|| You || A One Shot - Page 5

Originally posted by: Angel-luvs-s

Res 😊
Sorry I am late bit you have both idea how happy I am to see that you are writing again...

Brilliant job... I love how you are so vivid and how you make the reader feel like they are a part of your story...it makes reading a pleasure and surely they will want to read more...according to me you are one of those gifted writers so keep writing and growing as a writer...love you shivi And never stop writing

Originally posted by: soumiluvztaarey

Superb di
Thankgod saviour aa gya
Thanx for PM

Originally posted by: hima_taarey

ab mein kya bolu yaar? 👍🏼

ek hi word me sab badal gaya! 👏

loved this os a lot... 🤗

superb! and i have no words... ❤️

love u!!! 

missing ur ff's so much! 😭

pls update soon! 

Originally posted by: priyal_TaaRey

Beautiful os dear 😛

Originally posted by: sreeja_rox

resd

EDITED

      Yet again you prove how very awesome you are at writing... this piece of work had somthing which which touched my heart.Specially the ending yaar... a guy changed,and he changed just for one girl..

   A girl whom he might not be knowing well,the guy had fallen for a girl who doesn't even reaches home late.These and many more changed the guy,a guy who was like the other brat's...!!!!

   LOVE is so strong!!!!!

Loved the OS shivangi...😳

Originally posted by: shab_taarey

OS was just superb...  u r really an amazing writer 👏
😉

Originally posted by: --taareylove---

awesome os dear👏👏

Originally posted by: reyanks

Its just beautiful...!!

Originally posted by: tanha29

A-D-O-R-A-B-L-E one shot this one is! 😆 I really liked it. The concept was nice and the way you depicted it, was cool. 😳 Loved the characterization of the guy here! Cute OS! A write up from someone's point of view is always a treat! 😳

Originally posted by: Mon_tr

Awesome dr