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Of Mangoes and Mysteries|AsYa FF|Chapter 4B Updated Pg:10 (Page 3)

MissSparkling IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 August 2013 at 9:12am | IP Logged
grt cont nd i loves Mangoes yar

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asyakiideewani Goldie

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Posted: 14 August 2013 at 9:29am | IP Logged
i cant wait 4 the next update plz pm me

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LitleMissMuffet IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 August 2013 at 9:32am | IP Logged
Wow really nice

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akaswan IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 August 2013 at 9:37am | IP Logged
Nice continue soon Smile

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Posted: 14 August 2013 at 9:38am | IP Logged
Sounds interesting! cont soon!Smile

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daydream. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 August 2013 at 9:53am | IP Logged
Whoa. Hold the phone. Arnav, as in...*drum roll, please*...Arnav. Singh. Raizada?! Shocked Shocked Shocked
Anyways, I love it so far! Clap Clap Clap Seems like a nice, refreshing story, and a bright change! Thumbs Up I like Zoya's friendship with Arnav (especially if he IS Arnav Singh Raizada, hehehe. Wink), and I LOVE the title. Big smile I mean, come on? Who doesn't like mangoes? D'oh Grumpy, emotionally-challenged mango-haters, that's who! LOL
Can't wait for next update! Tongue
-Fari Embarrassed Heart

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...SankaDevi... Senior Member

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Posted: 14 August 2013 at 10:21am | IP Logged

Hey guys! I loved all your lovely comments! I am going to personally reply to them all and I have decided to PM you guys separate.

Please give comments IN ORDER TO RECIEVE PM. 

My buddy list is keep on getting bigger and bigger and I don't know who is reading my story and who is not. 


Pretty please? (Zoya's puppy look.)

I have updated Chapter Two early because of two reasons:

1. Just couldn't wait to write more!Big smile

2. I am going to be out of town and won't be logging on to IF and posting a chapter of my story. We ALL get LAZY SOMETIMES. LOL

Enough of my blabbering and here is the next chappyHug 


Chapter #2-Old Relations and New Ties.


Arnav was a man of his principles. He had come back to India just to be with his family and country, India. He loved India. It was his country and he believed in patriotic spirit. His dad, Amar Singh Raizada was in the military. He worked as a head military officer and also wanted Arnav to join the army. But destiny had different plans. Arnav's mom, Mamta Singh Raizada, she wanted Arnav to follow her family's education route, which was, going into IT or medicine.


Mamta had taken a promise from Amar, Arnav's dad, that he would make Arnav Singh Raizada, their son, an IT specialist in order to take revenge from the Khan's.


Amar Singh Raizada and Rashid Ahmed Khan were best friends. Rashid and Amar met during military times and became best friends instantly. They both were already married, so during holidays, they would go to each other houses and used to have family friend parties.


Another family used to be invited and that family was Ghaffur Sidduqie Saab's family. That family consisted of Ghaffur, Raziya begum, and little Humera.


They all used to have parties and fun, games and food, but who knew that this old friendship would turn into a grand enmity.



Zoya and Arnav got out of the elevator and walked opposite directions. Zoya went to the left, to Mr. Prasad's office and Arnav went to his cubicle to the right.


Arnav settled in his seat and drank his coffee. He didn't know why, he kept on thinking about the elevator girl, Zoya. She was different. Very different.


He knew she was a woman of principles too. That's why this job is very important to her, just like to him. But he wondered if he could fulfill the promise he dad gave to his mother on her deathbed.

Arnav knew who Rashid Ahmed Khan was, and also knew his oldest son, Asad Ahmed Khan running Khan IT. 

Arnav and Asad were about the same age but fortunately never met. Asad went to Stanford University and Arnav went to Harvard.

Both had never heard each other's names but knew the family enmity. 

Asad never believed in enmity but when it came to his father and mother, he could kill anyone who would try to harm them in any way. 

Arnav also didn't believe in enmity or fighting but he had to fulfill the promise. Somehow. 

Even if he to stoop to any extent.


"Sorry Mr. Prasad, I am late--" Zoya was cut off.

"Really, Miss Farooqi, you don't need to apologize," Prasad said calmly.

"But I was late," Zoya trying to be diplomatic.

"I know. You know I was late on my first day to, which was 10 years ago, when Mr. Rashid Ahmed Khan used to be my boss," Prasad remembered.

"But, Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan,your boss's boss, and friend's son,  he is very lenient. And he expects his employees to be like that too. So you don't be worried," Prasad assured and explained.

"I want you to come with me and meet your co-workers and boss, Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan," Prasad lead Zoya through the long hallway into this huge glass room filled with many managers, engineers, and IT specialists, and one of them was, Arnav.

Arnav spotted Zoya coming with his boss, Mr. Prasad and she looked very nervous and flushed.

Her beautiful lean body, her long slender legs in her pencil skirt and suit. She looked extravagant. Those puppy eyes and the button nose, and her plump lips. How he wanted to kiss her to death. 


She also looked at the back of him and wondered what a man? Tall and fit, wearing a black suit with a purple tie. His biceps and triceps popping out of his suit. 

Prasad lead Zoya to the seat next to Arnav and Arnav began to weave a future with his Zoya. 


This is the end of Chapter two. I know many of you mustve thought that Asad and Zoya are going to meet, but not yet. Asad is not even going to notice Zoya yet

I hope you guys love the character of Arnav, because I am loving it!

Remember to comment, INORDER TO RECIEVE PM.

Please do give your constructive criticism, because I accept everything--except for boogers. Eww those are gross.Dead

Love all ya guys!Heart


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--Mahima-- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 14 August 2013 at 10:33am | IP Logged
This is different

Seems unique

You have me addicted

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