always, so may be lil separation and sorrow was needed.
As for mohinder, i never blamed his character, i discussed wid my dad and bro, even dey explained me dat mohinder was right, though a lil rough, but his step was quite logical. Geet had to mingle and mould herself within khuranas even though she wud always be a handa first, and sometimes, brothers tend to neglect sisters, specially when they get busy wid wives, so rushing to dady's home for every big n small thing is not done. Mohinder was right in trusting all khuranas, as they truly loved geet very much. He wanted his gal to be treated like a daughter in her sasural, not any formal 'bahu' types.
Randeep and dadi nature, nisha's soft motherly attitude and maan's maturity along wid selfless love for his family were the points here that inspired mohinder, so he wedded geet to maan, becuz she was gonna get lifetime happiness in dat paradise. And as khuranas were quite modern, broad-minded, she was bound to be happier there than her mayka, so blaming either maan or mohinder is quite wrong. 
Very happy to see u cleared out all views nicely, confusion has ended. Geet was to feel dat emptiness without her dad and mom, godh bharai was to be complete only when girl's mayka wale r present, so beautifully written. 
I wish every arranged marriage was a beautiful success like ur story bulbul, but india is quite unfortunate in that case.
Thanx bulbul, for giving us such a cute, warm and wonderful short story, we'll all relish this until eternity.
Pls write such beautiful stories more and soon.
LOVELY, AWESOME, FANTASTIC.
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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 1:38pm | IP Logged
Nice story..Geet wish come true. Her parent their for her Godhbharai..

waiting for next story..

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 1:40pm | IP Logged
aww such a beautiful epilogue
randeep ji tusi sachi great ho
 geet didnt talked to her family for months
according to her they did wrong bt they were not wrong fully
she was not able to firgive them becoz all her life they pampered her
n at that time she was not diget to take their no bt it was for fer good only
only after becoming a parent you realize that ur mom dad can never think bad for u
me happy finally she forgive him
me lv the end
waitign 4 more stories like this
such a beautiful example of lv trust n respectClapClapClap

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 1:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by BULBUL.A

Originally posted by tiakashyap

Mohinder pov

 

He could hear geet and help her but he didnt and their are many reason and far thinking behind this.

 1.      His believe in Randeep and Maan, he knew that they can scold geet but can't send her to handa mansion.

 2.      He didn't want because of his interfere, handa and khurana friendship break, if he go to km and ask questions that means he is somewhere not believe them and after this there will be thin line between them, even geet is also not able to mingle with them and vice versa, right now all khurana family never differentiate geet from them but after his interfere she turned a daughter in law for them from daughter.

 3.      In future geet had 3 brother also who love her blindly, in future whenever geet come to their house like that . They will fight for her blindly without thinking and geet also find her solace in them only, she never able to trust in her now own real family.

 4.      As parents their duty is to make us stand on our feet, no matter if they have to be rude with us. Parents love is not only pampering but scolding too. Geet ko realization karana tha ki vo abb apna solace khurana mai doonde hand's mai nahi. What if tomorrow her bro didn't pay her attention, tab tu vo ghar ki rahi naa ghat ki, usse realize karana tha now her family is khurana and their all matter ghar mai rahe tu accha hai.

 

 

 

 

Randeep pov

 

1. He is never angry on maan for the main reason because when he listen what happened he felt proud that for their son his family come first from his own happiness. He knew geet is his happiness, he will not able to happy again in his after losing geet.

2 . He is little bit angry on geet when she left house like that but he understand her point also so dismissed this matter here, he understand she is feeling lonely if he also said negative than she will not going to open up to him so he decided to make her go through with reality with love, he pampered her broken heart then show her maan is wrong and he is with her but when she listen his pov for maan, she went in deep thinking as now she is little bit calm to find Randeep her side.

 3.      He can send maan to manaofy geet but he didn't want his son bend when he is not wrong, he wants geet feel proud on her husband because of his gold heart and for this she has to understand maan pov also.

 

 

 

Maan pov

 

 1.      First when he saw her mom in geet legs he lost his ability of thinking. Of course he will and after words how can he wait for a conformation. Many asked me why he didn't listen his family. Because he knew his family nature they will never want his marriage break because of them and that time he hit by 2 blow. First as a culprit son whose wife torturing his mom second is a betrayed husband whose little dream world just broke, he also human we can't expect him every time so mature specially in such a vulnerable status.

 2.      Many asked he should control his anger.. I will give u a situation (if maan saw his bro is mishandling his wife that time he go and asked him why he is doing this or directly punched him) off course everyone answer is punched him, for a husband this emotion is allowed than why not for a son. How can he question that time ... how can he question 25 yr selfless love of his mother in front of his 6 month marriage, didn't her mother soul felt a pain a very deep pain in corner of her heart.

 

 

Geet pov

 

 1.      She is a pampered child 3 bro and father than Randeep maan and other. Then suddenly maan behaved with her like that which make her lost her sense and she took a haste step to leave her house.

 2.      If she want to leave she can but at least after clearing everything with maan, but no she didn't listen to her Nisha and dadi also.

 3.      A relation want effort from both side, why always maan show maturity, this was geet time and she failed in that so she suffered but she is not bad her heart is innocent that's why Randeep little help made her realize what wrong she did.


me lv the way u showed accoring to their pov

bt here me lv mohinder most

i think every parent should b like him

not like those who just blindly give support to their daughter

it only gave a feel to a girl that only her parents will only understand n stand for her n she will always think he in laws as her i laws only

im not saying parents should not help their daughter

i just mean that they should not let her feel that they will support her wtever she do it only create prob

n im saying all that coz i have seen that very closely

n me proud of u to show this so beautifully


abt maanu he did r8 ya when he saw all that how can u expect him to think calmly

khud ko uski jgah rakh ke dekho jawaab mil jayega


randeep khurana he was best me lv his present of mind

he is so wise n so amazingly he handled the matter

i hope every girl got a father in alw like him onlyLOLLOL


now geet ya she was pampered child

n never experienced this before butu i will say she failed 

she should really talked with her sasu mom daddi bt na

she left the home

she is innocent bt akal bhi hoti

in reality only girls r blamed when a relation broke no offense bt its reality bt her in laws were kind enough not to blame her

bt it will taught them a lesson that try to solve every prob wisely

i lv u for such a fab storyLOL





THANK YOU FOR SUCH A LOVELY COMMENT TIA


yea i also want to show only this if her own parents come everytime in their matter then she will never try to accept her in laws they will be always her in laws only, they never will her father mother but Fil Mil only. here yaa if geet showed little bit maturity than no one suffered and all prised her in the end as for her understanding. she had all right to be angey with maan but after telling him truth. then also maan pamper her but her understanding for this marriage will be required.



ur absolutely r8
a little bit maturity, understanding n trust can make ur relation work best
lv u yaar u r an awesome writer i know bt with this piece of work u really won m y heart
it just touched my heartClap

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 1:44pm | IP Logged
Haha ye kya hogaya I posted my comment fr last update but it delivered here...loll Waise nice ending n must say u cleared all d doubts very smartly...luved it...

Gonna miss it yaara...everything d eagerness f a fast update, checking d update corner every 5minute in hope f getting a surprise update...everything gonna miss terribly ...

Baby a big hug fr such a sweet n powerpacked fiction in which u showcased d sacredness f arrange marriage n it's value...in a way u teach us dat hw a relation work n get successful...thanx dear for a lovely journey I really njyed it from my heart...will miss it but Now I'm waiting fr ur other ff updates..(clever me)TongueSmile

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 1:44pm | IP Logged
Fabulous dear all were right in their places

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 1:46pm | IP Logged
waah waah waah kya idea tha
man the way she ran was like totally freaky
i thought kya hua
and she just went running like that
oh hello thoda toh careful hona chahiye pregnant
but guess nothing bad happened so its okay
so it took her two days to get this

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