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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 10:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..Mishh007..

oh lovely poem...!!..happy rakshabandhan to all...!!



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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 10:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jikky_84

Happy Independence day Big smile

Awesome poem Tongue


after so many daysOuch
btw same to uSmile

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 1:19am | IP Logged
Nice .. Big smile 

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 1:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetsampa39

Hi,
First of all a very happy and be lated 'Raksha Bandhan' to You.

And now coming to ur poetry.What cud I say,You brought tears in my eyes [Literally] with the lil,cute brother-sister moments,with all the sentences of brothers highlighted with Green colour,i cant help but get my eyes teary,by remembering all the naughty,lovely moments i had with my brother when we both were kids.Now he is grown up but yet we fight and we are wild.But yet whenever I need him he's there.He's youger than me yet tries to be elder.

He is my sweetheart and there is and wud be nobody like him.

Thanx for d poem.You really know how to stir our emotions.


really??Do I know how to stir people's emotion ??
but I've no brother...it's surely hard for me to feel like a sister & pen it in a perfect way.

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 1:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetsampa39

The rose part of the poetry reminded me of smthng.Its not related to brother sister yet the 'Remorse' of the Rose reminded me of-

"Maanush khoon hole pore
Maanushi taar beechar kore

Nei ko khuneer maaf,

Tobe keno paayena beechar
Nihoto Golaap

Brindo theke chhidhe neoa
Nihoto Golap"

Jst random thot.I love the song.


no problem...ei song ta amr khub fav. na holeo kharap o lage naSmile

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 1:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by saima4744

it was wonder full poem on.
HAPPY RAKSHA BANDHAN to all of u.
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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 1:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prava55663

brilliant explained everything in just few lines...kudos!!
absolutely amazing


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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 1:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sri_Radha

Wonderful poemClap Clap
Happy Raksha Bandhan!!Hug




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