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Tanhayee - Fanfic NOTE PG1

Rachu_1987 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 August 2006 at 10:56am | IP Logged
Fanfic abandoned!!!!! continued in Kumkum forum, link below



Eijaz Khan as Soham Sen

Vikas Sethi as Swayam Shergill

Gaurav Khanna as Sharman Whadwa

Shireen as Shezz

Nooreen as Noori

Rachandeep as Rach

Character Discriptions

Soham Sen - A wealthy industrialist, owner of Sen Empire. A split personality guy, he's one person in the office and a different person outside.
Swayam Shergill - CEO of Shergill Enterprise, famous businessman, likes to have fun and loves his car, a Lexus.  
Sharman Whadwa -  a wealthy and successful businessman, MD of Whadwa Industries. Is a fun loving cool guy and a romantic at heart but strict when it comes to business.
Shezz - a loud mouthed and bubbly girl who likes to party and shop til she drops. Has a chauffer to accompany her while she drives her Lamborghini
Noori -a rich girl who loves clothes, shopping and money. She is always up-to-date with the latest fashion and doesn't go anywhere without her Ferrari
Rach - a shopaholic, someone who likes to gossip about famous businessmen's' wives. And doesn't like people who criticise her.

A fanfic by Noori, Rach and Shezz...enjoy....plz leave ya comments!!!!

Edited by Gaurav's Love - 14 May 2007 at 5:27am

Rachu_1987 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 August 2006 at 10:57am | IP Logged
Part 1

A guy is having an argument with his assistant in an office.

Guy: what the hell is this maine tumse kaha tender toora karo leekan tumne u know what just bloody get out

Assistant: but sir

Guy: what but? get out maine kaha are you deaf

Assistant: I am sorry

Guy: GET OUT....sorry keh raha hai...god!

Assistant leaves

Guy: bloody ridiculous

Then the phone rings the chair turns around and they show his eyes and its his secretary anjali

Guy: hello

Anjali: sir you have a call

Guy: not now im busy

Anjali: sir its important

Guy: ok then put it through

Anjali: yes sir

Guy: haan bolo kya baath hai

Then the guy gets up and they show his hand raising up and the guy turns and faces the window, you can only see his back

Guy: tum itna naraz kyun hote ho? ok ok sono I will be there fiqaar maat karo yes I will uff hoo you know I don't like it when you say my full name just call me soham

Then he turns around and you see his face and its soham, the check it out theme comes on

Soham: uff hoo fiqaar maat karo ok I am coming yes ok bye now

Then he disconnects the phone and calls Anjali

Anjali: yes sir

Soham: cancel the rest of my meetings i have to go

Anjali: but sir

Soham: no buts, just do it, bye

He leaves

Meanwhile a guy is driving down the road in his car cool music playing down the road and we can see him having a race with someone and he is looking at the guy while driving and smirking then we see the back of his head and then he skids the car and he wins the race he gets out of his car and everyone cheers and congratulate him

Fan 1: wow nice one

Fan 2: congrats

The guy takes off his sunglasses

Fan 3: youre simply the best Swayam!

Swayam smiles

Swayam: thanks guys

Opponent: fhir se race karo, main jeet jaoon ga

Swayam: tum haar maan jao abhi se, agar mere paas time hota then i would but right now i have to go

Swayam gets back in the car, puts his sunglasses on and drives off

Elsewhere there's a guy in a shopping mall, in a jewellry shop looking for something, he's sees something he likes and asks the girl 2 pack it 4 him, he walks outside and gets sum flowers and chocolates. Then goes to his car and he sees someone he knows

Guy: hey how are you long time no see shlok

Shlok: ya I know leekan u know Disha pregnant and all

Guy: aw wow congrats

Shlok: thanks, hows things with you?

guy: teek taak you know how it is

Shlok - cool, so shall we go for a drink

guy: erm...

They're talking when he gets a txt message saying "Mr Sharman Whadwa your presence is needed at the office" then we see his face and its Sharman

Sharman: hey man I am sorry leekan jaana hai business meetinng

Shlok: its cool see u later man take care

Sharman: the drink? maybe next time, we will catch up soon ok

Shlok: yea sure, see ya

Sharman gets in his car, waves to Shlok and makes his way to the office, while driving he gets another text message saying "Mr Whadwa, where are you", he smiles and replies to the message

Sharman: i am on my way.....just wait

To be continued
Shezzy12 Goldie

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Cry Cry Cry plz repli guyz!!#
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Posted: 14 August 2006 at 7:15am | IP Logged
ne replies.......
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Posted: 16 August 2006 at 10:04am | IP Logged

guys we beg of ya to comment on guys it took us a long time to think of a name and how to do d fanfic come on guys plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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Cry Cry replies plzz Wink Wink
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Posted: 21 March 2008 at 10:27am | IP Logged
I think its wicked i like vey much.
thank you and my name is Rachna and my nick name is RACH so i am lovin it it LOLZ Tongue Smile

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