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Diaphanous Senior Member

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Ok, so the previous thread is locked so I'm posting the last and final part of the story on a second thread. Hope you enjoyed the story.

Part 7

Arnav opened his eyes and stared up into a dark, star-filled nighttime sky. He instinctively tightened his arms around his wife. He looked around as best as he could as saw that building in flames. A building they were in less than two minutes ago. Arnav watched as the flames engulfed the building and everything in it. Just as the building was being doused in flames, his own anger rose in flames as he remembered what had just happened. Knowing what that beast had done to his daughter and his family, and knowing that he had just walked out of the building before Arnav could get to him was burning him alive, from the inside. He didn't know if he would come after them again or if he had disappeared once again. Just like his name, he had become the dark, he had always lived in the dark and he once again was going to return until he tried to come back for his family. Suddenly, familiar breathing interrupted his thoughts. He felt a second person laying on top of him, the familiar beating of the heart that he had grown so acccostomed to hearing and the body that fit so naturally with his. He looked down and saw his wife laying, her head hidden in the crook of his neck, holding on to him tightly. He called out to his wife, to which he got a reply.

   "Are we out? I'm fine, are you ok?" Khushi asked as she raised her head and looked over her husband. She moved her eyes over his face, while she ran her hands over his body to make sure he was ok. Once she had reassured herself that no harm had reached her husband, she slowly pushed herself off and sat up. Arnav stood up and held out his hand to his wife, who graciously took it. He once again looked over his wife to make sure she was ok. He saw a couple scrapes now that they were standing and a few black marks, but aside from that she seemed fine. "Khushi, are you really ok? You are all scraped and dirtied. Let's go and get you looked at." he said as they made their way towards where Maan and him had parked.

   As they made their way to the cars, and after many attepmts, Khushi finally convinced Arnav that she was fine. When they arrived at the cars, they saw Geet step out of the car with Arshi in her hands. Arnav bent down and caught his daughter, who ran into his arms screaming his name. Arnav stood up, hugging his daughter, cherishing her warmth, knowing there had been a chance he would have never seen her again. He turned to Khushi who walked to them and hugged both of them. Arnav kissed both his daughter and wife and handed Arshi to her. He then walked to Geet to ask about Maan's whereabouts. When told that he had left as soon as he handed Arshi to her, Arnav left to go find his friend. Khushi walked to Geet and hugged her, reassuring her friend that she was fine. They then got inside the car and waited for their respective husbands to return.

            Arnav ran towards the burning building to look for Maan. He ran towards the entrance and called for him, but got no reply. He walked to the back of the building, calling his name. As he turned the corner of the flames, he saw a man walking towards him. Instantly, he ran towards the man, knowing who it was. He engulfed the man in a hug, happy that his friend was safe and sound. The two broke apart. "Are you ok? Did you get out quickly enough? Where is Khushi?" Maan asked him.

   "We are fine, Maan. Khushi is with Geet and Arshi," Arnav replied. They both walked back towards the cars when they heard sirens in the distant. "Maan, did you see Shyam? He walked out after starting the fire," he said. Maan turned to Arnav, "Yes, I got him as he walked out. He's unconscious at the moment though. And tied up," he said. Arnav looked at Maan and the question died on his lips as he looked at his friend's expression. They continued walking to where the man in question laid.Arnav looked down at the man that he had trusted his sister to. The man who had brought a smile to his sister's face after their parents' deaths. This was the person who tore everything apart, who destroyed his sister, his wife and his family. Seeing him once again, Arnav felt an anger he had never felt before. This was bigger than ASR. This man had awakened the beast in him, and Arnav enacted upon his beastly urges. He jumped on the unconscious man and punched him and took out all his anger. But too soon for Arnav, he was being pulled off the man by Maan and right after, they were surrounded by police. He watched silently as the police took the senseless man and put him in the jeep and took him away. Arnav sighed in relief as he saw the vehicle drive away into the darkness, never to return.

            Silently, yet peacefully, the two friends walked to where their wives awaited them. As they approached the cars, both Geet and Khushi got out and ran to their respective husbands, holding them tightly in their embraces. Khushi broke apart first, looked into her husband's eyes and understood what had happened. She embraced him again, hugging him tightly to her, being grateful she could hug him. They were interrupted by a small voice, calling out "Papa!" Both couples turned around to see Arshi get out of the car and run to her father. He picked her up and kissed her, knowing that finally, she was safe. They were safe. Arnav didn't have to worry about having a psychopath coming after his wife or daughter anymore. They were finally done. He took Khushi in his arms again, hugging both his daughter and wife to himself, breathing in their twin scents of jasmine and jalebi. He turned to Maan and nodded. They both turned towards their cars and drove home in content. Him and his wife could finally live their lives in peace. And his Di could continue on with her life.

If you liked it, please comment and like. It means a lot to me! :)

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superb update

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loved the ending glad finally snake is out of their lives loved the bat down snake got awesome ending glad they got their daughter back safe and sounding and he is gone forever this time thanks for the pm 

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