arshi os: the chance of a kiss - Page 7

This content was originally posted by: Horizon

You always get under the skin of Khushi so very well, as if she is just a breath away.. more than the writers did..great job as always. Chana reminding of a kiss.. bery bery interesting.. (sorry poor imitation of your blood borne cousin mamiji..:)) but not surprised after all she can't part with these two.. chana and her Arnavji, or they always accompanied her during her dhaks dhaks!

 

And, you should be a script writer not a story as your words are as effective as the visuals , where the reader gets an instant vivid image. Loved it indi.

thank you, horizon. i am glad you like the way i see and feel khushi. there is much in her i sense... and your saying i get her better than her writers... awww blushing. bery bery interesting chana this is, isn't it, hello hi? 😉 truth of the matter is, like kkgsr, anything and everything reminds the writer too of that asr. 😆 that line in pink... you make my day. thanks so much.

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thanks, ravalisharma.

This content was originally posted by: indi52

thanks so much, durga, for having fun... yeah bichari achhi bahu khushi just wanting her bad bad boy. i like that super slow motion thought... chana was good, huh? i am thrilledwa. and sorry for this storm of stories. hopefully the need will abate soon... if not for anything, for the sake of my friends... 😆

 

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durga,

bahut naught girl you... vampire stories 😆. okay keepin' them comin'. 🤗

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hello issk,

you herewa? hai, my lux is too good. thanks, sir for liking bhersatile indi's kiss bhary kahani. basically, lunacy has struck and before they throw me into straitjacket, me doing maximum damage. 😆

thanks for liking and good to see you.

This content was originally posted by: indi52

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hello issk,

you herewa? hai, my lux is too good. thanks, sir for liking bhersatile indi's kiss bhary kahani. basically, lunacy has struck and before they throw me into straitjacket, me doing maximum damage. 😆

thanks for liking and good to see you.

Hahaha. You shatir dimag! Lux ka kya prayog kiya!!

We shall all be in ze loony bins soonwa🤪 Aur kiss phir kiss maximum kiss damage kiss udharwa😆😆

Hi Indrani,

Haylooo
😆
You are on a roll, aren't you?
I came back to catch up on your FF
And what do I find?
More stories ... 😃
This one was absolutely delightful - loved the fact that you wove a story around some beautiful IPK memories... Missed kisses, the saree in the boutique(thx for turning this into a pleasant memory) , channe...and of course, the auto rickshaw- even thought that scene had been just Khushi's imagination, it was a true picture of what their life together is - or rather what I imagine it to be... Even then she knew their life together would have these khatte meethe moments !
Very nice
Excuse my rambling - I do tend to go on and on...
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This content was originally posted by: Arnav_Khushifan

Hi Indrani,

What a treat from you on friendship day.🤗🤗 They both always know eachothers thoughts when they are away from eachother.  So sweet that he left his meeting because he felt that she needed him.  Also read chapter 9 of without you.  Superb Indrani.  Please update that one soon.  Thanks for writing this OS.  It is writers like you that are making it bearable for us Arshi fans.  looking forward to your next OS.