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Jane kyu bar bar man me ye aise ghum raha tha ki mai ese likhe bina nahi rah saki.. Bas jaisa chal raha tha waisa hi likhti gayi.. Thoda dukhi dukhi sa likh diya hai per jo bhi hai lekin ese agar aage tak likh saki to eski sad ending to kabhi nahi karungi, kyuki RN ki sad ending bardast jo nahi hoti...


Defeated Love...!!


Prologue



"Maddy tum humesha kehti ho na ki pyaar wo nahi jiske liye kuch badla jaye.. Balki pyaar wo hai jo imperferction ko hi perfect samjh ker jeeye. But look at you, you've changed.. changed a lot! Aur wo bhi kiske liye? Us Raj ke liye jisne kabhi tumhri parwah nahi ki. Tumne mere pyaar ko selfish kaha tha ek din, to aaj tum batao ki selfish kaun hai? Aur kya tumhra pyaar khudgarz nahi hai?"

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"Pata hai Raj, jab tum mere saath rehte ho to mujhe baki kisi chiz ki khwahish nahi reh jati. Mujhe aisa lagta hai.. aisa lagta hai ki mai complete ho gayi hu. Tum nahi jante Raj ki tum mere liye kya ho.."


"Kyu kerti tum ho mujhse etni mohabbat?"


"Shyad tumse mohabbat kerna hi meri zindagi ka maksad hai!"


"Mai kafi practicle ensaan hu aur tumhe pasand bhi kerta hu. Per meri zindagi ka maksad tum nahi ho Naina... Aur.., aur tum bhi mujhe apni zindagi ka maksad mat banao.. Tum es rishte ke baare me ek baar firse soch lo kyuki mere sath zindagi guzarna aasan nahi hoga.."


"Soch liya.."


"Kya?"


"Yahi ki.. mujhe mushkile pasand hain..."

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"I love you, Naina! Mujhe nahi pata tha ki zindagi tumhre aane se yu badal jayegi.."


"Achha! Es practicle ensaan ko aakhir pyaar ho hi gaya. Tum to ese bevkufi kehte the na Raj?"


"Per mai nahi janta tha ki bevkiyaan etni pyaari bhi ho sakti hain.. Werna ye mai kabhi nahi kehta. Please mujhe kabhi chod ker mat chale jana.."


Ye tumhe kya ho gaya hai Raj? Kaisi baate ker rahe ho? Mai kahi nahi jane wali tumhe chodker, albatta tum mujhe chod ker jana chahte ho.."


"Aage se aisa kabhi na kehna.. mai tumhe kabhi nahi chod sakta.. tumhre bina to mai apni zindagi soch bhi nahi sakta .."


"Sorry Raj! Mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum etne serious ho jaoge. I promise you Raj, chahe jo ho jaye but i won't leave you.."

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"Haan hu mai selfish Raj ke pyaar me! Wo mujhse pyaar nahi kerta to kya hua? Per mai to usse bahut pyaar kerti hu, aur mai usse pyaar kerna kabhi nahi chod sakti..."


"To tumne mujhe ye kyu kaha ki mai tumse pyaar kerna chod du? Mai bhi tumse pyaar kerna nahi chod sakta.. chahe tum mujhse pyaar karo ya na karo.."

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"Bas Raj! Bahut hua. Tum thik kehte the.. Humesha se sahi kehte the.. Pyaar sach me bahut badi bevkufi hai.. "

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"Tum us ladke ke liye apne Baba ko chod ker jane ko taiyaar ho na?"


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"To fir theek hai! Meera! Meera!"


"Tum apni beti se kah do ki hume eski us ladke Raj se shadi manjoor hai. Hum aaj abhi enki shadi karayenge.."

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"Humne tumhri shaadi kara di hai. Tumhri her khwahishon ke sath sath aaj tumhri ye khwahish bhi humne puri ki. Ab humari sari responsibility khatm hue. Ab mai nahi chahta ki tum ek aur pal ke liye yaha raho. Hum tumhri shakal bhi nahi dekhna chahte..."


"Baba.. please!"


"Meera! Esse keh do yaha se ye dono ab chale jaye.."

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"Don't worry Naina, hum unhe mana lenge.. Aaj wo humse naraz hain, per kal jarur man jayenge.."


"Wo kabhi nahi manenge Raj! Nahi manenge! Wo mere Baba hain, mai unhe janti hu, wo nahi manenge..!!"

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"Naina, you are the best thing in my life.. ever happen to me!"


"But you know what Raj, pyaar kerne me tum mujhse kabhi nahi jeet sakte.. Jitna pyaar mai kerti hu tumse, utna pyaar tum soch bhi nahi sakte.."

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"Wo tumhe kabhi samjh nahi payega Maddy.. Wo shyad kabhi tumhe pyaar ker bhi le per tumhe kabhi samjh nahi sakega.."


"Please Aakash! Tum mere liye apni zindagi throw na karo.. Tum mere bahut achhe dost ho aur mai tumhe es halat me nahi dekh sakti.."


"Aur ab dekhogi bhi nahi.."


"Whaatt??"


"Nahi maddy umm..Naina sirf Naina..! Tum maddy nahi rahi ab.. aur tum ghabrao nahi, mai kuch aisa waisa nahi kerne ja raha. Bas tum meri shakal aakhiri baar dekh rahi ho.."

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"Jo bachhe apne maa-baap ko yu chod ker chale jaye, wo kabhi khush nahi reh sakte..."

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"Her waqt ye childsh harkatein achhi nahi lagti. Please grow up! Her cheez ka ek waqt hota hai, time hota hai aur tum na waqt dekhti ho aur na hi kuch aur.. have some sense Naina! You are not a newly wedded girl..! I mean tumhre es cheap romantic date ke liye mai kal ka din nikal raha tha na? To aaj meri meating cancel kyu karayi? Aisa kaun sa argent surprise thaa tumhra?"


"Happy Birthday Raj!! And you'r right, ye childish tha.. cheap tha.. Thanks ye batane ke liye!"

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"Baba! Baba! I'm so sorry Baba..!! Where are you Baba..! Kaha ho Baba aap!! Your Naina needs you.. please use maaf ker do.."

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"I'm leaving Raj!"

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"Mujhe use rokna chahiye tha. Maine der ker di.. bahut der..!"

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Past me guzre wo sare pal jisne Naina ki zindagi ko ekdam se badal dala tha, jaise ek film ki tarah uske dilo dimag me ek baad ek chalte ja rahe the.. Aaj wo jaise apna sab kuch jaise kahi kho aayi thi. Wo sare log jinko usne jane unjane me hurt kiya tha, aaj use yaad aa rahe the. Wo do log jo uske Ma-Baba the, jise usne etna majbur ker diya tha ki jiske karan wo uski shakal bhi nahi dekhna chahte the, wo aaj unhi ke paas to ja rahi hai.. Wo log hi to aise hain jo uske etna hurt kerne ke baad bhi use jagah de sakte hain apni zindagi mein.. Werna jis ensaan ke pyaar me wo blind hoker ghum rahi thi, jiske liye usne dusron ke emotions ki parwah nahi ki wo aaj use yu bhatakte payenge to sirf mujh per hasenge.. Haan, unhe mujh per hasna hi chahiye.. Aur Aakash, wo mujhe aise dekh le to wo kya mehsus karega? Nahi nahi, wo use face nahi kar sakti..

Per wo face ker kise sakti hai? Ja to rahi hai maa-baba ke paas, wo use aise dekhenge to un per kya guzaregi? Jabki mere karan to un per kafi kuch pehle se guzar chuka hai.. Apne bachhe ko takleef me dekhna kya hota hai, ye ab samjh payi hoon. Ager pehle jana hota to.. to na maa baba ko dukhi kerti aur na hi khud ko aaj etna akela mehsus kerti.. Mujhe maafi nahi milni chahiye.. mujhe bilkul bhi maafi nahi milni chahiye..


Wo enhi khyalo me besudh chali ja rahi thi. Fir wo us shaksh ke bare me sochne lagi, jiske liye usne sab kuch chod diya.. Apna ghar, apne log, apna carrier, aur shayad apna vazood bhi.. Vazood yani apna Astitva tak wo chod chuki thi us shaks ke liye jisse usne sabse jyada pyaar kiya... Uske pyaar me na sirf apno ka dil dukhaya balki pura ka pura apne ko badal dala. Aur ye sab kiske liye? Sirf uska pyaar pane ke liye.. Raj ka pyar...

Link for this song is below..

https://soundcloud.com/vidhi1989/ashk-hai


"Na jeene de mujhe

Na mujhko merne de,

Palko pe jo thehra Ashq hai..


Gehra hai sagar se,

Ooncha hai amber se,

Ye ishq hai ya koi ashq hai..

Ashq hai ya ishq hai,,

Ishq hai ashq hai..."


Use koi hosh nahi tha ki kab usne taxy ki aur kab wo usme baithi, bas beete lamhe hi uske dilo dimag me chaye hue the.. Khushi ke kuch thode pal usne jo Raj ke sath beetaye the wo use jyada takleef de rahe the..


"Na koi justju, na koi aarzu,,

Ye aag hai, ya koi rahguzar?

Ye meri zindagi hai kyu sharab me?

Ek dhul me kho gayi hai nazar..!

Ashq hai..."


Un dino jab Raj kafi jhagadne laga tha usse, baat bebaat wo usse kafi ukhada rehta tha..


"Na jane faisala hai kyu naseeb ka?

Jo sath hai, nahi hai wo mera..

Jo mere paas hai kyu mujhse dur hai?

Ye ishq hai ya koi ashq hai..?


Ashq hai.."


Wo aaj use chod aayi thi.. Jisse usne ye vada kiya tha ki wo use kabhi nahi chodegi, wo vada tod ker chali aayi thi. Wo janti thi ki uske chale jane se Raj ko aaj badi takleef pahuchi hai aur wo shayad ese seh na pa raha ho per aaj use chodker aana hi wo pehla sahi kadam tha jo usne etne salo me uthaya tha.. Ye rishta shayad bana hi tha yu tut jane ko.. Sach hi hai pyaar hi wo akeli cheez nahi jo kisi ensaan ko dusre ensaan se jo de..


Khud ko koste, beete lamho ko sochte sochte wo apne ghar pahuch aayi thi..


"Madam, meter check ker lijiye.. Pure 150 rs ho gaye hain.."


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"Wo tumhe chod gayi.. she left you.!! Kya bacha ab tumhre paas? Haan? Bolo? Jawab do? Kya hua bol nahi sakte? Wo ensaan aaj chali gayi aur tumne use rokne tak ki koshish nahi ki? Kaise ensaan ho tum aakhir? Jo apna sab kuch tumhre liye chod aayi thi, aaj chali gayi hai.. Tumne use roka kyu nahi?"


"I know my Naina.. Usne mujhse promise kiya hai wo mujhe chod ker nahi jayegi.. Wo mere bina reh hi nahi sakti.. Wo janti hai mai bhi nahi reh sakta uske bagair.. Wo nahi ja sakti.. nahi ja sakti.. sirf dara rahi hai mujhe.. wo aa jayegi.. wo aayegi.. aayegi..."


Raj Naina ke jane ke baad nashe me apne aap se hi baate kiye ja raha tha. Cheekh cheekh ker wo kahe ja raha tha ki wo aa jayegi per uska man kahi na kahi ye janta tha ki wo nahi aayegi.. kabhi nahi aayegi..


"Wo aayegi.. wo apna promise nahi tod sakti.. mujhe nahi chod sakti..!"

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"Na jeene de mujhe

Na mujhko merne de

Palkon jo thehra ashq hai..."


Ashq hai...



Edited by Vidhi1989 - 10 July 2013 at 6:01am

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nice start yaar...ClapClapClap

Do continue plz..

I'll wait..


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nice start...
Clap

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Posted: 10 July 2013 at 3:22am | IP Logged
hi
one more ff on RN from u 
great dear
the prologue seems interesting and it was clealed that raj-naina are husband wife who love eahc other but due to some misunderstanding they got separated 
plz cont soon and pm me

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awesum
superb
mindblowing

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nice

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Nice startSmile

Continue soonSmile

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Posted: 11 July 2013 at 5:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nivi26

nice start yaar...ClapClapClap

Do continue plz..

I'll wait..
Thanks...

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