Be-intehaan virman ff #1 - Page 23

Originally posted by: Mannia

Wonderful update yar    very good 

poor mannu,feel sad for her 

yeh virat nd that girl...

thanks for pm... 

Thanks a lot dear... 😊...

Will try to updt soon... tada...

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

<font color="#990066">Arre baprei... virat ko bhaad mein bhej dia... 😆...

</div>Three cheers for viren...

Will try to come back soon with manvi as well as virats reaction too... 😉...<div>

Looks like virat ko next updt mein helmet pehenake lana parega... 🤢</font>

usko tu helmet pehna de ya bullet proof kuch bhi uska murder zaroor karke rahungi how dare he do that to my mannu haan apna ilzaam manvi pe saal diya aur khud maze loit raha hai ...*shoots virat and then feels peace * 😡 😡

Originally posted by: Rachel19

hey amazing update

viren saved manvi but she lost the baby that was so sad

i loved karan and his dialogues

i just hated that virat was making out with that girl

that girl was behind him all the time

really liked how you explained all those emotions

just awesome

please continue soon

will be waiting for your update

Thanks a lot rachel... 😊...

You liked karans dialogues... ...

Will try to cont soon... take care...

Originally posted by: .Yamin.

OMG Lara this was superb awesome u juz nailed it !!!!  it was so intense !!! gosh n tat girl !!! aargh virat bhi apne nashe main khoyaa howaa hai ;( poor mannu !!! :'( she lost her baby toohaww viren ki entry :DDD he is such a sweetheart !!! he is caring !!! this is getting more n more interesting !!! n karan seem to be innocent !!! loved the update looking forward for next !!! continue soon if possible !!! thanks for the pm Lara :D

Thanks a lot dear... 😊...

Yes dear karan is innocent...

Will try to be back soon with the next updt... 😃

Originally posted by: Ankita1997

Hey Lara nice name huh!
the update was just freaking awesome and extremely mindblowing!! *claps*
atlast someone saved manvi and thats Viren..
Karan said a very correct thing to Virat... Believing some pictures he has lost the most precious thing of his life and moreover his baby too [:'(] and he is fu*king making out with someone thinking her to be manvi waow amazing! >.<
update asap waiting for the next part eagerly

Thanks yaar... 😊...

You like my name... 😃...

Will try to updt soon as am a bit busy nowadays...😕

Originally posted by: Mannia

Wonderful update yar    very good 

poor mannu,feel sad for her 

yeh virat nd that girl...

thanks for pm... 

Thanks a lot dear...😃...

thanks for youe appreciation...

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Ohh !!!... Thats so sweet of you... 😊 😊...

Thanks dear... 😃... and pls dont die... 😕... stay alive to read more updts... 😉...

hahah .. yes yes m still here just to read ur remaining ur story .. sO u better update soon 😛😃

Originally posted by: nrithyao

superb update
loved it
poor maanvi
hope she become fine soon
loved viren a lot in this update
thanks a lot for the pm

Thanks a lot yaar...:)... ... ... will try to updt soon but am stuck yaar, :(... dont know when I will be able to updt...

Originally posted by: jia123sagar

awesome update

viren helped maanvi

he is so sweet

poor maanvi

plz cont soon

Thanks dear...:)... dont know when I will be able to updt... but will try my best to cme bck soon... tada...

oh my god!! this is just soo good!! im completely in love with dis ss! gurl u call urself not good in emotional writing well c'mon its just two updates n im already crying n as well as craving for da next part!! u r so rocking it pls continue soon!! pls pls pls...pretty pls :)