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Be-intehaan virman ff #1

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Posted: 17 July 2013 at 1:42am | IP Logged
  Heyyy... I am here with a new ss on virman.
Its not gonna be anything goody goody, lots of tears and emotional things are gonna be doing
" Tandab Nritya " here. You guys know that emotional things are not my forte but still am gonna try it and will only continue if I get good response from you all.
So crossing fingers and heres the name of this ss...
                        Be-intehaan
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 Heres the prologue... am crossing my fingers...
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                  Manvi was really happy that day. She was so much excited coming back to vadhera mansion from the hospital. It was unexpected but a sweet truth.. a dream like reality in her life. No not only in her life but in their life- virat and her life. A new chapter is going to make its way to their love filled life.
                           She held the pragnancy test report close to her heart. It was positive... they are going to be parents now. She asked vanshika ma downstairs where was virat. She ran upstairs not being able to held back her excitement to see the same excitement in virats eyes after knowing this good news. The whole family was going to a party except virat and manvi. Good thing... manvi thought, as she wanted to share this news with only the father of her child at first and spend some alone time together.
                        She opened the bedroom door making a loud noise and entered hurriedly. Virat was sitting on the bed facing his back to her.
" Virat "
Virat turned back and manvi stopped in midway. Something was very wrong... very very wrong.
Virats eyes were blazing fire and his face was looking wild in anger. But manvi chose to ignore all these. Afterall this goodnews will make all the gone wrong things right. She stpped forward to virat...
Manvi: " I have a good news virat... am so happy today... virat I am... "
 
Virat: " Why did you do this to me manvi ? Why  ? "
 
Manvi was very confused now. what was he talking about.
 
Manvi : " What are you talking about virat ?  I dont understand. "
 
Virat : " No manvi... I dont understand what was less in my love manvi.. why you did this to me !!"
 
Manvi was hell confused even more.
 
Manvi: " What the hell are you speaking virat ? "
 
Virat: " This... "
 
Virat threw some pictures on manvis face. Manvi was shocked, she picked up one of the pictures from ground and froze. In the picture Karan- manvis best friend and manvi was making out. Manvi remembered this moment but it was nothing like this. All the pictures were taken from  wrong angles. Manvi looked into virats eyes and got scared out of wits. The eyes where there was only love and affection for her was now replaced with hatred.
 
" Jin akhon mein humesha dekhi maine mohabbat ka basera.. kabhi naa socha tha dekhungi mein unhi ankhon mein nafrat apne liye Be-intehaan... "
 
 
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So tell me how it is, press the like button and comment if you want me to continue it...
 
Take care ... tada...
                                                      Lots of love...
                                                          lara...
 
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 Index...
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Chapter 1 - pg 4 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3668714&TPN=4
Chapter7
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Thread 2 link...
 
Thread 3 link...
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Edited by devilaonmoon - 14 February 2014 at 11:29am

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Posted: 17 July 2013 at 1:45am | IP Logged
Heart yipee 1st one
amazin concept
waiting 4 next part
update soon Heart


Edited by jannat89 - 17 July 2013 at 1:47am
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Posted: 17 July 2013 at 1:51am | IP Logged

My Works...

 


Edited by devilaonmoon - 14 February 2014 at 11:33am

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Posted: 17 July 2013 at 2:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jannat89

Heart yipee 1st one
amazin concept
waiting 4 next part
update soon Heart
Hug       undefined ... Jhappi lele yaar...
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Posted: 17 July 2013 at 2:05am | IP Logged
Ahh its awesome...virmaan sepreation, their kids n virat lots off rona dhona these r my fvrt concepts...ehahaha...n this is also something like that...cont soon n pm me frm next
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Posted: 17 July 2013 at 2:27am | IP Logged
Awesome... Claps...
Starting was brilliant... Full of happiness n life n then came the shocker... Manvi n karan's morphed photographs which viray believed n doubted manvi... Eagerly waiting for d first chapter...
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Posted: 17 July 2013 at 2:27am | IP Logged
This is so interesting!! Continue soon!!
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nice concept continue soonWink

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