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Arshi OS -- ||~Naughty @ 40~|| *Old Days Revived*

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Posted: 10 years ago
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unres by salooni πŸ€—

[Quote=salooni]and they walk to perpetuity in hands
and hands forever
with sweet talks
cute fight 
beautiful morning
and blissful night
the end that has beginning
in them 
there saga began with falling of her in his arm and 
end in his arm every day and night
they meet again at work and now he has appointed her as 
his personal assistant for whole life.
she taught him the value of relations
and now he offered her uncounted
beautiful and strong 
relation of his 
he once not trusted her and blame her 
and now there is only trust between them 
and they often but for giving sweet pain
once her love make him 
forget his past 
now they only weave there bright future
no entrance for any past
a day was there when they both
together
unmask culprit from there life
and today they no give any other to come between them 
she was a kid in heart,always enjoyable,playful, 
never thought of evils things
he was rude hated the world
shield his heart with iron rods
to not got in break again by all 
ghost
she take it out of shield 
assure that it will never break in her custody
he only has to smile 
be in other happiness
dance,love,happy, with her 
and they promise to celebrate 
each moment of there life 
no matter how many years passed to it 
but today also she jump,play,tease, make him angry 
on his day and he 
and he also never forget to 
pamper her,play with her,
give her treat in his own style on her day
and there day spend like this 
fighting,teasing,playing and loving each other
she thought he had cheated her
let her trust go weak 
but when saw his tension 
dropped all possibility 
and trusted and support her immensely
learning that he is her 
and not asset to sell 
but a pearl to keep safe in her arms
and today also there morning happen with her beautiful face and 
night making love to that flawless
face.
he has to be arrogant 
to teach her arrogancy of world 
he had to be cruel 
to make her see cruelty 
of world
ha had to make her princess
learn walk 
so that if someday he has to 
take her down from his protected and warm 
arms
she not get alone and lose from this fast moving world
he choose hatered for her love so that she learn to love her and 
able to spread her wings in 
sky with confident
done magic 
she wins the world 
all clap for her
they bow her and she bow to that 
person who taught her that 
given strength to face world
and always by her side even no matter 
physically how far
now she rule his world
and he is known from her name
the perfect life of two different 
unperfect people 
who get attached by faith 
fighting all odd
be connected even in 
sorrow
today sorrow is far from them and happiness
is abandon with them
and they live like this ever forever
still exploring magic between them
wondering their trust on each of them 
loving every second more than gone one
still thinking 
iss pyaar ko kya naam doon

this was the perfect ending for me 
but they not show 
but your story 
fullfilled my wish 
thanks dear
it is beautiful piece of love,sweetness,cute
and magic of arshi
tfs

keep it up


unres by anandi

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OMG. πŸ˜² πŸ˜² πŸ˜² 
Khushi 45 and Arnav 48 πŸ˜² πŸ˜² πŸ˜² πŸ˜² 
Arnav with spects, yucky 
First I used to imagine him as my uncle, now will have to imagine as granduncle πŸ€£  πŸ€£  πŸ€£  πŸ€£  πŸ€£  πŸ€£ 
Payash's sangeet  
kitne acche the woh din  
I am missing IPK 
Typical Mom and Dad, just like my Maa nd Paa, πŸ€£  πŸ€£  πŸ€£  πŸ€£
Dads are always good and my Paa is the best 
HP still here, πŸ€£  πŸ€£  πŸ€£ 
where's OP and JP??? πŸ€£  πŸ€£  πŸ€£  πŸ€£  πŸ€£ 
Where's Laxmiji?? 
You forget her  πŸ€£  πŸ€£ 
Arnav  gave leave to HP 
Think about your age damn it 
But it's too cute nah 

OMG ...Arnav had made a beautiful collage of their pictures on walls .  So sweet 
Arnav tried to take Khushi in his arms but cudnt .  bechara Arnav. 
is he that much weak that he can't pick up Khushi 

Arnav - "Aane do aur ab ye mat kehna ki aman ka phone aa jayega..." 
yeah I forgot to ask where's Aman now?? πŸ€£  πŸ€£ and NK, Lavanya, you forgot about them 

Mohit you really wrote?? 
I still can't believe
It's super sweet and cute.
Loved it so so so much 
But now I am seriously missing them. 
It's really awesome 
I have cried reading a less of stories and it's one of them, i seriously have tears on my eyes now πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ 

And keep writing more OSs πŸ˜³ 
and you have promised me something a long time back, you still didn't complete it 




unres by ara di 

[Quote=ara_000]damn bhaiu u actually write this...! πŸ˜² πŸ˜² πŸ˜² πŸ˜² πŸ˜² πŸ˜²
OMG i cant believe it...! πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
but u knw its simply fabulous...! πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
i actually relived the whole of my IPK days through this OS...! β€οΈ
i nver thought that sumone will thnk abt arshi being 40 yrs nd writing on them...! πŸ˜³
goddd bhaiu u simply cracked it up...!
their bonding even stronger at this age nd they r reliving their beautiful memories of past...!
their nokh jhoks,their fights nd their love - truly r worth to remember β€οΈ
i love it how u have used the IPK scnes as the flashback nd wrote on those secene nly nd their reactions aftr remmebering their beautiful momnts...! β€οΈ
oh goddd i am still in my dreamland remembering their lovely momnts 
i love it how u have potrayed their characters nd at the age of 40 also their love is ever so strong nd pure...! β€οΈ
lovely shot bhaiu πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
loved it totally β€οΈ
hugs toh banta hai boss πŸ€—



unres by anku di 


[Quote=ankitachoudhury]OMG!!!! What is this Mohit????😲
I mean..πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›ufff...😳lemme take a long breathe first...😊
gawwddd re-living arshi memories...😳
simply fab bro...πŸ‘
the way you started the os..i was like what the!!!!!!😲
arshi in their 40s...πŸ˜›
my arnie boy is still naughty...☺️
nani passed away..😲hawww RIP naani ji...πŸ˜•
anjali out of RM...finally no interruptions from poojali...
Aarav s so sweet..😳😳😳.he really asked for Arshi's permission before leaving...😊.haayeee...
mohit i must say u left me speechless bro...πŸ˜ƒ
the way u wrote this piece was outttstanding...πŸ‘
loved it to the core...πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ
now after this OS i am missing IPK more...😭
do write more one shots...😳
i will be waiting for your next one...😑
loveya tooo LOADS!!!!!!!!
πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ€—


unres by aishu di

[Quote=aishu3003]no commentswa😑😑

ok shall i unres or notwa

u want me to unreswa

m comingwa

d OS was damn cuteee bhaiπŸ‘

jus loovveedd ittt

and d title s also perfectwa

loveed d way u have mentioned all d FB parts wit pics

good job bhaiπŸ‘πŸΌ

but u din inform me

nxt tym do inform me or else





Edited by MT_loverboy - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb !! Loved it πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hahaha super os yaar πŸ˜†...loved it..bless Aarav haha...Arnav still the same old haha...thanks for the pm 
Jenny x
Edited by IPK..Jenny - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awwwiiieee how cute...btw mohit update ur twilight arshi version wala story soon!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
knowing them they will do this even at age of seventy eighty
after all this is arhi naa
so cute they are still the same right
cheers for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
AWWW..ITS SHOOO CUUUTEEE...😊
I REALLY DIDNT XPECT IT FROM U ROTLU..πŸ˜‰

MUJHE PATA HI NI THA TUM ITNA CUTE STORY BHI LIKH SAKTE HO..πŸ˜›

I LOVED EACH AND EVERY PART OF IT..
I WISH I COULD WATCH IT IN TV..THEY ARE REMINDING THEIR PAST..HAPPY MOMENTS..

Loved it❀️
Good job😊
   Edited by ...OceanEyes... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
A REALLY CUTE STORY.

ON A MORE SERIOUS NOTE, IF THEY GAVE US JUST A COUPLE OF EPISODES LIKE THIS AT THE END, IT WOULD HAVE GIVEN US CLOSURE AND MAYBE HELPED US MOVE ON (IF IT IS AT ALL POSSIBLE TO DO SO) INSTEAD OF CREATING A GREAT BIG HANGAMA. IM SORRY BUT I AM OF THE OPINION THAT THE TAMASHA WAS CREATED BY THE PH AND NOT THE FANS. THEY ONLY REACTED TO IT. WELL, WOULDNT ANYONE, FOR SOMETHING THAT MEANS SOMETHING TO THEM.
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Posted: 10 years ago
aww that was so cute amazing..
at the same time it was funny I loved it sooo much
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb 
mohit πŸ‘
thank u for pm