Firstly i want to congratulate
Coming to the promo
Firstly i just love the pic u used for the promo. U know what this was the pic i had guess u would use but i didnot mention
this pic seems so real and so matchable for the current situation u mentioned in the promo..n the hug...its is so full of warmth, care, love and everything..
and after reading the promo, i am and still shocked. OMG aarti went through hell
a lot of hell...and something more is about to come. OMG...what happened more? what more did that python did to her?
omg...now i am scared...but i am still happy with the fact that aarti is now getting support from yash..which is the most important thing. Cant wait for this track to get unfold. Do try updating soon (as per your convinience)...
Coming to the special note
di, the way you were spontaneously giving an update, i was so happy with u and proud about it. But you are right when u do some stuff this spontaneously u r bound to get tired. So its normal. DOnt worry...I agree writing emotional scenes are really very hard but the way u have written this update...i salute u for this...u just rock...omg i just cannot imagine if this update had the capacity to make me sit still the entire time i read the update, what will the other upcoming updates do to me..
I am loving ur x-large updates very much...and u dont need to be sorry for anything,,,,its your story...u can show it anyway u want...n i really agree with the fact that no one is born good or bad its the circumstances which make one bad/good/...a very well point u have pointed out here..di...awesome job...excellent job(u said u cannot write quotes, are u sure?)
Keep rocking di and i am going to follow you where ever u go...hehehehe...n i will always like to be ur support system...always (as u support me for eveything)
so keep rocking and keep updating...will be eagerly waiting for ur every update...
Now finally coming to the update
As i mentioned earlier and also in the pm and i am also mentioning here...
This is the awesomest update di...very emotional...yet very strong
The way you have shown aartis emotions...from fear, to cry to shock..everything ...its just fantastic...i am literally out of words to describe how i felt reading it... i felt as if i was imagining all the scenes...i felt as if i was feeling very emotion u mentioned for aarti in this scene...I was sitting still throughout the update...(my friend was visiting me...she kept talking and i kept reading this update without paying attention to her..she saw my shock face and she got scared looking at my expression as i was so involved in the story..for once everyting stopped for me)
OMG...aarti really went through hell
...due to this freaking prashant
and the only reason he did this to aarti was to take revenge from yash...he spoiled her life...i just feel so pity for aarti and so angry and frustated towards that stupid urghh(u know who i am talking about)
She even got scared of yash when he came in for her...n this was bound to happen...as he had crossed his limits...(well it was his frustation but still..he did cross his limits)
i am so glad gayatri was there was aarti everytime...but i dont understand when gayatri was aware of the entire truth, y did she let aarti suffer? what was the point in that? (i know u will soon answer this question as the story progresses)
Poor yash even he started feeling guilty for aarti...For a bit i was angry as he should not have forced himself on her...but on the other side i feel bad for him as he with many other family members were always in dark the entire time...finally the truth came out...the bitter truth..that aarti and prashant never had a happy life and prashant made her life hell...yash will now start feeling more guilty and even more as gayatru confronted him with those bitter words...n omg slapped him..
in a way i support gayatri a little as she cared for aarti very much...but i am also way too angry on her as she was the one who hid the truth from the family...if she had taken the step to tell the truth to yash atleast, this day would not have come...
i loved the way u showed angry, confused, full of guilty feeling yash...trying to find points and joinning them...his anger and frustations towards aman is also justified as he also hid from him...yash would have never expected aman to hide such things for him
i knew it...i knew it akash and aarti were cousins...i knew it..poor aarti...literally feel bad for her
again loved yash and palak scene...it was so very very touchy and awesome...palak is seriously an angel...she could do the magic which no one could do...she could calm her yash papas anger...this is so adorable...
the last scene was the awesomest...the way u showed aarti's changed emotion for yash seeinghim taking care of her daugther...this is jut brilliant...the way u described those two situations through dr kiran...brilliant...have no words di...this is just the best...i love iit...i love it...i love it...
thanks for giving us such a wonderful update di...i think this is again one of ur best work...u just simply rock...
keep giving us ur wonderful updates...i am greedy for more now...
please update soon coz i cannot wait for the promo scene...
Edited by princess121993 - 01 August 2013 at 2:23pm