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Posted: 11 August 2013 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
awesome part Nidha. . .
the whole scenario was sooo natural n smooth. .
Theo feeling jealous of his sister for having a frnd like Mayi. .
Mayi's Nervousness
and finally spilling out the truth.  .
the family's Reactions were so beautifully portrayed.  .
n towards the end
when her mother assured her that they are there for her no matter what.  .
it touched my heart.  .
I almost cried!!

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amazing

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Nice update

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wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm
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awww! i feel bad for Mayi already kinda. she's landing herself into a pretty pickle

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Amazing update Nidha. im really liking the story. Im sure with time Theo will discover this one hell of a woman Mayi is pretty amazing and i cant wait for that LOL Mayis reaction, nervousness, her spilling the truth to her family everything was very beautifully written - natural. and her family seems so supportive on the contrary, Theo doesnt seem to have a good relationship with his mother at all. keep writing Clap

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Superb update
Very well written

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Originally posted by -Serendipity-

awesome part Nidha. . .
the whole scenario was sooo natural n smooth. .
Theo feeling jealous of his sister for having a frnd like Mayi. .
Mayi's Nervousness
and finally spilling out the truth.  .
the family's Reactions were so beautifully portrayed.  .
n towards the end
when her mother assured her that they are there for her no matter what.  .
it touched my heart.  .
I almost cried!!

Awww! Sorry for making you nearly cry! I want to portray the difference between the Mayi and Theo's family. Next chapters will show that.
Thanks for the warm comments Radz. It's much appreciated.Heart
Nidha

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