FF-Torn by Hidden Desires#2 (ch16/pg29)20th July - Page 2

JASLEEN

@Jasleenkaur01

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

A big big big big big CONGO 4 the new thread...
The part was awesomely written... Zoya n Hamzah friendship bond is growing nicely...
Woww Asad kising Zoya so roughly to claim her...Hope Asad says his true feelings 4 Zoya soon...
I think for Hamzah role Karan Kundra or Karan Wahi...rest is urs choice...
Thanks 4 d pm n update nxt part very soon...

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-RohitMaxwell-

@-RohitMaxwell-

IF-Addictz

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

Amazing update and congratulations for thread 2 🥳

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giee

@giee

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 10 years ago

They kissed , they kissed , they kissed

Okay

I loved so much about this update :

1) Jealous Asad
2) Zoe and Humzah's conversation
3) Humzah understanding her situation
4) Jealous Asad 😆
5 ) Kiss
6) Kiss
7) Kiss
8) Kiss
9) Kiss
10) Kiss

The passion with which he kissed ...ufff ☺️

"After what seemed like a lifetime .. Asad broke the kiss .. Both of them panting .. Breathlessly .. Asad noticed Zoya's swollen lips .. And all he did was feel satisfied ... He marked her .. She was his from now .. Rest can go to hell .. Asad brushed his thumb over her slightly parted lips .. He needed some air to breathe in for now .. Coz if he inhaled her vanilla scent some more , it would be impossible for him to control ..
Zoya could see raw love in Asad's eyes but thought that she was hallucinating .. No way he could love her .. Or maybe he did .. Right now she just wanted to dance in the rain for being kissed like that ..it was perhaps the best kiss of her life ..
They both stood in the same position for some time .. Then finally Asad spoke ' see u in an hour ' and kissed the corner of her lips ..
Zoya nodded .. Trying to hide the crimson shade of her cheeks .. As Asad exited her door "

This part...
I loved how she wanted to dance
I loved how he felt right
I loved how she touched her swollen lips
I loved how he kissed the corner of her lips and said "see you in an hour"

I LOVE YOU
I LOVE THIS FF
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE 😃

Edited by giee - 10 years ago

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Zara

@Zara_92

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

awww Thankyou sooo much guys for ur comments 🤗

this thread wouldnt have been possible without u guys 😊

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Archana

@mysticlover

IF-Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

Congratulations for the next thread!!! 🤗
N what an update!! I totally loved a jealous Asad!!!!
Finally some progress!!! :)

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anushreemishra

@anushreemishra

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 10 years ago

Congratulations on thread no.2🥳nd well coming to the update it was amazing,mindblowing,

fantabulous...i am njoying the friendship between zoya nd hamzah a lot...and asad getting jealous is a treat to read😊...and the kiss it was haaawwwt😉i am also turning crimson read after reading their passionate kissing session😳...update soon...and have i said i just loved it...loved it loved it loved it

Edited by anushreemishra - 10 years ago

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