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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

IF-Rockerz

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

The first thing I will like to quote in capital letters is that "DONT DISCONTINUE THIS FF I LOVE IT TOO TOO TOO MUCH PLEASE". Its a humble request nidhi don't discontinue this ff please please please..
Coming to the update I liked the bond you showed between Sharon and Rey and the little speech he made making Sharon realize how utterly wrong she was in being ungrateful to Swayam and then making her realize how much really she meant for him and how much he'd given up for her I absolutely loved this entire sequence trust me brilliantly written gal..👍🏼.
Then it was a treat seeing the artistic side of Swayam and I loved the portrait he made of Sharon it was beautiful..😊. The monologue regarding rey which followed thereafter was written down nicely to you..
But the highlight of this update was the Swaron hug it was awesome I read and re-read it.. The conversation that followed was bang on and most importantly Swayam finally attained realization that he indeed has fallen in love with Sharon I really really look forward to reading the next chapter hope you update it please do..😊.
Love,
Kashmi..

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sonii

@sonii

Groupbie

Posted: 10 years ago

Just read the FF from the beginning!

And i must say, its absolutely refreshing :D

It's one hell of a plot ..and i would love love love for u to continue it sooon! :)

Your sense of humor is brilliant! :) :)

Please do continue it :)

Finally Swayam understood his feelings, so it's really intriguing to know how things turn out!

So please, continue!! :)

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

amazingg update !!!

as a writer you never fail to surprise me

ur writings are becoming more crisp n clean

thing tat i luved in tis update was

rey he knows wat swayam feels for sharon

n the way he persuaded sharon

tat she shud apologise to swayam was fantastic also

he kept saying to swayam how he likes sharon

which made swayam unconsciously think for once

tat mayb he likes sharon

the hospital scene was very subtly written

n the painting wala scene is my fav

tis only shows how much swayam is in luv wit sharon

the scene made me fall for tis ff more 😳

There are many different kinds of love and

there's no single way to know whether

you're really feeling it -- or just in the throes of a serious infatuation.

Still, if you pay attention to how you feel and

act around your special someone,

you should be able to figure out whether you're really in love

the last scene justified tis saying

i will give you full points for tat hug ☺️

i just hope tat sharon too realises her luv for swayam soon

all in all a very well formed pleasing read

do update soon 🤗

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924302

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

Have read half of it and it looks like it is going somewhere. Will read the full thing soon and comment.

AND PLEASE DO NOT DISCONTINUE THIS. THIS IS THE ONLY FF I LOOK FORWARD TO.

-Rini

******

Finally finished reading this endearing chapter. You portray Sharon so bloody well, her every expression, every idiosyncratic detail, I think that's what I love about this FF the most because your Sharon is every inch the Sharon I identify with. The one who'd rush into an operation theatre to apologise to a person without realising she would create further trouble for him, the one who'd sit down rather resignedly after Rey tells her the same.

Swayam's confrontation with his inner self was beautiful. It wasn't anything Shakespearean, yet leaves an impression.

PS: The difference in height is something very SwaRon like. 😊

Edited by -bLEu98- - 10 years ago

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zk456789

@zk456789

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

Best update
Waiting for swayam to confess his love for Sharon
Thanks for the pm
Do update soon

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618368

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

amazingg update !

but last mein kabhi ha kabhi na y

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paro1311

@paro1311

Senior Member

Posted: 10 years ago

The last 2 update definitely takes this FF somewer. The whole saving the tree incident was one of my fav bits in any story i've read here or elsewer. In the show my attachment has always been a bit more for Swayam than Sharon. But it is FFs like yours and Kankshita's wer i love Sharon like crazy

She will always be my fav fictional character ever :) I totally love the SRP who doesnt cry nd throws bricks thru windows instead!!

I've got a pile of books on my bedside table tht i must've read a hundred times and i will read anther hundred. Nd this FF is something i would keep in that pile, so pls pls pls do not discontinue this one😊

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Chaitra Joshi

@-Chaitra-

Goldie

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

Please never think of discontinuing this FF😭

This is such an annoyingly great FF that it makes me want to cry😛

I really liked rey's speech and sharon's version of an apology 😉But the best part of this update was the description of sharon's sketch made by swayam...each of her features are explained incredibly well👏

What makes it even better was that swayam realized his love for sharon...

i'm so waiting for the next update...pls make it fast😳

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

IF-Stunnerz

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

First of all i am really sorry for such a late reply

was really busy

the update amazing

i loved the speech.. it was really nice 👍🏼

and sharon's version of apology

both swaron were well described and penned down 😳

and swayam realizing his feelings 😳

beautiful update

waiting for the next update

hanks for the PM

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abhilasha_dream

@abhilasha_dream

IF-Rockerz

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

Amazing as always... Wonder where the relationship would go now when Swayam has realized his feelings for Sharon and what will be her reaction once she gets to know about it.

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