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Posted: 25 July 2013 at 10:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Anjori

30 MINUTES ... !!!
i mean seriuosly and ht eguy didn't even notice ... lol :D 
the update was awesome ... <3 <3 

yess 30 mins! and nope guy didn't notice Wink

Thank you Tongue

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Posted: 25 July 2013 at 10:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by yogini64

are u serious-- u gonna give us daily dose?? Shocked

u have tooo... now that u've chopped its size LOL

ohh.. she had a crush on him from 3 years??... really?? Stern Smile

now I know.. why she was so shattered Ouch

30 mins... whoa... itne me to clg authorities ko bhi pata chal gya hoga ROFL

update soon.. Tongue


i have decided so.. since its vacations im free.. but once college starts i will make sure for alternate day updates Embarrassed

4 years dear.. 2004,2005,2006,2007 LOL

jaan.. meri khud experience hai ..ROFL kisi ko pata nahi chalta Wink

thanksss for your reviews! Embarrassed
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Posted: 25 July 2013 at 10:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by crazysky

oye thodi size ki izzat rakh le 
behen
it irritataed mein 
chapter update tha ya paragraph update
??
chal update ki story toh thik thi but thoda aur length bada jyada ni toh thoda bahot warna mujhe lagaga ki roz prologue padh rahi hu


i know its irritating.. but the thing is if im making it SS.. then you wont enjoy the fun of loving someone secretly.. that's why i changed it to drabbles.. and i don't want to make it a comeplete long story either.. because this will have a sequel too LOL 

tere liye bada liya length Tongue

thanks for your comments dear Embarrassed
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Posted: 25 July 2013 at 10:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lovely7010

it started on 11th july and I had no idea about it :O

anyways wonderful story...

loving it

thanku so much mannu Embarrassed
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Posted: 25 July 2013 at 10:42am | IP Logged


Part 2

 

Sitting exactly one row ahead in boy's side he looked even more handsome while shuffled his silky black hair he turned around smiling at his friends. She wondered is it possible for her to stare at him for 30 mins? No way! "madam.. if you have finished your spying session can we move to canteen? I am hungry!!" meghana said getting up from her seat. That's when Nandini noticied the official inauguration was done and everyone had dispersed.. Nandini bit her lip and turned to him. but he was gone.

"Oye! Tell me one thing!? Are you hypnotized?" abhi asked her. Nandini slowly punched him on his arm "shut up!!" she said. Kriti came infront "No No tell us na. because you were so indulged in staring at someone that you didn't even notice Mrs.Dhanraj warning you with her looks.. thank me that I brought you back to this world darling!" Nandini glared at her and pinched hard "why did you do it! Huh.. now where will I search him!??" she whined like a baby. "Dude I am telling you something is wrong with her! Its not like first time she is seeing a guy and going all gaga over him, but look at her! She is being literally dramatic!" Meghana said clutching abhi's shirt.. Kriti sighed "Signs of falling in Crush-Mania" "What? Whats that?" Abhi and Meghana asked her. "Addiction. Obsession dude!! Insane-ness!" Kriti said as if explaning a horror movie. All the while the dear Nandini was bitting her nails wondering "30 mins ? really? Naaah not possible!"

The long queue wasn't moving forward. Abhi, Kriti and Meghana who had taken their food turned around to see Nandini standing still without budging an inch. Nandini was holding her plate and someone was serving her Chicken. And Nandini wasn't moving ahead instead she was standing there open-mouthed looking at someone from opposite counter. Kriti pulled her out of the queue after hurriedly getting her plate filled. Nandini's eyes was still stuck somewhere at the opposite counter. Abhi Kriti and Meghana sighed "That's IT! We can't take it anymore!!" Meghana said stamping nandini's foot "OUCH!! GUYS!" nandini winced.

"Yaar.. How nice was our Nandini.. Sweet funny smart and a complete Nut! But now I feel she has become one of those Love-stuck-teenage heroins from old Bollywood movies. Nandini Limits yaar! We know you are Very I mean V-e-r-y D-r-a-m-a-t-i-c and we love that about you.. but its getting over-dose! Wake Up Buddy! Wake Up!!!" Abhi said shaking nandini a little.

"Have you ever felt as if losing yourself seeing someone? Have you ever felt your eyes not obeying you? Have you felt losing your gravity and flying in air seeing someone smile?" Nandini asked placing her chin on her palm, her elbows resting on the table.

Abhi Kriti and Meghana shook their heads wide eyed and completely confused; All three mentally making a note to book a bed for Nandini in Mental Asylum at the earliest.

"I am feeling so.." she said closing her eyes smiling dreamingly. Exactly like those Love-stuck-teenager of old Bollywood movies!

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i have increased the length on request lekin isse zyada nahi haan LOL

yaar thoda iss story ko promoto karo na.. it will inspire me to write more! Embarrassed


And and all who are saying 30 mins staring at someone not possible let me tell you. I have experience. Been There. Done That! similar situation but it was seminar hall and my supposed crush was sitting in front of me 2 chairs to my right. his left profile was clearly visible to me and enough for me to stare at him for 30 mins. Trust me None of lectures or even the speaker noticed and not even my crush himself. LOL so yes.. its possible.. Wink ab meri is so called crush ke baare mein zyada math puchna.. there is nothing anymore except that he is still my crush and always will be! Embarrassed


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Posted: 25 July 2013 at 10:25pm | IP Logged
it was simply awesome
n cute
just loved it
i am loving nandini 
haye kya crush hai!! 
maine khud 15 min ka record set kiya hai in staring session

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yaar this one was superb!!!
i have experienced it tooo...!! never counted how many minutes though LOL

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