Read both the parts
Awesome...wonderful ...superb ...emotional ...
Baal dhup main safed nahi kiye hai...ye baat randeep ke liye sahi hai...jis tarha se vo maan ka sath de rahe hai aur geet ko such bata rahe hai... Vo lajavab hai
Hats off to you..jo emotion aap lana chahati hai vo hum feel kar sakte hai
Life bhi yehi hoti hai...kabhi dhoop kabhi chhav...
Sab ko aisa parivar..,parents..mil jaye to ...jindgi khubsurat ban jaye
Main comments kam karti hoo par aapke sabhi update read karti hoo
I am fida on your writing...
Eagerly waiting for next
Thanks for pm
Edited by sheetalvasa - 10 years ago