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Raizada and Sons - Note on Page 105 (Page 2)

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Posted: 09 July 2013 at 3:32am | IP Logged
Viren is such a bas... Feeling so bad for Arhi..hope they come out strong from this..
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Posted: 09 July 2013 at 3:40am | IP Logged
Congrats for the new thread K.I felt very happy to see an update in R&S...thank u ...
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Posted: 09 July 2013 at 4:01am | IP Logged
res!
unres!
first things first!!! Welcome back and congratulations on the new thread!!!Smile
now im so glad suraj is trying to med things with lavanya and giving her space at the same time!
i loved the arnav khushi part bt im just scared abt what viren would do next!
i hope all goes well!
continue soon please!


Edited by cherrybloom1 - 09 July 2013 at 4:15am
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"He knew one of the women well, and had shared his universe with her. They had seen the same mountains, and the same trees, although each of them had seem them differently. She knew his weaknesses, his moments of hatred, of despair. Yet she was there at his side. They shared the same universe." 

Glad Suraj realized his mistakes and wants to rectify it. Lavanya deserves it. One sided love is quite painful and along with this suffering she was constantly reminded that it's not her who he wants but Khushi.
They both need each other as they are similar in too many ways. She understands him like no other woman ever will. Since the dynamics of their relationship are changing, she is right in asking for some time. You explained this transaction beautifully through the shift from having sex to making love.

Really happy to have this story back.



Edited by IronButterfly - 09 July 2013 at 4:50am
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Posted: 09 July 2013 at 4:38am | IP Logged
Good to see you back Kalyani!
It's funny how some stories become a habit and this is one of em
Got to know where it goes
Hope all is well with you
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Posted: 09 July 2013 at 4:39am | IP Logged
Awesome update kalyaani...!!Smile
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Posted: 09 July 2013 at 4:51am | IP Logged
congrats for the new thread..and the update was simply too good..very well written...Suraj and Lavanya's scene was good..Suraj  is mending fences with Lavanya...that is really nice...on the other hand Arnav, Khushi and their relationship is very adorable and it is heartwarming to read about the two of them..hmm..so the storm has started making its way in Arnav, Khushi's life; well no doubt the storm will shake Arnav and Khushi's life but I believe together Arnav and Khushi can withstand any storm coming their way..and I really wish Suraj, Viren and Viren's father pay for the sins they have committed sometime or the other and I hope KBV and Arnav make them pay and extract their revenge...really good going Kalyaani...Arnav, Khushi have indeed come a long way...that is really nice...the fanfic is progressing very well..keep it up...thank you for the update...and please do continue soon..waiting for the next update eagerly...Smile

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