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..nams.. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 July 2013 at 6:46am | IP Logged


-Chahun Mein Ya Na..


August 1st 2007


She looked at his eyes, they were red. His eys had lost its usual calmness and intensity. He was angry far beyond she could have imagined. She felt herself shiver as the thunder roared in the sky. She couldn't fathom what exactly frightened her; the thunder or his anger?

"Just Just Remember One freaking thing! If you ever come infront of my eyes, I don't know what will I do! And for god sake Stop speaking about me to anyone!! I feel disgusted to even think You like me! and more than that Because of you my brother is angry on me! Just STAY OUT OF OUR LIVES! You got that?" with that said he walked off.

It was the first time she had seen him face to face, so close! But what happened? Her heart broke into millions of pieces. She didn't realize her eyes were tearing, she didn't realize it was raining.

Her friends ran over to her, shaking her and trying to bring her back to the world. She was just numb. All her mistake was having a huge crush on a guy whom she hardly spoke ever! But of whom she knew almost every detail through her friends! But then again having a crush on someone is completely and solely one's choice! No one, No one has a right to question it or ask her to change it! isn't it? then how dare he ask her to forget him? how dare he ask her not to like him? she wasn't even madly in love with him for god sake! It was just a crush isn't it?

"Nandini!!!! Are you fine dear? See buses are going come on.. lets leave.." Kriti tried to pull her.

Nandini withdrew her hands, took her bag that fallen down and sat on the nearby bench.

She just isolated herself from the world. It was past 6pm. All the college buses had left the campus. Only campus guards were roaming here and there. Two of the guards had asked her to go home, she just nodded at them. She had been insulted infront of whole college! How would she even deal with this?

When the clock struck 8pm, one of the guards asked her to leave again. They told her they would be closing the gates, they even tried to call her parents, but the line was unavailable. And before they could call any college authorities she walked towards her home alone.

The bus conductor had to shake her 3 times before she got down from the bus! Thank her stars or her fate, she had randomly climbed the right bus. God Forbid what would have happened if she climbed the wrong bus that too at this hour of night? She shivered remembering how the two men in the bus-stand were oogling at her, that's why she climbed the first bus that had arrived.

When she opened her house gates she just fell on the ground. Her limbs weak, her eyes swollen, her hands heavy! And she was unconscious.



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Nams! Embarrassed

Edited by ..nams.. - 17 February 2014 at 12:38am

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jas_ArSha_MaNan IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 July 2013 at 6:57am | IP Logged
 yipee me first...
i no it was a small update so koi bhi sabse pehle pad leta lekin
fir bhi first to first hota hainWink...
now cuming to the update...
very interesting
is it sum kind of diary entry ...no  or yes ... i m confused...Confused
but jo bhi hain ... the update was amzing
just superb
luvd the way u expressed the update
very well written...\\awesome di
do c**tinue it and update soon

Edited by jas112 - 11 July 2013 at 7:01am

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nature2 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 11 July 2013 at 7:10am | IP Logged
love it

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sumimita IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 July 2013 at 7:51am | IP Logged
totally different and unique...
loved it...dearSmile
thnks for the pm

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-FrozenRain- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 July 2013 at 9:14am | IP Logged
Nams you wrote this..This is mind blowing...
ANd and the feeling o pain in the girl so nicely expressed..
This is great..And haan keep updating it fast  <3

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crazysky IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 July 2013 at 9:29am | IP Logged
its awesome
loved the story line

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dancersqueen IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 July 2013 at 9:54am | IP Logged
nice concept...loved it...Smile

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luv_arsha IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 July 2013 at 10:36am | IP Logged
its superb...loved it

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