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FF Arnav and Khushi:Thread 1 My lost family --chapter 21 in Thread 2 (Page 118)

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 9:17pm | IP Logged
Hey, this was the best chappy so far.. The revelation!!
Whatever the circumstances were but Arnie does not hav a rite to be angry! Nor he should force khushi to get back in his life so that he can claim abhay!
I want Khushi to be VERY STRONG N SHOULDN'T GIVE UP!
Arnie must realize thru what Khushi has gone! N she was none at the fault!!
Mr. ASR thought patience is not ur virtue, try to have some, think rationally n then get back in action!!

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 9:20pm | IP Logged

Beautiful update. loved khushi's reaction when arnav asked about d baby.  It was arnav who thrown her out of his life and now he blames her that she didn't inform him about baby. Waiting to read further

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 9:28pm | IP Logged
Great writing.

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 9:37pm | IP Logged
Amazing update
Arnav's reaction is nicely written...
Lived it

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 9:55pm | IP Logged
You updated!!!!!!!! hehe...
Arnav's raw emotions on full display.
His reaction to his son... PERFECT!!
Made me tear up, from not knowing about this human being to knowing that you are partially the reason for this tiny creature to be alive.  Its just wow.
Khushi's anger is justified.
How could she have known he wouldnt have insulted her again.
Both of them were wrong in some instances but they were also correct.
Its good that Arnav was willing to forgive, because the one that matters is his son.
He already missed out on the entire pregnancy and Abhay's first 6 months... Arnav won't let his son out of his sight now.
Waiting patiently... take your time love Smile

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 10:06pm | IP Logged
very very nice update

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 10:07pm | IP Logged
great update
liked it
but why arnav is kind of blaming khushi
continue soon

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 10:17pm | IP Logged
pretty good
it was written quite well
I loved the way u described arnav's feeling so many emotions
n khushi is absolutely at rite here she was insulted by same man humiliated by very man
left alone to face the world in her pregnancy with no help of anyone except her buaji
now he has no rite to ask her y she didn't inform him about the baby y'd she do that after all that
loved it  

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