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Guys' I'm planning to start a new ff' the ff wud be on etf'
every1 of the members will be having an imp part to play' arakshi shriza raesha
shreetu shree-sakshi-chottu-aisha-liza samjun ''' everything wud b there'' I'm
posting the prologue' this is my first venture into the writing field.. pls
tell me whether I should continue..

"Why does he has to risk his life always" shree wondered
aloud as they entered the conference room' He was actually reflecting what
every1 of his fellow team members' his friends' were thinking. None of them
knew the ans.. Well except for one among them ' Sakshi had noticed something
strange in what happened few hours ago'

Few hours ago'

"damn it rawte' har cheez ki ek had hoti hain.. tumhari jaan
bhi jaa sakthi thi.." fretted rathore.. well.. rathore had every ryt to be worried' his once
friend arjun was hell bent on making his life miserable.. everytime arjun does
something that wud have rathod's bp go
up.. he wud jump into a swimming pool from a 50m height just to make sure that
the criminal learnt a lesson or he wud get into a bus which has a time bomb
ticking away merrily with just 30 sec left for explosion.. everytime arjun
risked his life rathod - or shall we say
sam in him
- wanted to go up to him give him a tight slap for risking his
life.. but if he did that or anything that wud show that he cared for 'The
rawte' rawte wud again disappear from
his life.. (stressing on the word "again")..
a reason why rathod does not want to be sam again..

"Meri jaan' wo toh kab ki jaa chuki hain" arjun said and
walked away from there as if what he said was jst a weather report.. he never
knew his pain caused pain in many hearts.. he was an akdu sadu etc' bt the team
loved him and cared for him.. shree and chotu always made fun of him among
themselves.. bt they never allowed any1 other than the team do that.. aisha and
liza obeyed whatever crazy things that he made them do without even thinking
twice' they respected him.. rathod...
let's get back to wht he does for his dear rawte later.. because it cannot be
explained very easily..

Then there was SAKSHI. She made sure that he get his cutting
chai so that the hectic work never get the toll on him. She observes whatever
he does closely. At first she never understood this man. There was a pain in
his eyes and he never smiled which irked her. Bt now she has started respecting
his silence. Bt she cud never accept the hatred he had for happiness. That is
when she decided however risky it was she wud bring the smile on his face. She
knew it was difficult and even after many SYS sessions she was hell bent on
fulfilling her promise to herself. If a weak girl like her can sport a
smile amidst all the pain she has been through why cant 'the arjun suryakanth
rawte ' do it.. that is what she thought. Little did she know whatever strength she
lacked physically was present mentally in her..
and it was vice versa for arjun'..

Done with the prologue.. will get into details about liza
aisha chotu shree's relation wid arjun in later parts' pls don't thnk dat arjun
is gonna be portrayed as a weak character.. every1 is strong in their own ways
in my story'

Edited by amswathi93 - 05 November 2013 at 9:01am

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Prologue: page 1
Part 1: page 2
Part 2: page 4
Part 3: page 6
Part 4:page 7
Part 5:page 9
Part 6:page 11
Part 7:page 13
Part8:page 14
Part 9:page 17
Part 10 :page 18 
Part 11 : page 19

Edited by swathi93 - 07 August 2013 at 8:58am

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Posted: 10 July 2013 at 9:58am | IP Logged
love the prologue Smile
cont soon..

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Posted: 10 July 2013 at 10:07am | IP Logged
Loved the prologue
Cont soon
Do pm me

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Posted: 10 July 2013 at 11:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by live

love the prologueSmile
cont soon..

Thanks... Smile
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Originally posted by princess2507

Loved the prologue
Cont soon
Do pm me

Thanks ... Will definitely pm u... Smile
Mimi2609 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 July 2013 at 11:06am | IP Logged
sounds very interesting,please continueSmile

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NSohi13 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 July 2013 at 11:22am | IP Logged
Hey nice concept and beautiful story :)
Update and continue soon :)

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