FF: Episodes(UPDATED) *Chapter-9*)Pg-17 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: blueocean

Arnav really was a monster in the first few episodes...

You portray everyone's emotions correctly
great update!!!
P.S- I cant wait to read the poolside kiss😆

thank you I was really afraid that my reactions were out of character for the characters but I am glad you don't think so and of course the poolside Kiss😉 but I will kind of be omitting some intimate scenes in the future like Arnav Singh Raizada once said "Kisi ko yeh janana zaruri nahi hai ki jab hum dono akele rehtein hai hum kya kartein hai."
 

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome concept...
loved it...
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Posted: 10 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome hun
But i think u shud include characters reactons more? Just a suggestion lol xx
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Posted: 10 years ago
Bahaha!this is great! I loved it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
trust me you guys will be shocked as to what he did after this confrontation
hence making sure that creep entered her life
awww he will finally know that it was him who caused snake to enter her life and make their lives hell
well of course she want committing suicide but making jalebis
remember her stress buster
funny he wanted to make sure that tape wasnt released and then he did
where did his brain go on holiday at that moment
you will see the impact of your actions of releasing that tape
goons harassing her and her being sent to delhi
see thats why she picked fight with ya
as due to you her mom was mad at her
wonder if they will be able to see what he has done to her
awww jadoo is so funny right
ASR was and will be rakshash to KKGSR jadoo
cheers for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Love it!
Thx for the pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
That was so nice... Loved it!!,
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Posted: 10 years ago
great update!!!
And it seems that Jaadu doesn't really like Arnav...
The Dargah scene is one of my favourites and you have written it very well
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aweaome... Of course... Not alien but a rakshas... Only khushi can call him that... Lol

a request... Next time on, please mention the page no. on which chapter is posted so that it is easy to find