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Posted: 17 July 2013 at 9:04pm | IP Logged
thank you guys sorry for keeping u waited.. will update in a day or two.. my laptop was under repair and lost all my data.. need time fix some stuffs in this Wacko

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Posted: 20 July 2013 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
Okay now coming to this piece of art. Di are you even in your senses???????? Do you have any idea of how brilliant a writer you have turned yourself into. Compare your earlier works with this, you yourself will feel the difference. Now coming to this, I love it when there is no FAN fiction but just FICTION. And you have really improved a lot in your way to depict emotions. I can't believe you are still the same nams  as one year back. The way and the use of words to depict the emotion of the girl was fab. Di trust me you have improved a lot. And if you continue writing fabulously then a day will come when I would have to come to you for taking your autograph and then you will just shrug and go away without paying heed to the request of this innocent kid.ROFL


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Posted: 20 July 2013 at 9:22pm | IP Logged
beta apne aap ko itna compliments mat do.. coz u are a kid lekin kahi se b innocent nahi! Shaitaan ho tum.. and i guess iss baat we had a gud power packed argument isnt it ? ROFL

and thanku finally yahan padaarke apne khoobsoorat haaton se type karke comment karne ke liye.. muje toh bilcul yakeen nahi tha ki iss janam mein teri comment dekne ko milegi LOL

Thankkuu baccha Hug u know i love u so much! muhaaxx :*

and tuje autograph chahiye toh abhi se puchna de hi deti hun, kya pata kal mein milu ya na milu toh tu bahut busy hogi Wink VIP jo hai Tongue 

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Posted: 21 July 2013 at 7:15am | IP Logged
update?
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Posted: 21 July 2013 at 7:51am | IP Logged
thoda wait kar na Ermm

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Posted: 21 July 2013 at 8:54pm | IP Logged
Nams... 
I am wonderign my self, how I missed such a good writer
Ur stories are what we can connect to easily
and I love this SS so muhc
please update soon dear 

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Posted: 22 July 2013 at 10:31am | IP Logged
yup im updating just wait sometime.. Embarrassed
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Part One


13 September 2004

Parthibha'04 The seven day cultural fest had just begun. Nandini yawned out of boredom. The-so-called-few-lines-of-speech didn't seemed to end anytime soon even after 25 mins. There was nothing cultural in this cultural fest! "my ears are gonna die soon!" Abhi roared. Nandini kriti and meghana agreed with him. the official commencement ceremony had proved to be the Baap-of-boredom!

As her friends tried to sleep in each other's shoulder nandini wondered 'there is nothing special about today as it was written in her horoscope!'

Who knew within the split of seconds her life would take a 360 degree turn?

She turned around to see other students and her eyes caught a person. He was laughing with his friends on something. And she felt her heart race. He wasn't the hottest guy she ever saw, but he was one those guys whom you would feel like seeing again and again to know the depth of his expressions. She didn't know for how long she kept staring at him. she just couldn't take her eyes off! She just couldn't! Black shirt complimented his dusky complexion which made him look like he had come to steal her heart away.

Kriti pinched nandini so hard that her skin turned red, thank god blood didn't ooze out! "Nandini? Whom are you staring at since 30 mins?" kriti asked her. And nandini wondered "what the f**k?" she was shamelessly staring at a guy since 30 freaking mins without moving her eyes off him? IMPOSSIBLE!

'.. And that one look at him.. her life had changed!

may be her horoscope didn't lie afterall!


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Thats all for today. Please do leave your reviews!

and yes its no more a short story, Instead its drabble series Embarrassed

With love

nams! Tongue



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