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FF Arnav and Khushi:Thread 1 My lost family --chapter 21 in Thread 2 (Page 117)

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 8:29pm | IP Logged
Awesome update

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 8:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Anony_mous



This is the best chapter till date of this story. Without doubt in my opinion :)

The way you have detailed and explained what is going through Arnav's mind and heart, I could almost relate to it. His anger, which is his nature, his guilt, which is there is all so well portrayed.

Khushi reactions are too good as well. That is how I had expected her to react when Arnav would come questioning and demanding rights on their baby. You have written this chapter VERY well.

Kudos!

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter. And the comment would be incomplete without me mentioning that the story is awesome as a whole :)


Hi Anony_mous,
 
A whole-hearted thank you for your comment.
Thank you for reading this story.
This means a lot to me.
 
I did try my best. I guess I tried my maximum best.
Thank you Thank you Thank you.Smile
 
 

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 8:46pm | IP Logged
loved it
thanks for pm...
the emotions which you portray on arnav face ...actions ..emotions were just amazing...
his anger was justify ...but he was too wrong...it was him who thrown her out when she was pregnant with his child
khushi was right how was she suppose to know that she should tell him that he has a baby ...will he accept him or not...will he accept her or not ...
well ...let wait to read more...
it was long one ...
well done
waiting to know how will arnav deal with this truth...
do uppdate soon

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 8:52pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 8:53pm | IP Logged
Beautiful update.. I was touched with arnavs reaction of guilt anger nd sad.. But his reaction on khushi surprised me.. He is the one who denied her existence .. Nd now how on earth he claims that she shud have informed her abt baby!! Thnk u fr an amazing update..:)

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 8:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jeya0301

Beautiful update.. I was touched with arnavs reaction of guilt anger nd sad.. But his reaction on khushi surprised me.. He is the one who denied her existence .. Nd now how on earth he claims that she shud have informed her abt baby!! Thnk u fr an amazing update..:)
 
Hi Jeya0301,
 
I will answer your question in some time.
Mostly tomorrow.
I will let other readers catch up the update and then give me feedback.
Then I will answer your question.
That way my comment will not influence other readers.
 
Thank you reading the story and commenting.
I really appreciate you for consistently commenting and staying with the story.


Edited by gopijimodi - 04 September 2013 at 8:58pm
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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 9:02pm | IP Logged
Awesome

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 9:15pm | IP Logged
beautiful updates. all the emotions both went thro'. I am glad
khushi stood up to Arnav.

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