||The Whirl of Destiny|| Updating .......

Posted: 10 years ago

Hey guys,

I know you all must be thinking me to be a nut case, she already has a FF running which hardly gets updated and now another one '. ðŸ˜†

I just couldn't help myself '. ðŸ˜³

Anyways, this story is going to be totally different with a new essence.

And one more thing it's a DamVeer one and will not have Satya and Savitri because I don't even know who they are '. ðŸ˜†

So here it goes ... 

Prologue

Zaap !

Veer smirked as he saw his reflection in the mirror; with the new suit on. He

walked out of his room, down the stairs and out of his mansion; ignoring the

servants bowing down. All the servants sighed in relief seeing the tyrant

walk out and breathed in.


Sitting in his car, with a long trail of cars with his bodyguards behind, he fell

into deep thought.

The dream ! The prophecy ! The magic ! What is all this ?

He suddenly seeped back into reality and immediately applied the brake

seeing a girl cross the road and almost come beneath his car.

She is beautiful ! Was all he could think as she skipped away not even

realizing the danger she was in just a few minutes ago.

With lovely dark eyes and a fair skin complementing her long shiny hair;

she looked enchanting !

The words flowed out of his mouth as he looked ahead with a dazed look.

That's when it hit him.

She is the one !


So how was it ? 

Good or bad ?

Do leave behind your reviews (and likes) !

Would be waiting to read them !


Anyone wants to follow my Manveer FF then here's the link : 

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3636796



Vidhi

Edited by catty2000 - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
                                              


Prologue : Above (Page 1)

Chapter 1 : Page 8

Chapter 2 : Page 11
Edited by catty2000 - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
                                            
  


Just mention it in your comment and i can send you a buddy request !
Edited by catty2000 - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
Wow wonderful. Loved it vidhi
Posted: 10 years ago
That was really good vidhi!!
do continue!!
and continue soon 😊Edited by ronnie30 - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome!!
Your promos are amazing as always.
Loved it loads!!
Do continue soon.
Thanks for the pm.
Posted: 10 years ago
AWESOME PROLOGUE VIDHI.

WAITING FOR CS.

CONTINUE SOON.

DANZS FOR PM.
Posted: 10 years ago
FABULOUS!!! And PM for me too please!!!
Posted: 10 years ago
Thanx for the buddy request Vidhi Eagerly waiting for PMEdited by Astoria - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting start.
PM me please.

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