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FF Arnav and Khushi:Thread 1 My lost family --chapter 21 in Thread 2 (Page 91)

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Posted: 02 September 2013 at 2:22pm | IP Logged
hayeee Finally he heard the baby cry ... cute upd

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Posted: 02 September 2013 at 2:37pm | IP Logged
Last part was good. It ws nt bd.but i didnt like it much.sry to say.aftr hearingthat a baby is cryng he jst left or shut the door frm inside.m cnfusd.

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Posted: 02 September 2013 at 2:42pm | IP Logged
yippe 
 they met  i felt their encounter was  feisty ,literally i felt it was clash of titans ...Tongue


well u left us at cliff hanger  didi.Cry
 so ,  all the secrets are out...
 i wonder what will happen next Confused
earlier , i expected the clash between arhi would be the most expected chapter but i think the next one is gonna be the most expected chapter...Clap
 good job didi ...

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Posted: 02 September 2013 at 2:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rasa23

Last part was good. It ws nt bd.but i didnt like it much.sry to say.aftr hearingthat a baby is cryng he jst left or shut the door frm inside.m cnfusd.
 
Rasa23,
 
I edited my post to clarify that he closed the door after re-entering the house.
If you had that doubt, I am sure others also had that doubt.
Hence, I corrected that last line.
Thank you for asking for clarifications.
 
Also, thank you for your honest opinion about the update.
What part you did not like Rasa23. let me know.
Well, I gave it my best I think (with my limited time and limited creativity.)
Sorry to dissappoint you.
Thanks once again for honesty. Hope you will stay with the story and give it a try.
 
Regards.

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Posted: 02 September 2013 at 2:47pm | IP Logged
That was great! Both can't deny the pull!!
N now arnie heard abhay!! V intersting

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Posted: 02 September 2013 at 2:53pm | IP Logged




As a reader, I do not want Gupta family to be pardoned by Khushi easily. Whatever happened, they were her only support and hell they knew it and still shunned her. Just like that. If that happens that will be my only issue with this story.

I want Khushi to accept Rajesh and Nirmala as her parents and take her own sweet time to get normal with Guptas.

Waiting for next chapter  :)


Edited by Anony_mous - 19 September 2013 at 12:35pm

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Posted: 02 September 2013 at 2:57pm | IP Logged
awesome...
wanted to see how will he react...

update soon...

thanx for pm...

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Posted: 02 September 2013 at 3:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Anony_mous



Now this is what I called a brilliant ending. Giving out just enough to us greedy readers and holding back the right amount so that we curiously wait for the next update.

I am so so liking this Arnav and Khushi. Arnav is right in trying to win her back and Khushi is well justified in being angry. Once bitten, twice shy. 

As a reader, I do not want Gupta family to be pardoned by Khushi easily. Whatever happened, they were her only support and hell they knew it and still shunned her. Just like that. If that happens that will be my only issue with this story.

I want Khushi to accept Rajesh and Nirmala as her parents and take her own sweet time to get normal with Guptas.

Waiting for next chapter eagerly :)
Hi Anony_mous,
 
This comment means a lot to me. I am sure you know that.
Thank you for your time for reading and commenting.
 
Regards.
 

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