Love at First Sight (Short story)

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Posted: 10 years ago
i friends...i am nikita...i love rang badalti odhani serial...i love the characters Shantanu and Khanak
I love shanak..this is a short story on SHANAK


                         LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT





SHANTANU         
                        

                       

KHANAK      
                       
                       

savitha : khanak...khanak 

khanak : s mom...

savitha : coffee...savitha gave a cup of coffee to her...

khanak was about to go to sofa...

savitha : did u open...ur bhabhi was saying na...

khanak : ummhhmmm...(while driniking coffee..)

savitha : u told yesterday itself u r going to open one...

khanak : i was tired so i slept...

savitha: if i know it..i would have opened one..but i dont know...

khanak :dont worry mom i will open a new one for u..(smiling at her)

sharma : wat..wat to be opened...

khanak : papa bhabhi has put ruthras pic in facebook...

mom wants to see it...

savitha : u can atleast open one na...

sharma : no..i am not interseted ..thats waste of time...

beta..u show ur mom okay...and send those pic to my email id...

khanak : s papa...

savitha : khanak finished ur coffee..

khanak : s mom...

savitha came out with khanaks lappy and glared at her...

khanak : now itself...

savitha : today u dont have office...there is time for breakfast so...

khanak :okay..i will ...dont look at me like that...

khanak switched on the lappy...

savitha : why u dont have one facebook id...see that raju

he is studing  7 th standard he has a facebook account...

khanak just shook her shoulders not intersted in any thing...

khanak typed facebook...she clicked signup button...

the form came...first name she typed khanak...

second name...she typed sin...then she deleted and typed shar...

she again deleted it and then she typed just s...

and it asked one one question...when it came to education...

she first hesitated to type then she typed her college name and the batch 

date...she finally finished her signup part...now she came to her front 

page of facebook...in the search field she typed anjali sanjay...

she send a friend request...

khanak : wow ruthra is looking cute...

savitha : it came...savitha  went near khanak...

khanak :ha..come and see ur beautifull granddaughter...

khanak started to show many pics of ruthra and her brother sanjay and 

then her bhabhis pic...

savitha : hey this is beautifull...which place is that...

khanak : mom its new york...

savitha :oh..beautifull...sanjay has reduced weight na...

khanak :umm...

tears where formed in savithas eyes...she looked at her daughter...

khanak : mom...please...

savitha went to kitchen while crying...

after seeing pics..khanak was sending the pics to her dads email id...

she finished it...she was about to logout...

there came a friends request...

she clicked it...it was misha...

khanaks smiled she accepted her request...she was online...

misha : hey dude how r u...how is ur life going on...

she was asking many questions...

khanak : umm wait...how r u..i am fine...

misha : i am fine i have a son...nishant...we r in bangalore...

khanak : oh..so sweet...

misha : i have updated pics of him..do check...

khanak : wait i will see first...

khanak viewed mishaas sons pic...she commented in some pics...

khanak came to chat window...

khanak : hey ur sons pic r beautifull...

misha : hey thanks...where r u...

khanak : with my parents...

misha : oh ..any kids...

khanak  :  no...

misha : how is ur hubby...

khanak : he is resting in peace...

misha : wat..wat r u saying...

khanak : its going to be three years...

misha : wat...???give me ur number i will call u...

khanak : umm...xxx this is my number...

misha : khanak i will call u at night okay..now i am going out..take care da...

khanak :umm sure..takecare ...bye...

khanak went again to mishas profile...she opened her friends list...

she started to see one by one...

she send friends request to some of friends from mishas...

suddenly her hand stopped...she was frozen...

she saw the name...her hands became chill...

khanak thought want to send request..no...no...but her hand 

clicked add friend ...it showed a friend request is send to shantanu khandelwal...




Edited by niki_rbo - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
part 2


khanak thought want to send request..no...no...but her hand 

clicked add friend ...it showed a friend request is send to shantanu khandelwal...

khanak thought damn wat am i doing...okay now i want to log out...

but her hand clicked shaans name and the page showed shaans profile...

her mind was saying why r u checking his profile...

her heart no i am justing seeing like i saw mishas...nothing wrong in it...

she clicked his info page...she started to go through his profile..

first she saw his status...it showed single...she left out a long breath out...

she saw his contact no..her eyes saw it for a minute...

his likings ...she saw wat r the things he liked pages...

she clicked on music...there she saw vanilla twilight...

fireflies...kiss me..savage garden...and so on...

khanak thought wat is these all r english songs...

she opened youtube...she typed ...she saw the screen...

she was shocked ..she has typed his phone number...she deleted and

she typed vanilla twilight...the song started to play...

savitha : khanak wat sound is that...

khanak paused the song...she took her headphone plugged in the laapy...

she played the song with subtitles...

The stars lean down to kiss you
And I lie awake and miss you
Pour me a heavy dose of atmosphere

'Cause I'll doze off safe and soundly
But I'll miss your arms around me
I'd send a postcard to you, dear
'Cause I wish you were here

I'll watch the night turn light-blue
But it's not the same without you
Because it takes two to whisper quietly

The silence isn't so bad
'Til I look at my hands and feel sad
'Cause the spaces between my fingers
Are right where yours fit perfectly

I'll find repose in new ways
Though I haven't slept in two days
'Cause cold nostalgia

Chills me to the bone

But drenched in vanilla twilight
I'll sit on the front porch all night
Waist-deep in thought because
When I think of you I don't feel so alone

I don't feel so alone, I don't feel so alone

As many times as I blink
I'll think of you tonight
I'll think of you tonight

When violet eyes get brighter
And heavy wings grow lighter
I'll taste the sky and feel alive again

And I'll forget the world that I knew
But I swear I won't forget you
Oh, if my voice could reach
Back through the past
I'd whisper in your ear
Oh darling, I wish you were here


on hearing this song she liked it...its like a love failure song...

but she liked the wordings...she then typed another in youtube...

she typed savage garden some list of songs played...she choose one song...

the song started to play...

"I Knew I Loved You"

Maybe it's intuition 
But some things you just don't question
Like in your eyes
I see my future in an instant
and there it goes
I think I've found my best friend
I know that it might sound more than
a little crazy but I believe 
 


khanak thought all r love songs with feelings...mild tunes...

she liked vanilla twilight song a lot...

she downloaded it in her lappy...she then saw his likings pages...

then she clicked his photos...there was one photo...she clicked on saw that...

she was just starring at the screen only...

she just looked at shaans eyes alone...

her mind khanak wat r u doing ...u r admiring him ...

khanak quickly shut down the system without logging out...

her heart was beating fast...she quickly walked towards the kitchen

and started to help her mom..she tried to change her concentration...

but she cannot...his profile page and his pic was flashing in her mind...

after finishing her breakfast and shower...she felt bored...

she tried to watch movies..but her fate..movie was a love movie...

where the hero and herione  r romancing with their eyes...

and doing all romance...she switched off the tv...

she took her lappy...she thought of doing some office work...

but her hand went and opened the facebook and itr showed 

shaans profile aas she did not logg out properly as she shutdown directly...

khanak was just starring at his pic...she saw a new notification...

she clicked and saw it...it was some of her friends has accepted her friends request

and her eyes fixed to notification ...she saw again and again...

shaan has accepted her friend request...

she dont know why but her heart beat started to beat fast...

she quickly closed the facebook tab ...

she closed her eyes and sat down...thank god neighbour kid

came ..he came to khanak for some doubts in maths...

khanaks mind was now distracted and she felt relaxed...

it was evening ...khanak was making  coffee for her parents...

they all were drinking coffee...

savitha : khanak put the pics of ruthra...

khanaks mind no dont put...i feel something is going to happen...

damn i forgot to save images...

her heart no nothing wrong i am going to show just pics...

her mind tell mom that her lappy is not working...

her heart..no dont tell lies okay...

savitha : khanak...

khanak : umm..i will put...

khanak opened her fb account which was in offline mode...

khanak showed ruthras pics...

meanwhile a neighbour came to the house for inviting for fn...

so khanak took her lappy and went to her bedroom...

she placed it in the bed...and she was about to log out...

her heart turn on for chat...her mind no..i wont...i feel something...

but her heart won and she clicked turn on chat...

thats it her heart started to beat fast...she felt nervous...

she just starred at the screen...it was showing shaan is on chat...

a green light was on in front of shaans name...

suddenly a screen popped out...

anjali : hey khanak how r u...

khanak came back to reality...

khanak : bhabhi...pics r beautifull..cutie is looking so beautifull...

u r also looking beautifull...

anjali : thanks khanak...

khanak : bhabhi...can u come to skype mom wants to see and talk with u all..

anjali : oh...we will come to skype after 30 minutes...

khanak : okay bhabhi...

anjali went off...her mind...okay now log out...

her heart no i wont...her mind hey wat r u doing...hey stop...

but she has opened shaans chat screen and she wrote

khanak : hi...

her heart beat started to beat fastly...she just starred at the screen...

suddenly she saw writing think in the caht box...

shaan : hi Khanak S...

her hands became very chill...she felt something was dancing in her stomach...

khanak : how r u...

shaan : i am fine ..how r u...

khanak : i am fine...

shaan : do u have kids...

khanak : no...

shaan : oh...

khanak : how is ur wife...(she saw it was single in his status...but she wrote it wantedly)

shaan : no not yet..:-)

khanak : oh..then when is ur marriage...

shaan : mom dad r seeing it..may be in this year end...

on seeing this khanak felt sad,...

khanak : oh cool...

khanak : ok takecare..i will talk with u later..bye...

she turned off the chat and she logged out the facebook...

she closed her eyes and she was lying in the bed...



Posted: 10 years ago
part 3

after some time ...khanak and her parents talked with her brother and 

then later...khanak went to her room..opened her lappy and 

she entered in to youtube and watched her favorite serial RBO...

she did not see the fridays episode and yesterday she had loads of work 

so she started to watch this serial now...watching this serial it gave 

her some relaxation..which made her forget her pain...

she loved this serial...after seeing the fridays episode she 

went to previous episode and started to watch it again and again...

she then typed india-forums.com and then she entered 

the RBO forum...she saw some people has made vms...

she saw those...she read the FF people have written...

she was a silent reader there...she saw wat people talk in chat...

she read gals beshrami talks...she smiles to herself...

she enjoyed seeing gals talking friendly and there friendly discussion...

she closed her eyes and she thought for a moment...

she opened her eyes...she opened the notepad in the lappy...

she started to write in that forum...

hey gals i am a silent reader... i love RBO...thought of writting a short story...

hope u guys like it...she wrote this in the name shanak...

she started to write a short story...everyone started to like the story...

in the story she included some scenes from her real life...

( i am going to write those scenes..its like khanak writing hope u guys understood)

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herione was studying in an engineering college...

she is reserved...she is calm..she is friendly to everyone but limited talk...

in first year all the students were mingled and they all learnt same subject...

in second year only they go their groups...

herione(khanak ) was friend with misha...she was very friendly with everyone...

she talks with boys too freely...but herione(khanak) was shy..she answers only 

to the questions asked to her...everyone was surprised at their friendship...

because misha is jovial with everyone...while khanak is reserved...

khanak was living in her own world...she was happy...she learned...

did her works..enjoyed tv shows thats it..she does not involve

with girls gossip talks...she comes to know information only from her friend...

her life was going smoothly for three years...now she was in her final year...

she knows who r classmates(both boys and girls) but concentrates 

only on studies...she knows two of her classmates boys hero and 

his friend rahul...(one was shaan and other one rahul ) was living in her area only...

(she changes her name and heros name to the serail actors name

but she did not change her friends name and his friends name)

she does not care about anything...she goes to college by college bus...

in her stop two girls get in along with her till three years back...

oneday she went to temple with her parents along with some of her cousins...

she was walking along with her cousins and going to her house...

while goinging she felt something ..suddenly she saw someone was 

coming opposite side...she thought its him(shan..shantanu na...)

he was wearing a sandal color checked shirt with pant...

she was wearing a green color salwar with mild works...

he saw her too...there both eyes saw ..they did not smile at eachother...

there eyes saw when they crossed eachother...thats it...

nothing happened..when they crossed there eyes alone saw eachother 

without a blink...she walked to her house...she felt something strange inside her...

in her mind his eyes and the way he passed away was flashing again and again...

on that day she felt something different...at night she got up

from sleep...she was sitting in the middle of night...

she looked around she left out a long breath...

she layed back in the bed...she thought damn...i am becoming really bad...

i am dreaming of him...he is kissing...no no..i am kissing him..

wat is happening to me...she was disturbed by him in her dreams...

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shanak : thanks a lot for ur comments...thanks guys for liking my story...

khanak became friends with many gals in the forum...

she started to talk with them nicely...but when she logged into FB

she never misses to go and see his profile...

its her daily work to see his profile...

khanak liked RBO pages in FB...she started to like many pages...

and she played games sometimes in FB...

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(now khanaks writing in IF starts)

herione (khanak) was day dreaming about him each and every moment...

next day she went to bus stop and she was waiting for college bus...

suddenly she felt a shiver...her heart does he come...

her mind no he wont...its been three years he never got in the bus here

in this stop...why do u want him to get here...

her heart...no i am just asking thats it...

her heart started to beat fast...there he comes to the stop...

her heart was dancing in joy...her mind..stop dancing...

he is just another classmate..his house is here so 

he is coming to get in here...so nothing joy in that...

her heart..but its first time after three years he is coming...so something fishy..

her mind...damn fishy...stop with ur biryani..fish everything..okay

concentrate on studies...he came and stand there in bus stop..

she got in the bus and she sat in the third row she never turns back and see...

in the evening staff and girls have separate bus...boys have separate bus...

and usally boys goes first...her bus goes after 5 minutes r so...

she got down from the bus and she was walking towards her house...

usually she does not look here and there ...she does not see around..she just

walks towards her house...on that day she suddenly looked up while walking...

her walking slowed...as she saw him(shaan) standing along with his friend

they both were talking something interstly in the corner of the street...

her heart beat started to beat fastly...her mind why is ur heart beating

fastly...dont be afraid...u r going to ur house...

she walked pass them very quickly not looking at them at all...

her walking was very fast as if she was running...

this was continued...she saw them standing there and talking

while she passed them around...

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shanak : thanks for ur comments guys..i really loved it...

she receieved a pm...she opened her inbox...

it showed hiii...from luvkhash...she clicked it...

hii i am a silent reader ur story is really nice i loved it ...

whenever u update please pm me...

she smiled at that she felt happy that many r liking her story...

so she replied back...thanks a lot yaar..whenever u get time u please

tell ur views...takecare...

within a minute she recieved a pm again from that same person...

luvkhash : ya sure...i love this FF...please give a daily update...

do u have a FB account...

shanak(khanak) replied...no i dont have a FB account...(wrote after lot of thinking...

luvkhash : oh...okay takecare i will talk u later...

khanak opened her FB account and did her as usual work...(seeing shaans profile)

 



Posted: 10 years ago
awesome updates yar.. Loving it.. Really nice going.. Hope to read further..
Posted: 10 years ago
part 4

it was a sunday...

savitha :khanak where r u going now...

khanak : to my room...why...

savitha : u can come with us to temple na...

khanak : no mom..u go and i am going to see my lappy...

savitha : u always sitting with the lappy...wat r u doing in that...

khanak : i am doing work...

savitha : one day i am going to throw it away...

khanak : i will get another one...

khanak smiled at her mom and she went to her room...

she went and opened her lappy...

she logged in her facebook account...

there was some notification...she clicked and saw it...

her friend misha has joined khanak in a group...

she went and checked the group...it was her college batch group...

she went on seeing wat they have posted...

she saw they r going to have a reunion in next month...

this has been finialised three months ago...

there were names who r attending this reunion party...

she saw who r coming..she was surprised shaan is also coming...

they all given money to a single person that is to meera...

she was incharge of organising...misha also coming to the fn...

she saw another msg from rahul saying whoever

wants to join can give names and money now also...it was the recent post...

there were about 30 comments...khanak clicked and saw that

she was surprised misha has included her name...

khanak : how can i come..how did misha gave my name...

she started to type a msg to misha...

khanak : misha...how can u add me to the fn...i am not coming...

within a minute reply came...misha typed msg from her cell...

misha :hey its been three years we can meet and have fun...

khanak : no misha..i am not coming...i am not going to give money...

misha : hey dude i already given money for u..so u r coming...

i will be there two days before to my moms house...

so i will come and pic u up to the reunion party...okay...

khanak : wat...

misha : u r coming...takecare bye...

khanak turned on the chat to see whether shaan is online...

but he was not online...rahul was online...

khanak was about to turn off chat...rahul msged her...

rahul : hi khanak...how r u...

khanak thought first not to write..but then she typed...

khanak : i am fine...how r u...

rahul : i am fine...where r u now...

khanak : in home town with my parents...

rahul : oh..came to visit ur parents..how is ur family life ur hubby...

khanak : he is resting in peace...

rahul :?? ?

khanak : he is resting in peace...in heaven...three yrs its been...

rahul : ohh...i dont know...sorry..sorry yaar...

khanak : its okay...how is ur wife..

rahul : she is fine...

khanak :kids?

rahul : not yet :-)...r u working...

khanak :ya..in my dads office...

khanak : oh...ok takecare...convey my regards to ur wife...bye... 

khanak turned of her chat and she went to the India Forums to write the FF...

she started to write the next part...

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khanak and misha usually goes to canteen for lunch...

on that day both did not feel to eat...so they sat in the class 

itself and they started to write the record work...

while writing she turned her head and saw it was him (shaan )

was sitting in the class and he was doing some work...

she looked for him a second and he was busy in doing his work...

she turned around...she continued her work...

suddenly she heard lot of noises outside...

she turned around..he saw rahul was taking shaan along with a smile...

and other boys were standing out and they were clapping hands and 

making some fun...she shook her head and she started to do her work.,...

she felt as if some..many r watching her..she did not mind it...she continued her work..

whenever she did not go to lunch she saw him (shaan ) was also there

in the class doing some work...she felt something strange...

in her heart she felt happy..but her mind said...idiot he is doing his 

work..why ur heart id dancing with joy...her heart then why he is there

whenever i did not go to lunch..he loves me...

her mind..u stupid...her mind laughed..u think u as beautifull...

he is liking u...no..he is just a classmate...thats all...

its all infactuation..got it..her heart felt sad...

(in the FF discussion khanak is replying for the comments...)
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SAN hi i am sandy...ur updates r so nice ..i like..it...
SHANAK :oh..thanks a lot sandy..so sweet of u..u r a candy...is it ur pic
SAN :ya...am i looking good...
SHANAK :u r looking beautifull
SAN  : tnak u..waiting for ur updates..:-)
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khanak started to type another chapter

it was friendship day...

all were tieing friendship band...boys were enjoying the most...

khanak and misha r sitting in their place...

shaan and rahul came to them...rahul tied a friendship band to misha...

rahul just shook hands with khanak...khanak just smiled...

shaan tied a friendship band to misha...khanak was sitting tensed...

khanak just looked at him..he looked at her with a smile...

shaan took the band and came near her ..khanak slowly

showed her hand...shaan tied the band withiout touching the wrist of her hand...

but khanaks heart was beating fast...shaan then went owy with a smile...

again her heart and mind argued...

it was her birthday...she dressed beautifully and she went to herclass...

morning starting itself they had lab...she entered the class...

misha :happy birthday ...(smile)

khanak gave the chocolate...

then her eyes searched for another important person..but he did not came

her heart felt little sad...rahul was alone sitting..she went and gave 

chocolates to other girls...they all clapped and some boys were in class...

they all looked wat is happening...she gave chocolates

and she took her notebook and she went to the lab...

her heart felt little sad...she was doing her programs...suddenly

her felt a shiver..she felt someone is looking at her...

she turned her head and saw it was shaan and rahul r coming to the lab...

shaan looked at her for a second and he turned to mam and he talked

and he went out...after finishing the lab they went for lunch and came...

when she came to calss first and started to write the record...

slowly other girls also came and they also started to write the record works...

boys also entered the class..but she was busy in writing the record...

meera : hey khanak...boys also wants chocolate itseems...do u have enough of it...

khanak : ummm..ya..here ...

khanak gave the chocolate pack to meera...

meera took it with a smile and she went to boys side...

within a minute..meera came back...

meera :hey khanak...they want u to give the chocolate...

she gave back the choacolate cover and she went to her place...

khanaks heart started to beat fastly...

her hands became cold...her mind..why u r afraid..they r not devils...

just give the chocolates and come okay...

ya..i wont be afraid..she got all courage...she closed her record work..

and she took the chocolate cover...

when she was going to boys side...she saw shaan was alone sitting in thrid row..

at the back row rahul amal and sanjay r sitting...in front of shaan

krish was sitting...she went to first row...she gave the chocolates...

all were busy in writing the records...she moved to second row...

krish was sitting with a smile...she gave the chocolate...

he took with a smile...her heart beat started to beat fastly...

she moved to the next row..she saw shaan for a second...

he took the chocolate and said happy birthday...

she said thank u..she went back to next row...

where those three were looking at her keenly..they asked something...

she said something with tensed..when she turned around she 

shaan was standing there with a smile...

she looked at him for a second..she moved to others to give chocolate

and she went to her place and she started to write the assignment

she could hear only thank you and his smiling face...


(in the FF discussion san luvkhash and khanak r discussing about the story that khanak writing)
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SAN :does he love...i think its infactuation...
LUVKHASH : no..its love..he also love...isnt...

SHANAK :   i dont know...;-)
SAN  :wat ..u dont know...okay will wait for next one...
LUVKHASH  : its defiently love...
SHANAK : how r u saying it..by the way wats ur name..?
LUVKHASH :defiently he loves her...hundred percent sure...and u can call me as KS...wat is ur name...
 SHANAK : i am ...ruthra...how can it be love without talking r telling...
SAN : nice argument...i wanna know to...
 LUVKHASH :nice name...will tell u..now i have work..i will tell u soon..sandy candy will tell u also..see guys..work is calling me...

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khanak closed her lappy and layed in her bed closing her eyes...

she thought of her past...

during the last semester...she did not see him...both of them r really busy...

her heart felt sad...her mind...i told u na..its just infactuation...

her heart ...ya its infactuation...nothing else..it felt sad...

after finishing her studies...within a week..her marriage was fixed with rohit...

rohit was a real nice man..he was a doctor...

after two months marriage was fixed...she send invitations to her friend...

rohit talked with her in phone daily and he made her talk ...talk...

khanak now really liked rohit a lot...she was very happy to get him as a hubby...

rohit liked her very much...marriage also took place...she was happy at that time...

her SR was canceeled as rohit went to hospital for important operation..

it was  alife saving operation...he succeded in that operation...

when he was coming back to house..he met with accident and he died on the spot...

khanaks marriage life overed next day itself...

she was broken a lot because in these two months rohit has taken her out..

talked ..made khanak to think rohit is alone her world...

after a month r so..all tried to talk with her for second marriage but she

denied it stongly...she then studied some courses 

and then she joined her dads office...

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khanak was busy in office work so she did not write the ff...

her cellphone rang...

misha : hey dude..today is collge reunion party do u rember it...

khanak : today...i really forgot man...

misha : okay i will come and pick u up...

khanak : umm...okay...

khanak went to her mom and dad who was sitting in hall and talking 

khanak : mom today i am going out with misha...

savitha : oh...we r also going out for a fn ma...yesterday i brought a saree

u wear that and go..okay...

sharma : shall i drop u beta...

khanak : no papa...misha is coming to pick me up...

savitha : r u not feeling good...

khanak thought s mom i feel something today... i dont know wat...

savitha : r u okay...

khanak : ummm..s mom...

she took the saree cover and went to her room...




Posted: 10 years ago
part 5  END

calling bell rang...

khanak : coming...

khanak went and opened the door...

khanak : hey come in misha...

misha : hey dude r u not ready...

khanak : first come in...

khanak and misha sat in the hall...

misha : wow..ur hand is looking beautifull...who put it...



khanak : my moms friend daughter...she came here yesterday

she asked me to show my hand for prctising...

misha : for prcatising but it looks superb man...

misha : where is uncle and aunty...

khanak : they have gone for some function...

misha : oh...okay come i will make u ready...

khanak :misha..i am not interested...u alone go...

misha : wat me..alone..everything will be spoil...ahh..

khanak : wat spoi...

misha : i will tell u...first get ready...

misha pulled khanak to the room...

misha : wow khanak this saree is very beautifulll...

khanak : no misha..i am not wearing that...

misha : no u have to..its an order...

khanak : misha...

misha : r u going to wear r i will ...

khanak glared ta her and then went and changed to the dress...

misha helped her in face makeup...she did mild makeup for her...

after finishing everything misha looked at khanak...



misha : wow..u r looking gorgeous man...

khanak just smiled...she looked at the mirror...

khanak : i will better change to something simple...

misha : no ..no..come..come..

misha pulled her out to the car...misha drived the car...

khanak : where is the reunion party...

misha : in MK residency...

khanak was just starring out..she was not in the world...

they reached the hotel...

khanak : hey why so many cars here...its like dads car...wait...

misha drove car inside and she parked inside...

misha : hey dude hear two halls r there..in one we r having our

party and in other some function is going on...

khanak :oh...

her heart beat started to beat fastly...she felt nervous...

when walking in the steps...some more people were walking...

she felt as if they r looking at her and walking...

they entered the party hall...her heart beat started to beat fast...

there were many people in the hall..many r changed in physical...

rahul : hey khanak...misha...come ...

khanak just smiled misha shook hands with rahul...

khanak : where is ur wife...

rahul : she will come little late...

khanak :oh...

rahul : u both make comfortable urself...

khanak and misha went inside...misha started to talk with her friends...

but khanak started to see the pics in the wall...

those pics r taken during college days...

there college tour pics..farewell pics ...

she saw one by one..she noticed shaan was standing back of her

 in most of the pics...her heart felt sad and it danced in joy..she was in two feelings..

after seeing the pics and thinking back the past she came to misha...

but her eyes searched for one person...but he was not there...

her eyes were searching each and every corner in the room...

rahul : r u searching for someone...

khanak :uhh...no...just looking around...

rahul : oh...(with a smile)

rahul was standing near khanak..he took the phone and dailled a number...

rahul : hey hello shaan...

khanaks heart stopped for a second...she felt tensed...

rahul : where r u man..waiting for u...oh came...

rahul cut the phone...khanaks eyes stayed focus on the entrance door...

her heart was beating fast...the door opened...he came ...

he was looking handsome..he is very attractive...he is looking dashing...



her heart felt sad ...a young girl was holding shaans hand and coming in...

she felt as if her heart was broken...

that girl pulled shaan and whispered something...

shaan said something to her in a smile...

khanak was just looking at them with her eyes sad...shaan also

looked at her..there eyes met...he smiled at her...

his eyes were sparking...rahul was shaking hand and he was saying something...

shaan and that girl and rahul were walking towards khaank...

khanak was feeling sad and nervous...

shaan : hi kahank...he extended his arms...

khanak slowly took her hand and placed in his hand...

he grabbed her hand very gently but firmly...

shaan : u r looking beautifull...

khanak : thanks...

still there hands r together..they have not left there hands...

khanak : looked at the girl near shaan with a question...

but shaan did not answer he was just smiling at khanak and not leaving her hand..

that girl smiled at her and she talked...

swetha : hi i am swetha..i am his sister...

on hearing sister her eyes sparkled..her heart danced in joy...

her hands became cold...she smiled broadly at swetha...

then she looked at shaan who was smiling at khanak...

khanak saw his eyes also smiling...then only she saw her hand is still

in shaans hand..she quickly took her hand with a shy..her cheeks turned red..

swetha : bhaiya...

swetha pulled shaan little distance away...khanak saw swetha was hugging shaan

and she shook her hand with shaan and she was telling something...

shaan was smiling and he told something...swetha smiled at khaank

and she walked out of the party hall...shaan came to khanak...

he stood near khanak...khanak started feeling nerbous..she dont know y...

her cheeks were burning...

khanak : where is she going...

shaan : u want to talk her...looking at her face...

khanak : uhh...she was...before she could talk...

shaan : u will have plenty time to talk...

before khanak could think wat he told...rahul called all of them...

rahul : hey friends come and sit in the chair..

chair is been arranged in a round...so that all can see eacha nd everyone...

shaan : come lets go and sit...

shaan put his hand on khanaks shoulder...

khanak turned and looked at shaan in shock...khanak tried to move

away from him...

shaan : khanak this way..still holding her shoulders...

and he made sit and he sat near her...on the other side misha was sitting

near khanak...khanak was shocked on his behaviour...

rahul : welcome guys to our reunion party...friends take the fruit salad guys...

waiter brings fruit salad in the tray...they were giving to each and everyperson...

shaan took a cup with fruit salad and he moved his chair still closer to khanak...

his knees and arms r brushing with hers...khanak was shocked...

he felt a shiver...khanak tried to move towards misha...

misha : hey dude move that side u r pushing me khanak...

and eat the salad it is tasty...this is ur favorite salad na...

khanak started to eat the salad..her heart felt joy as well as it felt some jitter inside...

rahul : hey friends u guys eat i will say a beautifull love story...

everyone shouted in yes to hear the story...

rahul : hey there lived a beautifull girl and boy..they were studying in the same 

college same class...girl was very silent reserved...

on hearing it khanaks heart felt a shiver...she started to listen keenly...

rahul : one day...even though they r in same class they did not talk r see...

there life was going differently..but fate played its game...

one day boy was walking from house...opposite side the girl was coming...

both the houses r in same area...there eyes alone met eachother

when they crossed eachother...they did not smile r they did not

hit eachother..there eyes alone met ...

on hearing this khanak dropped her spoon down...

there was pindrop silence all r looking at khanak...

khanak became very nervous...before she was about to take the spoon...

shaan bend and took the spoon and looked at khanak...

khanak saw his face...he was smiling..his eyes also smiling...

he gave the spoon to her...she got it...there hands touched eachother...

rahul : okay guys now listen...is this love r infactuation...

all shouted love...love...khanaks hand became cold...

she turned nad looked at shaan who was looking at her only...

his eyes telling a story..she cannot understand...

rahul then said about the birthday incident...

khanak thought oh no they r telling my story...does he knows...shann...

her hands started to shake...she felt many r watching her...

rahul : does this is love r infactuation...

everyone started to shout love...khanak felt as if her heart will come out...

rahul : hey friends this story is a real story...

misha : real...

rahul : s..it happened in our college...

misha :omg..in our college...

rahul : in our class...(with a smile)

everyone shouted who r they...did they joined in life...

rahul : u guys want to know...

khanak felt very nervous...she turned to misha...and said want to go to washroom..

she did not wait for mishas answer she started to walk out of the room...

she felt many eyes r on her back...after coming out she let out a long breath...

khanak thought no..i wont stay here...she walked towards the lift...

she entered the lift...she was about to close the lift shaan entered the lift..

lift door closed...shaan halted the lift...

khanak was in total shock...she was standing still...

shaan folded his hand and he looked at her without any expression...

khanak glared at him...she was about to on the button...

shaan stopped her...

shaan : why so hurry...

khanak : i...i want to go home...not looking at his eyes...

shaan : khanak ...

the way he called her name...khanak looked at him ...

khanak :ha...just starring at his eyes...she cannot take her eyes away from him...

shaan : I...LOVE U...

khanaks heart was stopped for a second...

khanak : waat..have u gone mad...

shaan : no...i am okay...and I LOVE U...

khanak was about to go and on the lift button...

shaan holded her hand and now her back was on the lift wall..

shaan was standing very close to her...

khanak was standing still ...she was breathing heavily...

shaan : look at my eyes...cont u see my love...he kissed her forehead...

khanak :no...she closed her eyes...

shaan : look at my eyes baby...

khanak looked at his eyes...

shaan : i want to marry u...

shaan kissed her lips gently...

khanak came back to reality...khanak pushed him with a force...

but shaan holded her tight...

khanak : leave me shantanu..leave me...it cont happen...

shaan : why...

khanak : ia m widow...u marry a beautifull girl..leave me...tears formed in her eyes...

shaan just laughed at her...

shaan : baby i love u...i love u alone..u also love me...

khanak : no..no ..i ..dont love u..(looking down)

shaan : baby look at me...look at my eyes and say...

khanak slowly opened her eyes and she looked at shaans eyes...

khanaks heart beated fastly...his face was very near...

shaan : u love me na...

khanak : there r many beautifull girls there in the world marry any one there...

shaan : i asked do u love me r not...

tears roll down from her eyes she closed her eyes...

shaan : baby please look at me...i love u so much..i cannot live without...

i want u to be with me forever in my life...u r my breath ...

khanak opened her eyes she looked at his face...

his each and every features says he loves her...

she hugged him tightly...shaan hugged her tightly...

a bright smile appeared on his face...tears rolled down from her eyes...

shaan cupped her face...kissed her forehead...

shaan : baby dont cry...i love u...kissed her eyes...

khanaks tears stopped ...she looked at him...he was alos looking at each other...

shaans phone rang...he took the phone and said s..and then he cutted the phone...

he pressed button 5 on the lift...

khanak : 2 nd floor na...there is the reunion party...

shaan just smiled at her and he hugged her sidewyas...

khanak blushed a lot...lift door opened...they walked near a door...

khanak was confused...they both opened the door...

there was a loud noise..flowers were thrown at them...

khanak was surprised...her mom and dad were standing there with a smiling face..

she saw a lady and a man...khanak thought hey these two came to office na...

i was busy so i just said a namasthey and i went out for a project work na...

madhavi : my MIL is very beautifull..

sunil : madhavi ..ur saree selection is realy good...its suits well for our MIL...

madhavi : sunil its shaan selection...

khanak thought this saree they brought for me..but mom said they brought...

she looked at shaan he winked at her with a broad smile...

there her classmates r standing and clapping hands for them...

khanak was stunned there was a pandit ji standing for marriage...

other side a reception like stage...she was shocked while walking..



marriage rituals started ...khanak was still in her own world..she thought she was in dream..

shaan tied the mangal sutra and he placed sindoor on her head...

khanak felt happy...her life is changed now to happy world...

everyonbe blessed them...shaan was holding her hand all the time...

when they were standing for the small reception...

sandy : hi shanak alias khanak...with a broad smile...

khanak : sandy...khanak hugged her...

sandy : its defiently love...shook hands with shaan...

shaan smiled...khanak was about to ask..some other guest came...

she noted all the questions to be asked...

they were sitting for eating...shaan was sitting close to her...

holding her hands...and brushing with her...

foods were served to them...she looked and she was surprised...

all r here faviorites...she smiled...

swetha : bhabhi all r bhaiya selection...

khanak looked at shaan he winked at her with a smile...

khanak blushed a lot...after finishing eating...they were sitting with their families...

shaan : khanak come with me...

khanak : were all r here na...

shaan : they wont say anything...

shaan holded her hand and started to walk...

everyone just smiled...khanak went along with him...

they entered the lift...shaan pressed 7 the floor button...

and he folded his hand and looked at her...

khanak was blushing a lot..she lowered her head...

they reached 7 th floor...shaan holded khanaks hand 

and they walked towards a room...khanak walked  with confusion..

shaan opened the door they entered and shaan switched on the light closing the door..



khanak was shocked with a surprise...it was a big room decorated with flowers...

khanak started to blush...she was standing still...

shaan came behind her and hugged her from behind...

shaan : r u happy...kissing her shoulder...

khanak just smiled and she blushed...

shaan holded her hand and they both sat on the bed...

khanak was sitting with lot of blushing...

shaan took her hands and he kissed her hands ...

shaan : tell me baby...

khanak looked at him shocked...

shaan : i know u wanted me to ask something na...

khanak looked at him in surprise...

shaan : dont look like that baby...he cupped her face and he kissed her face

and then he kissed her lips...at first khanak was shocked but then

she responded back to kiss...when they broke from kiss...

they were breathing heavily...shaan hugged her sideways...

shaan : baby i will tell u everything okay...

i loved u when i saw u in that green color salwar...

the way u looked at me...still i remeber...

from that day i felt somechanges in me...i started to love u...

i came to the bus stop and i waited to see during the evening along with rahul...

khanak looked at him surprised...her heart felt happy...it was dancing in joy...

shaan : rahul knows that i love u...

i really felt happy sometimes u saw me without others knowing but 

i saw each and every moment of u...

khanak hugged shaan very tight...

on ur birthday to i wanted to wish u..so rahul told meera that

u want to give chocolates...i was really happy on that day..

u came to my place and saw me ...shaan huged her tightly...

then later we all were busy in studies...then after finishing 

college i thought of saying my love...but i when i saw ur email invite for ur

marriage i was broken a lot...i thought u did not love me...

khanak : i thought it was just infactuation...

shaan : budthal ...(kissed her forehead..)

khanak : then...

shaan cupped her face and then kissed her lips very passionately...

shaans hand gently roamed in her body...

now they r lying in the bed...most of the dresses gone..

shaan was hugging her tightly...

when i saw ur friends request i felt happy...i viewed ur profile...

i just saw ur likings pages and no pics ...

i saw u liked a television serial...i saw that serial..it was a very romantic serial...

i saw ur likings of IF page...so i came to IF to RBO forum...

i saw  a FF that has lot of views and replies...

i started to read the story...i was shocked it was our first meeting...

and u have written color of our dress and even friends name r same except

hero and heriones name r changed...i got doubt...

and that day rahul called me...and i came to know about ur marriage life...

i was shocked...but my heart felt happy...but i dont know whether

u r writing this story r not...so once i tried to login in IF...

i gave the name shanak and then in password i gave my name...

it logged in...my heart danced with joy...

i talked with my parents...they felt happy...and we came to ur dads office...

u saw my parents alone..i was sitting in another room...

and my budthal has left her lappy...i opened and saw 

it was ur FB account with my profile showing...

i was really happy...ur parents also became happy...

they also accepted for the marriage...

i talked with misha...they also felt happy for us...

i dont want to lose u again..so i thought this reunion party will help me...

so i made all the arrangements...rahul and misha helped me in the plan...

khanak : sandy...

shaan : luvkhash(love khanak shantanu)...thats me...i invited sandy...

khanak : wat u...luvkhash khanak looked at his face in surprise...

shaan : s baby thats me...

khanak : so only u agrumed me that it is definetly love...

shaan : umm...smiled at her...

khanak looked at shaan...she thought he has done all for the love...

khanaks heart flyed in joy...

khanak cupped his face and kissed his face everywhere..

khanak : i love u...

with a force khanak kissed shaans lip passionately..her hands 

r on his haiir pulling him more closely...

shaan was surprised on her act...

when they broke from the kiss...they were breathing heavily...

shaan : om my darling u r very fast...i have to work fast enough to catch u...

with a force shaan made khanak lay down and he was top of her...

they kissed each other very passionately and they entered their beautifull world...


                        LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT



Edited by niki_rbo - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
awesome ending loved it dear.. Really nice short story.. Thanks for pms dear.. keep writing n pms me too.. can u buddy me..
Posted: 10 years ago
thanks a lot unishaz  :-)
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