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(name still thinking)ehmmbh FF part 2 on pg 14 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice concept hammi
waiting fr the first updt
do add me in ur pm list
Duggukede thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely part
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice concept loved it
plzzz pm me tooo 😊😛
waiting for part 1😊

Edited by sweet_aayushi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
What's wrong ? 

You sent me a pm but m not in your pm list?

Please add my name too

Coming to the update , it was good ,., please continue soon and send me a pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting concept
Excited
Continue soon and please do pm me!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Here you go with the character sketch part 1 is coming soon will try to update in night... if u will give me quick response then I will give you quick updates now all is up to you all😉😉
 
CHARACTER SKETCH:
 
viren vadhera:
                  Good looking, charming, flirty, he have never taken life seriously but deep inside he is nice person, lives with his parents, the only child...
 
jeevika chauduary:
                          Beautiful, loves her life, charming, loves karan...
 
manvi sharma: 
                        full of life, chatter box, finding true love for herself
 
virat shukhla:
                        loves doing parties n all
 
karan verma:
                     karan n jeevs studies together, they are madly in love...
 
 
Those who r not in my PM list plz like the post of PM list on pg 1...I will add you in my PM list😊
 
 
Don't forget to press like tab above n do comments 😊
 
 
SCROLL DOWN FOR PART 1😊😊
Edited by koolgurl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

waiting for the response😊    

@avni_19: I need other name for this FF as frnds forever will not go for this FF + my other FF name is also frnds forever tht's y it will create confusion😊                      
 
                                PART 1
 
 
 -''girl's lines are in grey''
 -''boy's lines are in pink"
 
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-"Oh God I have to do lot's of work plus I don't have much time, and that stupid idiot is late today as well i'm not going to leave him... he is so dead..."
 
-"priya do it fast we don't have much time today it's our farewell and we have to perform it perfectly"
-"guys please do the rehearsals seriously"
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scene shift to other side...
-"oh shit I'm late she is not going to leave me what to do what to do, I need to think something.."  Idea you are too good K...
 
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-"finally guys practice is done I hope everything will be ok.."
 
-"don't worry when I'm here then everything has to be ok..." a voice came from back
 
 -''itni jaldi ane ki kya zarourat thi still we have much time for the preperation"😡-said jeevika
 
-" acha, please don't be angry jeevs I swear I woke up early today bt I had accident while I was coming here my hand n legs are still paining I was unable to drive that's y I came in cab just for you, Sorry"- said karan
 
-just then a clerk came to karan and said
 '' sir your car is not parked properly"
 
-karan to himself '' karan now you are gone"
 
-'' oh tou you had a accident you came here in cab right?" said jeevika with full anger😡
 
karan was nodding his head in ''NO''
 
they started running karan was running to save his life
 
-"karan now I'll break your leg for sure"said jeevs while holding a hard stick
 
-"jeevs i'm sorry please leave it, yaar yeh bht zour se lage ge, tm mjhe kise aur chze se marlo plz" said karan while running😳
 
while others were having good time while seeing there cute nok-jhok😆
 
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- "beta I think you should go for holiday as your clg is finished before you take something I think you should have some holiday"
 
-"Dad I'm also thinking same" said manvi
 
- "so now it's done ka manvi you are going for a trip"
 
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In store:
 
-"Two guys bump in eachother."
 
both together "Sorry"
 
B1: -"virat you...?"
-"hey, viren hows you yr?'' said virat while hugging viren
-" wow it's been long time yr" said viren
 
They had there chat
 
later
 
-" so virat what are your future plans'' said viren while having sip of coffee
 
-'' I'm thinking of going some whr for a trip before taking some thing in life" said virat
 
-'' oh cool, I'm also thinking same yr" said viren
 
-" I have an idea we should go together for the trip what say it will be fun'' said virat with his exciting smile😃
 
-'' Good I'm in" said viren😊
 
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That's it for today if I will get 60 likes by tomorrow then i'll update next part tomorrow...
 
If you want quick update then you have to press like tab and you have to comment asap...😊😊
 
Edited by koolgurl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
prologue and Cs looking forward
how story will moving update soon
koolgurl thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

part 1 updated😊

Edited by koolgurl - 10 years ago
surbhi1994 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
reserved to comment first :P
i thought wil b d 1st to comment bt i wasnt 😭😭😭
jeevika loves karan 😭
loved d update
its was damn good
liked jeevika n karan masti
waiting for viren n jeevika first meet
great concept
update soon 
Edited by surbhi1994 - 10 years ago