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dancersqueen

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Posted: 13 January 2014 at 8:32am | IP Logged
thank u so much 4 updating the epilogue...
now ans to ur questions...

1.nandu... because she is a fighter, strong hai, independent hai...

2.nope...

3.love hai... friendship hai...

4.don't know...

5. nothing...

6.interesting...

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Posted: 14 January 2014 at 4:24am | IP Logged
amazing epilogueTongue

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Posted: 15 January 2014 at 10:45am | IP Logged

Hey! I know I pm'ed you about my thoughts on your SS but I thought (now that I'm on a laptop and can actually type on a proper keyboardLOL) I'll post here also and even answer your questions :)

Like I've said, wonderful SS by youClap well done. I thoroughly enjoyed the read. It kept my interest and attention from the very beginning. It's a simple yet complicated story. You had very intriguing characters, each of whom casted their own light on the story. I especially liked the length and am glad I came across it once it was finished so I could go straight to the end all in one sitting. Great SSStar

1. your favourite character? and why?

I have to say Nandini because of her strength and valour.  And Adhish for just being there, supportive and argumentativeLOL I enjoyed his bits. He had this caring thing going even though it wasn't overtly obvious.

2. do you hate any character? and why?

I not hated but disliked Yash's judgmental and opinionated behavior. The man had a right not to return Nadini's feelings but behaving like an ass wasn't necessary. Though he did eventually come around. I do admit though I liked the consistency of his character. 

3. whats so special about this Story?

Hmmm, I would say it's simplicity woven into the complications of her addiction and feelings. 

4. Can you relate to this story or do you feel its just fiction and such things never happen in real world?

I think its a bit of both. The main idea (the addiction...crush) is definitely something you can find around you.  But some of the events that took place for the story itself seemed more likely to happen in fiction than reality.

5. anything that you want to say about Nandini's decisions?

I for one am glad of her decision of life partner. 

6. describe the story in three words! Smile

Intriguing

Creative

Enjoyable




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Posted: 15 January 2014 at 11:20pm | IP Logged
well this last part was awesome

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Posted: 21 January 2014 at 7:56am | IP Logged
extremely sorry di for this late lateef commentLOL
coming to updates
i didn't wanted it to end ever Cry
frankly i loved this one lyk anything it was closest to my heart and at its end i cried Cry
when i was reading the 15 update
i thought u are going to kill nandu and after that i had one thing in my mind if u did so i won't talk to u ever seriously wala Angry
the way nandu acted in that situation i don't think someone who was so dangerously injured would do that
hats off to her Clap
and nandu's and adhish love story hayee took my heart awayHeart
loved it
last chappy the way u described nandu's feeling awesomeClap
that wish was ahmazing
i loved it
i thought the man was "adhish"
main poore tym chapy padhte hue ye soch rahi thi ki ye ladka kahin yash toh nahiConfused
epilogue was hell confusingConfused till last i was thinking ki nandini ne actually mein shaadi kisse ki yaar fir pata chala it was adhishLOL
the way u described it di seriously
i loved i jsut wanna give u a hug
that sketch book description aah i so so loved it can't comprehend and the ending
mashallah it was fantastic i was smiling widely at the last
thanks for writing such a beautiful story
i got addiceted to it
i m going to miss it alot


1. your favourite character? and why?
nandu she is my fav character and the way she did all those stupid thing just for her crush is what connected me more to her ad i truly think ki its alll coz of nandu that i have started doing all crazy i can be for my crush and i love nandu alot her simplicity, her carziness makes me just go proud i don't know why


2. do you hate any character? and why?
i hated yash coz wo nandu ke saath itna rude behave karta tha and atlast he realised that he likes her

3. whats so special about this Story?

the addiction the craziness it had everything someone feeling for her frnd, crush and all the flavours of a perfect story

4. Can you relate to this story or do you feel its just fiction and such things never happen in real world?

yes maine toh bohut relate kia hai and i do think people can be crazy like nandu, they can be rude lyk yash and they can be sweet lyk adhish


5. anything that you want to say about Nandini's decisions?
i m happy with her decision i believe that first love is the last love of ur lyf and she choosed adhish i loved it


6. describe the story in three words!
truly  amazing addiction


i m going to miss it Cry

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Posted: 25 January 2014 at 4:55am | IP Logged
beautiful...!!

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Posted: 26 January 2014 at 8:29am | IP Logged
i love this ff a lot because it mostly make me feel related to my self. +and regarding your question...
Its Nandini and Yash who are soul mates for me.. Not that Adi doesn't love nandini, but still its Yash, to whom Nandini feel connected to, its Yash whom Nandini felt drawn to. Nandini says Adi is her love of life, but no, I mostly feel its Adi who loved Nandini and Nandini reciprocated his love in a way more friendly way because she know what it feels to be rejected. . And no I doesn't hate any character in this story. And no way its a fiction for me, because Its more related to my life, and when I saw you saying you wrote it after an incidence in your life, I started to doubt if ever youy are one of my friends. But later , I understood no. Wink
And nandini's choice, No I can't blame her, Yahs loved Kriti, and Kriti did the same to Yash, but Yash liked Nandini more than Kriti, its an undescribable feel;ing, and same with nandini too. She loved Adi, but her soul mate was Yash. Its a story which is epic and If you give any other ending the story would have been injustified. 

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Posted: 01 February 2014 at 3:16pm | IP Logged
hey i liked ur story but still confusion is there hope u will explain Nandini's point of view what was going in her mind did she sacrificed her love or found in Adhesh its bit tricky every option seems to be perfect plz let ur know why she chose Adhesh over Yash at last

ur story was very emotional and easy to connect will thx was such wonderful storySmile

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